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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“We're flying high,/We're watching the world pass us by./Never want to come down,/Never want to put my feet back down on the ground.” –Depeche Mode, ‘Never Let Me Down Again’

Rainbow Dash is given a chance of a lifetime, to fly with her favorite Wonderbolt, Soarin. However, as she spends time with him, she begins to like him more and more. But how does he feel?


Art done by DespisedAndBeloved on deviantArt.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 55 )

I like this story very much
However there could be some improvements...
improvements as in character development with Rainbow Dash and her love for Soarin
I think she could've taken more time discovering her feelings
Overall I think this is a good story :twilightsmile:

Soarin: Don't worry about it, Dash. When I was told that I could do some one-on-one with ya
Me: THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!!!!! :trollestia:

AWKWARD! wait notice how I'm A: your first commentor and B: my comments have got one section of capitals? ah well great story so far I love to no end

OH BOY! this will be good but till then
(outside) DUNKOVE! DEK MA GISH!
I thought I dealt with them (pulls a plank of wood out) be right back

YAY! :yay: I expect a sequel also (points to the YAY!) SEE WHAT i MEAN?! :rainbowhuh:

Not sure if Icelander or Sigur Ros fan :trixieshiftright:

Thank you for the story, this site needs some more Soarin x Dash.
Keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

1088739 There is a possibility of a sequel, but don't get your hopes up right now. Currently, I'm just transfering my fics from deviantArt to over here, and this was actually one of my first fics. So, as of right now, 4 down, about 24 or so to go.

the end???? sequel then!!!! nao!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

When i saw what the fourth chapter was named, i was like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png , but then because i understood it ( I'm Icelandic ) i was like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png { Hell yeah
Awesome Story btw, i really enjoyed it :twilightsmile: i hope there will be a sequel

You need to talk to somepony about :heart:? KNEW IT! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Oh god... this cant and is not good at all :facehoof::rainbowhuh:

Omc your profile pick is so funny :pinkiehappy:
:unsuresweetie: no offense

really like the story. honestly:ajsmug:I can say that it does
help me with a crush that i have, so thanks.
Ohh! and I like your profile pic:heart:

4462285 I'm really glad you like reading it. As for it relating to your life, I'm glad it could help you in some way with your life, I'm honored to hear that. Truth be told, this is one of my more personal stories, dealing with a few real things that happened with me and someone I liked it. Glad to have helped in some way.
And thanks for the comment on my avatar.

:applejackunsure:oh dear.... that was a little to soon

:twilightblush: Well this just got awkward........

This was a fun little read, nothing over the top, just enjoyable. Thanks for pitting the time in to write it.

Evergreen forest? Do you mean everfree or was that not a typo? I honestly don't know.

That was a very poor choice Rainbow. Tell him before you make a move. You don't know what's going on in his life right now.

Oh. My. Celestia. *grabs velvet cushion and faints*

I realize it's been almost five years since this came out, the SoarinDash shipper in me still wants it to get a sequel in which they get together for real.

Soarin nodded and began to hover with his wings, "Great, I'll see ya then, Dashie!" And with that, Soarin flew off toward the direction of Canterlot.

WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT "DASHIE" !??????? IM SCREAMING

"Buat, whaa iff I totalee mesh aup?" Rainbow Dash tried to say with the cake in her mouth, which had bits of cake and frosting flying at Twilight and Rarity, causing the latter to leave in a huff to find a towel to clean herself off from the firing of Rainbow Dash's speaking.

You can just say:



Now listen here ya little handsome boy!
You are my birthday present and you will love me! :twilightangry2:

"I get to have personal training from Soarin' of the Wonderbolts?" her voice squeaked more than usual as she exclaimed happily. "Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygo-"

she got too excited lol

"Oh, it's the least we could do for you, Rainbow Dash. You really are quite awesome. Woo hoo!" Fluttershy spoke and cheered softly to her pegasus friend.

That quiet cheer so adorable

Well this is a pretty start of a story so it looks like Twilight and the others want to show appreciation to Rainbow they ask one of the Wonderbolts name soarin which she was pretty excited that she's hanging out with him and they spend the whole day learning how to fly and everything but then towards the end of the day he looks like rainbow starting to have this feeling that she's in love and now she needs to talk to somebody about this I wonder who she could have talk to

"Well, um, remember that when you were a filly, you weren't the best at picking and staying in a relationship with anypony."

Dang rainbow you're a heartbreaker never thought of that

'You stupid idiot! You just made your best friend cry, and now you're back right where you started with this problem. Worse if you add what you just did to Fluttershy.' Rainbow Dash thought to herself as her running turned into a trot. She continued to walk through the vacant Ponyville square. 'Guh….stupid.'

Yeah that was not the best approach you ever did

"Oh, how simply marvelous, darling! You two just seem absolutely perfect for each other!" Rarity mused.

And I absolutely agreed but she needs to slow down first

Before she could realize what she was doing, Rainbow Dash leaned in toward Soarin and kissed him right on his mouth. Her eyes closed and she felt her heart flutter with excitement. It felt as if her entire body had reached escape velocity and that she was gliding among the stars in space. It was a feeling that felt heavenly and sublime to her body, heart, and mind.

Oh no dang it rainbow you move too fast for the love of Celestia :facehoof:

Oh boy something tells me this won't go very well so rainbow was asking one of her friends about this whole love relationship apparently what Fluttershy said that rainbow is not really good when it comes to committing to relationships and Rarity gave a pretty good lessons about that and when Soarin arrived Rainbow Dash was feeling a little nervous but she tried to act cool but until it went completely downhill when she kissed him and oh boy this is not going to end well

The colt was still on his back, trying to calm himself from the surprise, "Obviously, but where on Equestria did that come from?"

Yeah it felt like you were rushing the relationship Rainbow Dash which that's a big no no

Rain began to fall from the clouds, slowly and lightly at first, but steadily growing. Below in Ponyville, earth ponies and unicorns alike were scattering to get indoors where it was dry and warm. Rainbow didn't care. The cold rain was hitting her body, and it at least let her know that she was still able to feel something other than a broken heart. The falling water splashed on her face, merging with her tears and finally allowing the tears to fall down her cheeks. Rainbow was finally fully crying, letting her emotions out.

poor rainbow

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