Sky High, Where We Can Fly

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"Okay kids, let me tell you a story about your Dad's and mine first Hearts and Hooves. It was an awesome day that started..."

So, it's a Romance story between Soarin' and Rainbow Dash. This is for a contest winner on my story 'PAYDAY : Wait A Minute...'

MLP : FiM belongs to Hasbro Studios.

The Picture belongs to ChibiCatsArtits

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Tom the bomb

Tom the bomb #1 · Mar 10th, 2013 · · ·

I'm not sure why you got 3 down votes right off the bat but I thought it was well written.
I love that jazz cover of discord. It's pretty awesome.

PBY_Jacko115

PBY_Jacko115 #2 · Mar 10th, 2013 · · ·

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I was doing it for a contest winner. There were some major plot holes within the story itself, so it was either that or people don't like Soarin'XRainbowDash.
But thanks for the support dude! Have a moustache

koenigseggfan14

koenigseggfan14 #3 · Mar 10th, 2013 · · ·

Awsome job man!

Rainbow Dash 1898

Rainbow Dash 1898 #4 · Mar 11th, 2013 · · ·

loved it

PBY_Jacko115

PBY_Jacko115 #5 · Mar 11th, 2013 · · ·

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First, thank you. Second, my ego has increased because I was complimented by a Lamborghini. Danke Schon, Herr Koenigs.

PBY_Jacko115

PBY_Jacko115 #6 · Mar 11th, 2013 · · ·

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From your profile picture, I'm guessing you actually do like it. Anyways, thanks for the support.... I'm still waiting on my second contest winner.

Autumn Wind

Autumn Wind #7 · Mar 11th, 2013 · · ·

Hey, not a bad piece of writing, but you have some really glaring error.

The singular of pegasi is pegasus.
Spitfire is female.

Mistakes like that really stick out to some readers, myself included.

PBY_Jacko115

PBY_Jacko115 #8 · Mar 12th, 2013 · · ·

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Sorry about that but I've only got my beta reader working on one story. But thank you for the advice, it really helps. Have a moustache and feel like a sir.

PBY_Jacko115