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Wolf, Dallas, Chains and Hoxton. Some of the best in their expertise, of course with help from Bain. However this 'expertise' doesn't involve a power fluctuation and an explosive material setting off prototype military canisters.... It's time for a payday.... Guys? Guys!? What happened? Wait a minute...

A big thanks to ShadyHorseman on DeviantArt for the cover page.

A crossover with PAYDAY : The Heist and MLP : FiM

PAYDAY : The Heist belongs to OverKill Software

My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro Studios.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 41 )

Oh what the fuck, half of my stories were refused because they didn't have ponies in them, and just because you barely even mention Pinkie you can submit this?

Don't get me wrong, I like the story, I'm just a little miffed.

2081010 Did you you see if your story qualified for everything involved? Look at the qualifications and the 'Not allowed' section to see what's wrong with your stories. Is it at least 1,000 words for the starting chapter?

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It automatically blocks any stories without a thousand words. And whomever it is that just so happens to inspect my submitted work seems to find a distinct lack of ponies.
It's fine now, but damn annoying.

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Ah okay. But yeah, you gotta mention at least some'pony', even if it's a O.C. I can't remember who checked my work but when I find out maybe you should see about getting him/her to look at your story.

It's been way too long since i last played Payday. I'm looking forward to this story, in the meantime have a moustache :moustache:

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PC or PS3? Thanks for the mustache, have a duck face :duck:

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I'm possibly thinking about giving you my username for some PAYDAY... Have an insane Pinkie Pie :pinkiecrazy:

Don't be sorry for the length. Be sorry for the amount of mistake there are in this. It's still a good story, but there are things to fix.

Taller than him by at least a meter? That's a bit bloody big, don't you think?

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And I need a Beta Reader. Just for your comment, I want to hire you. *Throws a file of papers down* Get to work, My Little Grammar Nazi.

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I'm usually out of it when writing these. Which is why I need a Beta Reader or collaborator.

2129132 Email me beta chapters. PM me if you're serious.

Is the easter egg Barricade from the My Little Minecraft: At The End? (btw that story is awesome)

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Um, no... I kind of thought of that name out of the blue. If that name was in the story, then it's completely incidental. The Easter Egg is actually a thing for people who know about PAYDAY : The Heist.

The Easter egg is Bain saying Do you want to be dropped from a helicopter? Referencing Diamond Heist

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I like how everyone is thinking of the game itself. But because you were so close I'm gonna give it you. I'll send you the real Easter Egg in a PM.

I'm willing to beta-read and edit, if that's alright. As for ideas, how about the team runs from city to city surviving like they usually do: fighting off gratuitous amounts of comedically large groups of enemies.

Just a thought. :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Also, add me on PSN. CRAZYWHAKBOY. I'll be on and off randomly, but I have PAYDAY.

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First : Why didn't I just do that in the first place?

Second : I will at the end of May. My PS3 is being fixed and that's when I'm getting a new one.

Third : I'll take you up on that offer.

Fourth : I fuckin' love your avatar.

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Oooooh yeah, gimme that moustache.

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How so? Laughing because of comedy or terribleness?

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You should read my blog dude. My computer ended like Elvis on the shutter. Sorry mate.

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Eeyup. Once you go Mac, you never go back. (Three jokes in one!)

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Nope, my screen literally won't stop moving when I try to. It goes everywhere.

I've been playing the beta for Payday 2 for weeks now :raritywink:

Well PAYDAY 2 just released, anybody else got it?

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Congratulations, you actually have a computer that works for video games! *Pulls gun* Give. Me. It.

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*Pulls bigger gun*

Second Size motherfuckers,

4407931 *Pulls a M82 .50 sniper* I'm watching you two.:pinkiecrazy:

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*Pulls out a amcar-4 and stands to the side wearing a tactical combat vest and a Sackface mask (haven't play for a while, sorry if I didn't name it right.)
"Hey we're about to rob a computer company's R&D lab, just pick a new one up there."

Jesus this is a old story. I wonder if this person is still here, a old world blues style fellow. That or Payday 2 consumed him.

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