Rainbow dash unexpectedly gets stuck with Soarin in her home and must take care of him while he is recovering from a broken wing. Slowly but surely, she begins to develop a romantic interest in him...
Hello, My name is Zoe and I really enjoy writing! I do a lot of mlp fanfictions, so i guess this is the place for me.
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Loving it! I will be waiting for updates!
ok if scootaloo is in it im going to love this story
3200321 scootaloo appears in a later chapter
3200259 Thanks! Glad you like it!
how come the chapters are so short?
3200908 if you want the chapters to be longer, they will be, but there will also be more time between the updates because they will take more time to write.
3200916NICE I WILL READ AND RATE!
intresting scootaloo lives with dash im going to love this for suer this was an awsome chapter
3201130 I agree with you,120%! Awesome chapter! I had always wanted to know what was inside of Dashie's mansion! And now I have the chance to find out!
cool story so far im waiting for more
I quite enjoy it, BUTTTTTTTTTTTTT the un-capitalized I's are killing me.
If you don't already, you should get an editor to help you with grammatical stuff. You have shown improvement in grammar with the I's in this chapter. Good job.
3202719 So sorry about those! I'll fix them right away
scootaloo for the win
I love this chapter SOOOOOOOO much! I LOVE how you had Scootaloo meet Soarin! Especially of who you said Scootaloo hugged Soain's leg! Wish I could actually see that! I will die of over-whelming cuteness!
Well.
Here, the bolded part should be one small sentence. It just doesn't look right. It may just be me. I dunno.
Again, you should really find an editor *cough cough me cough cough* Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter, quite short though.
A good chapter! I love all the simple bits with Scoots in it but, they could be a bit longer chapters....
3205654 You should probably remove that email and pm me :/
Lol the book mountain
ten thumbs up bro, also. wait nope, all is well
3205732 alright
3206566 thanks
This story is awesome
3208126 glad you think so
3208178 hell yeah Scootaloo Soarin and Rainbow Dash the perfect three
M... ,M-MY SIDES H-HUUURTS!!
I love this SO much....
3209605 Glad you enjoy the story!
3209605 y-you again
3213552 Me again...
when will we see an update please
3233466 IM SO SORRY ABOUT NOT UPDATING YET! i have LOADS of homework and projects so i had to put this to the side for a bit. i think my teachers are trying to break me... i will try to update soon, i promise
3257339 ok thanks for the answer
What a way for romance to start off with a little falling in.
Two weeks?!?
Aw... I love it when Dashie blushes.
Aw... This is too cute!
By the way, you need to fix a few typos.
Oh, Scoot...
Nice story!!! But when's the next chapter coming out?
3395841 in a long time.... I have too much going on at the moment to focus on this, but don't worry i have half of the chapter written down at the moment, i just havent published it
3439076
it's okay, nothing to worry about
kool...
ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh...
FIRST COMMENT EVER!!!!!!!
BEST FIRST STORY EVERY!!!!!!!
KEEP IT UP ME WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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princess demand it
MOAR!
please
3552989 ive finally gotten around to writing more! i'll try to get it here soon :)
3668581 it's coming, it's coming!
3777255 im on it!
When is the next chap