NOTE: This is a HD remaster of the original story that I posted over two years ago. Better grammar, better spelling, and more scenes :D If you want to check out the original, untouched story, click here.
Princess Aura is the kindest changeling you will ever meet. She's caring, compassionate, and wishes for a world of peace betweeen all races. Her kindess proves to be her downfall, when it is used against her in a plot to incite war between Equestria and the changeling kingdom.
Abandoned as a fily, and forced to live on her own and raise herself, Trixie knows the pain of being on your own, and the hardships faced when taking on the whole world by yourself. And when she sees these qaulities in a young filly she happens to meet one night, she is determined not to let the young filly experience the same pains that Trixie was forced to endure when growing up.
But when it seems associating with this filly will only endanger her life, will Trixie's resolve last?
Interesting, let's see how it will roll.
Dah i hate tragedy tag ;D
Ah yes, another something to read later before I go to bed. I look forward to reading it in...sadly about 8 hours.
Great, now there's a Changeling with Pinkie Sense. All in all, very good, very original. Please Continue!
Guess I'll read it after sleep. But the idea ain't bad.
Intresting, great so far, i am looking forward for more
great story, can't wait to see what happens next :D
I call it, Alex Sense! Quite original yes?
Awww, Trixie you little angel you
Like this story so far. Followed!
I only noticed 2 or 3 errors but I remember one. Assassinate, not assagnitate
Idea good, grammar bad.
While I like the story, you neexd to go through and read the whole thing again, you have a lot of misused homophones and several instances of missing or extra letter.
Getting an Editor and/or pre_reader woul help greatly.
oh wow this is actually quite exciing i can't wait to read more, i love how you gave the strongest brother the pinkie sense I wonder what he will think about that official order to kill his little sister signed by his mother and found in his brothers desk.
... This looks acceptable. Trevor shall follow it for awhile, to see where it leads one.
Ok, gotta agree with Quantum here. There are a few mistakes. Doesn't make the story unreadable, but it's noticeable.
Also, maybe you should mark flashbacks and present.
ooh i wonder what could be coming is it that changling assasin or is the assasin not a changling at all, also i think trixie will have a change of heart once she gets to know the little changling filly more
Nice story you have here! Hope to see more of it soon!
.. Sad Aura is sad... ;n;
DAT BASTARD! I LIKED ALEX! *Huffs*
Oh my god, its Hitler!
its ok alex has the pinkie sense as well as brute strength he shall make it through
i hope
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And Lenin!
Nice chapter! Hope Trixie gets to Aura in time and Alexander makes it!
As unlikely as it ever happening, you gotta wonder how Alexander would fare going on the run in Equestrian borders like Aura.
Mutations? Evolution? Sounds intresting...
VIVA LA REVALUTION!!!!!
When I started reading this story, I was fairly certain I would stop before the end of the first chapter. The parts with Trixie and Aura are interesting, but the politics are just draining.
You truely are a sick bastard torturing us like this why arent there more chapters out
i will have my revenge
"They know... nothing but lies."
"Also," cackles, "changelings keep crashing at Trixie's."
Damn would have been nice if the one that wound up in Canterol was Alexander but this is also good.
And now I wonder how Shark's personality develop throughout this whole story.
That chapter wasn't enough I want moar!
WTF I was hoping that it was Alexander that went to canterlot, Odysseusis an A-hole and should not be allowed to win
When he was talking about evolution and pulling something out...
I half expected a resident evil virus-type thingie.
"It is your decisions, and not your conditions, that determine your destiny" - Tony Robbins
can also be said that its not what you are but who you are that matters in life
lol that last line was funny and i think i might like trixies little surprise but applejack might be a little cross with her for it
EVERYONE GO ONTO A STORY AND PUSH THESE BUTTONS
UP, UP, DOWN, DOWN, LEFT, RIGHT, LEFT, RIGHT, B, A
DO THIS AND YOU WILL GET A SPECIAL SURPRISE NO JOKE
Needs moar chapters....*Squee*
this was very exciting and i take it that shock is there to make sure the elements of harmony don't get in the way
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Oh my god, it really works O_O I was just doing it sarcastically, but it actually did do something
Double chapters all the way
I'm getting a bit confused...
Is it Alex and Victoria that are the good ones? (with aura of corse)
And Odysseus is the evil one... Right?
1396383 Holy s***! It's glorious! Never thought it was serious, but I had to try it. Happy I did. This happy:
You give two chapters on the same day...
good, you shall go unpunished.
jokes aside, I really like this story so far. Keep on going om!
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I don't like to use good and evil to describe characters, but yeah, Odysseus is the villain. Alexander and Victoria aren't on Equestria's side, and Alexander would be more than happy to go to war with them, but not at the cost of Aura's life, and he certainly not at the cost of his mother's. Victoria is more neutral; she'll support war if provoked, but if Equestria hasn't done anything yet, she'll remain peaceful yet vigilant.
You should read the story "Faith and Doubt" and the upcoming sequel Abundance (defender2222 stories)
First he he
wonderful
Interestiiiing. I'm checking it out later.
Interesting to see that the EoH can be destructive as well.
Sneaky bastard.
Well you can kill someone with bananas even, if your persistent enough...
Anyway changelings really like going in solo.
The politics in this fic are terrible
The part where Alexander says "You're a menace, Odysseus", a song had just started playing. The song was Menace, which was I think partially based on the changelings.
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Wii/Xbox much?
Oh phuck, Odysseus got there first.