• Member Since 13th Sep, 2013
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Miinow


Hello, My name is Zoe and I really enjoy writing! I do a lot of mlp fanfictions, so i guess this is the place for me.

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Rainbow dash unexpectedly gets stuck with Soarin in her home and must take care of him while he is recovering from a broken wing. Slowly but surely, she begins to develop a romantic interest in him...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 70 )

Loving it! :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:I will be waiting for updates!:twilightsmile::yay::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

ok if scootaloo is in it im going to love this story :heart:

3200321 scootaloo appears in a later chapter :scootangel::rainbowkiss:

3200259 Thanks! Glad you like it!:twilightsmile:

how come the chapters are so short?

3200908 if you want the chapters to be longer, they will be, but there will also be more time between the updates because they will take more time to write. :twilightoops::applejackunsure:

3200916NICE I WILL READ AND RATE!

intresting scootaloo lives with dash im going to love this for suer this was an awsome :rainbowkiss: chapter

3201130 I agree with you,120%!:pinkiehappy::yay::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowkiss: Awesome chapter! I had always wanted to know what was inside of Dashie's mansion!:scootangel: And now I have the chance to find out!:pinkiegasp::twilightsmile::trollestia:

cool story so far im waiting for more

I quite enjoy it, BUTTTTTTTTTTTTT the un-capitalized I's are killing me.

How exactly am i going to get up there?

If you don't already, you should get an editor to help you with grammatical stuff. You have shown improvement in grammar with the I's in this chapter. Good job.

3202719 So sorry about those! I'll fix them right away :twilightsmile:

scootaloo for the win :scootangel:

I love this chapter SOOOOOOOO much! :rainbowkiss:I LOVE how you had Scootaloo meet Soarin! Especially of who you said Scootaloo hugged Soain's leg! Wish I could actually see that! I will die of over-whelming cuteness!:scootangel:

Well.

Dash told me but i thought she was joking

"Oh my gosh this is so AWESOME! I have to go get the rest of the crusaders over here, this is amazing, oh wow I'll be right back!"

Here, the bolded part should be one small sentence. It just doesn't look right. It may just be me. I dunno.
Again, you should really find an editor *cough cough me cough cough* Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter, quite short though.

A good chapter! I love all the simple bits with Scoots in it but, they could be a bit longer chapters....

Comment posted by Miinow deleted Sep 15th, 2013

3205654 You should probably remove that email and pm me :/

Lol the book mountain

ten thumbs up bro, also. wait nope, all is well

This story is awesome :rainbowkiss:

3208126 glad you think so :pinkiehappy:

3208178 hell yeah Scootaloo Soarin and Rainbow Dash the perfect three

"Don't worry, we'll be there in ten se-" she quickly corrected herself. "One minute flat!" she said, blushing.

M... ,M-MY SIDES H-HUUURTS!!:rainbowlaugh:

I love this SO much....:pinkiehappy:

3209605 Glad you enjoy the story! :rainbowkiss:

when will we see an update please :unsuresweetie:

3233466 IM SO SORRY ABOUT NOT UPDATING YET! :raritycry: i have LOADS of homework and projects so i had to put this to the side for a bit. :pinkiesad2: i think my teachers are trying to break me... :trixieshiftright: i will try to update soon, i promise :twilightblush:

3257339 ok thanks for the answer :scootangel:

What a way for romance to start off with a little falling in. :rainbowlaugh:

Two weeks?!? :pinkiegasp:
Aw... I love it when Dashie blushes. :twilightblush:

Aw... This is too cute! :scootangel:
By the way, you need to fix a few typos.

Nice story!!! But when's the next chapter coming out?:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

3395841 :fluttercry: in a long time.... I have too much going on at the moment to focus on this, but don't worry i have half of the chapter written down at the moment, i just havent published it :unsuresweetie:

3439076
it's okay, nothing to worry about

kool...:heart:
ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh...:derpyderp2:
FIRST COMMENT EVER!!!!!!!:raritystarry:
BEST FIRST STORY EVERY!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:
KEEP IT UP ME WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2:

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:flutterrage:::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
:pinkiecrazy:::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
pretty please:fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::pinkiesad2::

Comment posted by Wingstream deleted Jan 29th, 2014

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
princess demand it :trollestia:

Comment posted by KittenLoverPink deleted Dec 23rd, 2013

3552989 ive finally gotten around to writing more! i'll try to get it here soon :)

3668581 it's coming, it's coming!

When is the next chap

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