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Brony of Truth


John 8:32 "And ye shall know the Truth, and the Truth will make you free." (KJV)

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What if you had super powers?

When Soarin's grandfather comes to visit, that's exactly what he gets. Now, with his new powers, he feels obligated to help those who need him most. Whenever there are natural disasters, he will be there. Whenever there is a loose baby carriage rolling down a hill, he will be there. Whenever a filly's cat is stuck in a tree, he will save it. Whenever his friends need him...he will try to be there.

Why? Because he has the ability. He has the courage. He is a hero. He is...Super Soarin!

Cover art by: MBlood

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 58 )
Comment posted by Brony of Truth deleted Feb 11th, 2013

Soarin' fic!!! Will read later for sure!

This sounds interesting:eeyup:

Sounds awesome! I'll definetly read it!:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::rainbowkiss::yay:

Moar please:fluttershysad: i hope there is a soarindaash fic in here:rainbowderp::rainbowkiss:

1513385 And I can reassure you that he will be in fact, SUPER!

1513391 Good, and I think you owe me anyway, I've read a couple of your fics as well.:pinkiesmile:

1514836 You are my first 'moar' comment, so that is exactly what I'll give you...soon. As for the SoarinDash thing...:pinkiecrazy:mwahahahaha...maybe:ajbemused:...but I'll admit this is more of a Soarin fic than anything, but I wouldn't put the romance tag in for nothing!:twilightsmile:

Sounds interesting. Will follow.

Comment posted by Brony of Truth deleted Feb 9th, 2013

Yikes:applejackunsure: Soarin is a strong one now:eeyup::rainbowlaugh:

Oh no:fluttershysad: this just got alot more intense:eeyup:

:raritystarry: Love Soarin! Read Later!

Just began reading this story today; pretty good idea! I'm intrigued, faving and looking forward to updates now!

2336169 See previous comment for my reaction.:moustache:

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Well obvious Soarin didn't gain enhanced intelligence. Also why didn't Rainbow notice his new body?

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Thanks for noticing! ...Both of those actually.:twilightblush:

I actually have two different points on why Rainbow didn't notice his "new" body. (Yes, that was planned)
1) Since Soarin' knows the Wonderbolt's personally, he pretty much sees them everyday so they know what he looks like. Because of this they would notice an abrupt change, like say a slight height change or more defined muscles. That would raise a couple of red flags and they would notice that better. Also, it's been a while since the last time Rainbow has seen Soarin', it wouldn't come as too much of a shock to Rainbow for Soarin' to look more fit than the last time she saw him. (At least in my mind:applejackunsure:)
2) The heat of the moment. She's about to be sentenced to, what I feel is, a very harsh punishment so just having the pressure on her like that, I feel, would make her observation skills diminish. When his teammates noticed his change they were all in calm environment with nothing at stake, and even then Spitfire didn't notice until the second time she saw him...if you can remember all the way back to chapter three.:twilightsheepish:

P.S. I hop my initial description of Soarin's new body wasn't completely over the top. I was trying to make Soarin' look more tone and defined, I was not trying to make him out to look like the freakin' Hulk. Even though he's not going to make an appearance in my story, Big Mac would still look much bigger than Soarin'.:eeyup:

I'm really enjoying this fanfic so far!! Can't wait for more chapters!

In retrospect, this trial against Rainbow seems rather farcical. In a decent justice system, it is the duty of the prosecution to prove that Rainbow is responsible or culpable for the events that occurred, not for Rainbow to prove that she isn't. That's where the whole "innocent until proven guilty" thing comes from.

2510040 Glad you noticed that!:raritystarry: Kinda had it planned it that way...

I didn't want this "trial" to look too professional or well structured. I looked at this from the perspective of old time America (17th/18th century's). Back then, whenever something bad happened to the town or village, they needed someone to take the fall so they could feel "safer". Like a scapegoat.:rainbowhuh: Sense the town has never really experienced "crime", you can see why the "court" sounded/looked so dysfunctional. Even after Mayor Mare sentenced RD to community service, she let Soarin' defend Dash even though she basically dismissed the town meeting when she slammed her mallet down.

The town just wanted their blood so they could explain something they couldn't explain. :twilightblush:

:moustache:Town destroyed by storm that appears out of no where?
:pinkiehappy:Blame the weather team! ...:rainbowderp::derpyderp2:

P.S. Hope this explain why the town meeting seemed "farcical". (lol, I actually had to look that word up to see what it meant.:derpytongue2:)

very well written ^^ I'm excited for the next chapter! :rainbowdetermined2:

I always fill up with joy when I see this story update. :pinkiehappy: It's a good one!!

So is Soarin gonna do something super soon?

2938322 It's comments like these that keep me writing, so from the bottom of my heart; Thank You.:twilightsmile:

2939369 Well, I don't have a tragedy or a sad tag on this story, and the title of said story is Super Soarin', also, Soarin' has just encountered an Ursa Major......so.....yes?:rainbowderp:

Finally got around to reading this story and I like where this is going. The story is interesting and there are some good comedic moments. I do like how Soarin is still somewhat oblivious to the fact that he's got superpowers, it makes for a couple of funny moments. I did notice the romance tags and am seeing both Spitfire and Rainbow Dash in it, as well as this fic being part of SoarinFire and SoarinDash groups. Personally, I am hoping that the reason Spitfire is being so hard on the team is because she loves Soarin and that it does end with SoarinFire. I hope to see more of this story soon, keep up the good work. :raritywink:

3012084 Wow, you thought there were funny moments? I must be doing something right.:rainbowlaugh:

As for the whole romance thing, there will be some love triangle action of the Soarin'Dash, Soarin'Fire variety, but I won't give anything away.

Thanks for the support!:pinkiehappy::heart:

3015349 Well I love both pairings, but I'm all for SoarinFire in this one! I think my current theory about Spitfire's attitude is correct. :raritywink:

3015349 when is the next chapter on?

3140318 Wow, someone cares about the next chapter?:rainbowderp: Lol, JK brony.:derpytongue2:

The new semester for college just started for me so I've been super busy lately. However, I drive my sister to the same college I go to early in the morning. I then wait about 2 hours for my own class to actually start. In the down time I can work on the next chapter. I don't want to give myself a deadline, but you can expect it out this month. Hopefully sooner rather than later.:twilightblush:

3142039 thank you soarin is one of my favourite ponys :scootangel:

and i love both Soarin/Dash and Spit/Soarin :rainbowkiss:

and btw awesome work dude :scootangel:

I really gotta get around to reading this....

Great story:pinkiehappy:when's the next chapter coming? :pinkiehappy:

3506471 When I decide to stop being lazy...:ajsleepy:

Thanks for the comment though!

Oh my this story is amazing!!!!

Oh my stars, I was laughing the whole chapter , wonderful job

*GASPS* oooh this is getting better and better :)

Lol I love this chapter soarin is adorably stupid [when he was talking about the ursa]

I cannot wait till the next chapter honestly I think this story is cute,hilarious, awesome, and ....Yeah AWESOME ,thank you for a great story

3971548 lol yup no prob, can't wait for the rest and I am a vvveeeerrry impatient person when it comes to waiting for a book-er chapter in ur case bit anyways I'm not gonna rush so don't worry u can take ur time :p ur chapters are worth waiting for (oh my goodness this sounds ugh sappy hehe sorry about that XD)

He should be super soarin... But still not as fast as dash. Dash is faster than fast. Also I hope he doesn't make Rainbooms; he's not prismatic and if it worked that way then every pony would have rainbow etherealization...

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