“We're flying high,/We're watching the world pass us by./Never want to come down,/Never want to put my feet back down on the ground.” –Depeche Mode, ‘Never Let Me Down Again’
Rainbow Dash is given a chance of a lifetime, to fly with her favorite Wonderbolt, Soarin. However, as she spends time with him, she begins to like him more and more. But how does he feel?
Art done by DespisedAndBeloved on deviantArt.
I like this story very much
However there could be some improvements...
improvements as in character development with Rainbow Dash and her love for Soarin
I think she could've taken more time discovering her feelings
Overall I think this is a good story
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What you said
Soarin: Don't worry about it, Dash. When I was told that I could do some one-on-one with ya
Me: THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!!!!!
AWKWARD! wait notice how I'm A: your first commentor and B: my comments have got one section of capitals? ah well great story so far I love to no end
OH BOY! this will be good but till then
(outside) DUNKOVE! DEK MA GISH!
I thought I dealt with them (pulls a plank of wood out) be right back
Ouch...
YAY! I expect a sequel also (points to the YAY!) SEE WHAT i MEAN?!
Not sure if Icelander or Sigur Ros fan
Thank you for the story, this site needs some more Soarin x Dash.
Keep up the good work
1084772 Sigur Ros fan. xD
great story dude and are you making a sequel?
1088739 There is a possibility of a sequel, but don't get your hopes up right now. Currently, I'm just transfering my fics from deviantArt to over here, and this was actually one of my first fics. So, as of right now, 4 down, about 24 or so to go.
oh ok
the end???? sequel then!!!! nao!!!!!!!
When i saw what the fourth chapter was named, i was like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png , but then because i understood it ( I'm Icelandic ) i was like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png { Hell yeah
Awesome Story btw, i really enjoyed it i hope there will be a sequel
Oh dash
You need to talk to somepony about ? KNEW IT!
Oh god... this cant and is not good at all
Sounds interesting
Omc your profile pick is so funny
no offense
really like the story. honestlyI can say that it does
help me with a crush that i have, so thanks.
Ohh! and I like your profile pic
4462285 I'm really glad you like reading it. As for it relating to your life, I'm glad it could help you in some way with your life, I'm honored to hear that. Truth be told, this is one of my more personal stories, dealing with a few real things that happened with me and someone I liked it. Glad to have helped in some way.
And thanks for the comment on my avatar.
oh dear.... that was a little to soon
Well this just got awkward........
This is cute!
This was a fun little read, nothing over the top, just enjoyable. Thanks for pitting the time in to write it.
Evergreen forest? Do you mean everfree or was that not a typo? I honestly don't know.
That was a very poor choice Rainbow. Tell him before you make a move. You don't know what's going on in his life right now.
Oh. My. Celestia. *grabs velvet cushion and faints*
Awkward!
RAINBOW DASH!!! Why!!!
That escalated quickly.
I realize it's been almost five years since this came out, the SoarinDash shipper in me still wants it to get a sequel in which they get together for real.
WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT "DASHIE" !??????? IM SCREAMING
WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT
N-no.. it-it c-c-can't be...
Can't you just I don't know..get up?
You can just say:
Now listen here ya little handsome boy!
You are my birthday present and you will love me!
*jumps of cliff*
she got too excited lol
That quiet cheer so adorable
Well this is a pretty start of a story so it looks like Twilight and the others want to show appreciation to Rainbow they ask one of the Wonderbolts name soarin which she was pretty excited that she's hanging out with him and they spend the whole day learning how to fly and everything but then towards the end of the day he looks like rainbow starting to have this feeling that she's in love and now she needs to talk to somebody about this I wonder who she could have talk to
Dang rainbow you're a heartbreaker never thought of that
Yeah that was not the best approach you ever did
And I absolutely agreed but she needs to slow down first
Oh no dang it rainbow you move too fast for the love of Celestia
Oh boy something tells me this won't go very well so rainbow was asking one of her friends about this whole love relationship apparently what Fluttershy said that rainbow is not really good when it comes to committing to relationships and Rarity gave a pretty good lessons about that and when Soarin arrived Rainbow Dash was feeling a little nervous but she tried to act cool but until it went completely downhill when she kissed him and oh boy this is not going to end well
Yeah it felt like you were rushing the relationship Rainbow Dash which that's a big no no
poor rainbow