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A 17 year old Brit who loves all the stereotypical things like Tea and Doctor Who. I'm original. Definitely.

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Sequel to Trapped

Rainbow Dash and Soarin' are both out of the hospital and have one month to spare before Soarin' has to return to his duties as a Wonderbolt. Will the traumatic events which occurred not even a week ago come between both ponies and their dreams?  

Edited by the brill Time Pony Victorious!

Again, image from an episode until I have time to create my own!

First Published
13th May 2013
Last Modified
29th Jun 2014
#1 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

My two favourite stories so far, this one and Trapped!! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

#2 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571900 Aww thank you for all your support! *hugs* Hopefully this will be accepted in submission soon! :pinkiesad2: I will make a blog post when it's live! :pinkiehappy:

#3 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Really great. :twilightsmile:

Can't wait for chapter two!

#4 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571923 Waiiitt I am so confused, so it has been accepted? XD Ah, I'm a derp then :derpytongue2: But yeah, I shall try get it up soon! I'm really excited about this! :pinkiehappy:

#5 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571932 Well I got to read the first chapter.

So I guess...? Lol :rainbowlaugh:

#6 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571944 But... Ah... It still says it's in queue, but then it doesn't but it isn't on the front page and gahhh! Guess we'll wait and see then :pinkiesad2: That is confuzzling :rainbowlaugh:

#7 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571949 Yes it is... :applejackconfused:

My iPad must have the power to view unpublished stories! :pinkiegasp:

#8 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571965 Indeed! What is this sorcery! :pinkiegasp:

#9 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·


Think of all the stories I can read... muwhahaha!

#10 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571988 Indeed! You have the power! :pinkiesad2:

#11 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2571994 Heh...

Something tells me this is Discord's fault. :trollestia:

#12 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572010 Oh my gosh! It might be! :pinkiesad2:

#13 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Heehee it's really good :pinkiehappy: I can't wait to read more! I predict a wedding! :rainbowkiss:

#14 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572026 I am so confused guys! I haven't gotten a message to say that this has been accepted, and it doesn't have a yellow button to say "revoke submission" like my other stories do... What is this?! How can you all read this? God, I am such a derp but I am genuinely confused... :rainbowwild:

#17 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

I have no idea it doesn't show up in your stories thing either :applejackunsure:

#18 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572056 Blurghhh Okay, maybe it's in the queue and you can all see it because I gave you the link? If it doesn't get accepted in the next few days though I'm gonna have to retry :rainbowwild:

#19 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

YESYESYESYES! Alright let me read this.... *le start reading*  


#20 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572319 (still don't understand how everyone can see this, but meh xD) Anyway, glad you like it, hopefully that will help you forgive me for lack of updates this week! I have two massive English exams next week! :rainbowwild:

#21 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572325 ohh~ EXAMS FLIPPING SUCK. all of mine are in two weeks (o.e)t

but your welcome! and i can't wait to read more! :moustache:

#22 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572347 I have mine next week then I have a break, then exams again then I have the death week where I have two exams in one day then one exam every other day -.- It's horrible! Good luck in your exams and stay tuned for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

#23 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Nothin' could go wrong? Well, with the thing ive learned from Trapped is that everything is going to go wrong... You are so predictible xD

#25 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Guys! It has now officially been approved, I don't understand what went on earlier but hey, you all got a sneak preview of it so, WIN :raritywink:

#26 · 132w, 6d ago · 2 · · Prologue ·

Nothing could go wrong.

Famous last words

#27 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2572431 Gosh, guys! Why do you all think I'm so predictable... like really... :rainbowwild:

#28 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Mm, sequel already! Looking forward to this, you're fast becoming one of my fave writers with your first-person perspectives!

#29 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Eighth paragraph down...

Rainbow Dash is the pony that was see as tomcoltish and athletic,

I'm assuming you meant seen?:unsuresweetie:

Really like this quote about falling in love.:twilightsmile:

...the same way you’d fall asleep. Slowly, then all at once.


#30 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

hurry i know have a life but i no wana wait! (this is the girl who hates love stories lol)

#31 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2573227 Ah! That really is an honour considering you're my fave author on here!

And, not many people write present tense first-person fics, I find it so much easier though!

>>2573654 Oh yes, thank you!

Also, I love that quote too, it's from my favourite novel "The Fault in Our Stars" by John Green! :pinkiehappy:

>>2574340 Hopefully there will be an update tomorrow, since it is like 10pm for me now :unsuresweetie:

#32 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


You do them well!

And fave author? No way, you flatter me! :raritywink:

#33 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2577370 Aww thank you!

Your stories are amazing! :pinkiehappy: Like I've said before, it is very very hard to find a good Soarin'Dash fic, yours is way above my standards! I am in love with your work! :pinkiehappy:(I sound like a creeper... Whoops...) :twilightsheepish:

#34 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


omg, I have my own creeper! I've dreamed of this day ever since I wanted to write! :heart:

#35 · 132w, 5d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>2577397 Aww! Well it's an honour to be the one to fulfill your dream for you :raritywink:

#36 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

I haven't even started Trapped yet :rainbowlaugh:

#37 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2577501 Ahh sorry! :rainbowwild: Good luck! :pinkiesad2: My chapters are fairly short, so you should be okay? :twilightblush:

#38 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2577516 Might read it soon, wanna finish Cuatro and the next chapter of Caring for a Changeling

#39 · 132w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>2577620 Aha, okay! Don't worry about it! :pinkiehappy: Take your time, it'll always be there when you're ready to read it! I hope you enjoy it and let me know what you think when you do get around to reading it! :twilightblush:

fff, dat cliffhanger!

Time for Soarin to prove just how fast he can be, I suppose!


What’s happening to me? I’m turning into Rarity!

I laughed at this. it's precisely how I picture Rarity!

>>2577774 Told ya I'd get revenge! :pinkiecrazy:  

But what if he's not fast enough?! :pinkiegasp:

And ahaa :raritywink: It's exactly how I picture her too! :twilightblush: Poor Rarity, always getting hated on coz shes a girly girl :raritywink: I need to include her more since I talk a bit like her so it'd be easy to characterise her dialogue! :twilightblush:


The show itself needs more examples of Rarity's influence over stallions!

Certain fanfics, too!

>>2577809 Indeed, the show needs more romance, I mean come on, the only real romance is Cadance and Shining Armour! We could do with some pony else finding the love of their life! :twilightblush:  (It would most likely be Rarity to be honest so you know, its a win win!)

How come I cannot read this but everyone else can? :flutterrage:

ahhhhh!....ahhhhh!....ahhhhh!....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOO [OMIGOSH YES!] <- NU!   :derpyderp1: omigawd what is wrong with me...or... you lol

“You can bake pie?” I stare at Soarin’, gobsmacked.

I lost it! She is just like me when i found out that my mother accully knows how to play video games xD

>>2578372 I actually don't know? It has gone officially live so you should be able to see it? Let me know if you're still having problems and I will see what I can do! :unsuresweetie:

>>2580553 Ahaa Cliffhangers ftw!

>>2580853 Indeed! Many people seem to shock us :rainbowwild:


Oh wait, I can finally see it! Now I can read!


>>2581379 Ah, that's good then! At least nothing is wrong with my account :twilightblush:

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