Rainbow Dash is visited by Soarin not too long after the Royal Wedding. The two decide to spend some time together... But Dash gets confused about her feelings, so she goes around trying to figure out what the hay is going on. As much as she hates to admit it, she's pretty clueless when it comes to romance. Unfortunately, so are most of her friends, but Rarity knows what to tell her- And Rainbow Dash isn't quite so willing to accept the truth.
Umm... Very first pony fanfic, I guess. Please, feel free to give constructive criticism. I won't take offense. And if you should choose to thumbs down it please say why, it might help me be a better writer. :)
...unless you just don't like the SoarinDash ship, in which case, why are you reading this?
Rated Teen for some language. Some. Maybe. Also for some hinted sexual themes and sex jokes. It's not going to be too bad though.
Ahh, another Rainbow Dash and Soarin' shipping. I am quite pleased. I look forward to reading more of this as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!
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Aww, thanks! I'm really happy people like it!
Well done i think! Just one tip, you rushed all of this into 1 chapeter. Splatter it out more! Like paint! Instead of making a dot in the white circle, paint the whole circle with beutiful red and green colours! Add conversations, thinking scenes, random accounters! That kinda stuff!
Good and well done! The same thing as the last chapeter tho, a little rushed, but very good storyline!
OMG this is such a good story, Keep it up
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Thanks for your advice, I'll keep it in mind!
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Thanks!
Rainbow and soarin should have a filly together
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That may possibly be in store for later...
But you shall have to wait till I get there
Hooray for mixed signals? The confusion has been doubled!
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Why, indeed it has. Or has it...
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Wait... I can't figure out if that is good or bad in this case, because its late and I'm tired
OTP!
PLEASE!!! Update!!!! QUICKER!!!
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I'm currently working on the fourth chapter, slowly but surely. The other three I had done for a while and only added them at once because they were ready.
four days ago you said the chapter is almost ready-4! So can you plz update lets say at least this week pretty pleeeeaaaassseeee! I hear silence I take that as a yes thank you!
Ooh a chapter!
But then there is the wait for the next one
OH, a cliff hanger wait :( is dashi.....is she d-dead? NO no you can't do this NOT TO DASHI I swear to celestia I WILL END SOARIN IF HE DID ANYTHING TO HER ......... cupcake time
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No no nononono...
She's alive and well, if not a bit heartbroken and sad. She's...
Let's sum it up as a wilderness sabbatical.
>>LightSpectrum whew you got me there for a moment thinking dash was dead oh good one. You mam just earned yourself a follower keep it up oh right I already followed you
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Thanks for making my day, which otherwise sucked!
DUN-DUN-DUUUUUN
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Exactly
This is already getting interesting, and this is the first chapter!
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I'm glad you thought so.
And thanks to all of you guys for giving your opinions. Before I posted it on Fimfiction I had only showed to my best and closest friends. And as much as I love them, they wouldn't dare give any constructive criticism
Nice chapeter! A little rushed i guess but really, i cant say anything about rushed.
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I'm planning the next chapter to be longer. That one was sort of a transition one, I guess
2764155 Apoligie accepted?
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eeeeeeeyup.
Lol the bit about him being attracted to her sexy awesomeness reminds me of Prussia. The Awesome Prussia deserves no less than being the Awesome Rainbow Dash.
Do you have an estimated time of when you're going to update again? Cause I've been waiting for like a month or so to finish this story. Awesome job!!!
please make your chapters longer
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What if I promise to have it done by the end of this month?
A Pinkie Pie Promise?
YES! YES YES PLEASE!THANKS!
I'm so into the story!! I NEED TO KEEP READING!!
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I just got some free time and watched the video...
It makes so much sense! That's perfect and I shall learn that song now
It... I just... WOAH.
I thought it was pretty good. Looks like Spitfire about ready to spit some fire, dohoho!
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Indeed.
That's literally the best thing I've heard (read?) all day!
Uh oh
wait, isn't normal for people to talk to themselves? or am i the only one who talks to myself here?
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Perfectly normal. Spitfire's just weird
i love this story and spitfires jealousy but the chapters are so short
2789405 can't argue with that logic
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I've been super busy but I'm better now. I'll try to make them longer
>> LightSpectrum
YES
Uh oh. Awkwardness is running amok in this story. It's a good thing I like awkwardness.
I hate ya spitfire! Oh well what's a story without enemies? I love this!!!!
If you can make them longer and still have them being this good, then why not! Go for it! I'll read it with enthusiasm!
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Will do!