Rainbow Dash is just got back from the Gala. She is annoyed. She is tired. So when somepony comes to her house, she doesn't take it well. Even if it a Wonderbolt that just wants to make amends. But when Soarin' gets to the point the two start sending letters to each other. As they start sending letters between each other how will things go between them?
(Set during season 2)
*your offer
Some other typos as well.
Anyways, LOVE the story!
2201477 Fixed. Thanks for catching those. *Complains about commenters on dA not being Grammar Nazi's*
And I'm glad you enjoyed it! Note to self though: try and find all of my you're's and your's and make sure their the right ones before submitting my next story.
2201687 Oh, you have a dA acc? I'm soooo faving this on dA!
Aww, cute story!
Great story!
2205680>>2206793 Thanks!
It's nice, but this it's far too rushed.
This is the kind of story that would benefit from a multi-chapter format. Simply put, it needs to be longer, giving more detail between the day-to-day lives of the two characters, and even letting us see some of the letters.
Other than that, it's a decent story.
2213118 Thanks. And yeah I know the pacing is really...meh on this fic. It was an experiment where I wanted to go a long span of time in only a small fic, and it didn't really work out that well. I think I'm better in the resti of my fics when it comes to pacing. And I think when I was writing this it was close to the beginning of season 3 so I wanted to finish this before season 3 started so instead of making a long fic I made a one shot. I still think it's ok, but I know it could have been better.
I can see that you had some slight pacing issues but I do not think that they detracted from the overall quality of the story. I enjoyed reading this a great deal and I can't wait to read the next ones.
2319265 Yeah this would have probably been better had I made it a multichapter fic instead of a oneshot, but I guess live and learn. Now if you'll excuse me I have a Biolizard to kill (Sonic Adventure 2 joke in case you didn't get it).
2320492
Yeah, I definitely did not get the joke...
2320508 I said Live and Learn which is the song that plays during the final boss fight against the Biolizard in Sonic Adventure 2.
love this story
Nice story, you stuck with rainbow dash's personality really well, she didn't end up being really soft towards the end, she was still her :) I really hope you extend this because this could be a great start to an even bigger story that would definitely be worth reading :D
Loved it SOOO much can you make a sequel
Peweese make a sequal
This story is soooooooooooooooooooooooo ggggggggggooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd
Please
I love this story!!!!!
I'm with everyone else. Please make
A sequel!
Awwww this is cute!
And make a sequel!!
I love this story. Great job.
I absolutely love this story this was the first soarindash fic I ever read it also actually got me into shipping too. Sure it's just a 1 chapter story so what I just want u to know I adore this fanfic. That is all
WHAT!?!?! THAT'S IT!!!!! awwww i wanted more. its just sooo good! I Demand a sequel!
Omg! how do you read this book? Story? I can't read it. help me!!! hey nice job so far.
I just wanted to do pony faces.
love them all!!!
But she’s she only one with a cloud house. Right?
I mean I guess that's a good point it can be very tired some when it comes to people who keeps asking for your autographs and everything
Just wait until season 6 your dream will come true very soon
Communication
With a Little Help from Fluttershy they did it despite how many Pegasus got sick
Aww this was a very cute story and I really like Rainbow Dash and Soarin keeping in touch with each other after the disaster of the grand Galloping Gala and after meeting each other and sending out their mails to each other they started to feel for each other but they were worried about his status as a Wonderbolt but he wants to prove to her that he really do care for her and apparently he did and it looks like they want to work the relationship this was a pretty good story and I like the pacing keep up the good work