Soarin's life is perfect, that is until he meets a certain Rainbow maned mare. As he begins this journey called love he must ask: Is she worth it?
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This is my second story, I am expecting 3 or 4 chapters on this. Any comments are welcome and I hope you enjoy. I am still looking for a proof reader.
Hey man great job this is a really good fic I would really like to read more of it and foldout what happens next so hurry up but take your time because Im sure everypony would like it to be a good fic thx
Awww Rainbow Dash has a stallion crushing on her which she looks up to hahaha
Ok, I want you to take your time, but don't take your time because I want more of this story.
And 3 or 4 chapters are fine for a story if each chapter is at least 3,000 words. So yeah....
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I am expecting the future chapters to be longer, chapter 1 was more a less a prologue. I just recently finished finals at my university so I have free time.
very cute, can't wait for more.
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Will do
Soarin' Dash is awesome.
Interesting, but a bit rushed. I hope you slow down a little in the future chapters.
good story, i just want to point out some thing's, first; Soarin’ yelled back towards Soarin’. such as it should be Soarin yelled back towards Rainbow, or yelled back towards rainbowdash, and also “Oh, hi Rainbow Dash.” She shyly said. it should probbly be; she said shyly just wanted to tell you so you can do your best!
I don't knpw if its really possible but this is really bad acting lol...
This has potential, the dialogue just isn't there.
The grammar could definitely improve, but other than that, nothing's wrong, at least for me.
Ooooo they are going to get it on hehehe so BRING IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!
It feels...clunky...for lack of a better description.
a little rushed, but otherwise good, looking forward to more of this!
There's some potential here, but I agree with the others who remarked that it feels clunky, and that the dialogue is awkward. Still, I'll be tracking this.
Sorry about the wait for this Chapter. I tried to make sure I take my time writing it. I hope you enjoy.
God bucking damnit Featherweight.
Record EVERYTHING!
Oh My Damn this is going to be really bad
Damn featherweight!.
On another note, the dialogue has gotten better.
Shit bout ta go down bro!
Woo finally update
featherweight is gonna wreck shit
I present Ch 4 of Is She Worth It. I am not sure if this is my best work, but I hope you enjoy it.
Thunderlane? Hurmmm...
That's kinda fucked up that your a wonderbolt and can't have a relationship FUCK THE COACH!!!!!
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I plan on explaining that. Basically when he started coaching one of the Wonderbolts was in a relationship and got distracted durring a show and crashes into his wingmate. Both are seriously injured and are forced to retire, so the coach contractually bans relationships to prevent another accident. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
695949True true, but that's their fault and they should of learned from it
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Coach isn't a clever pony. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
696200True, but he probably is a loner and doesn't want to see somepony with a lover
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Yeah, I am thinking about writing about Spitfire's relationship with Thunderlane and I would go into more depth about the Coach.
696324Ah okay
cool, cool cool cool,
more character development neat
I'm sorry it took so long for such a short chapter. I had a couple different versions of this and I thought this one wrapped up the story the best. I hope you all enjoy.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
very good story
Awww it's so cute, but if anypony does anything hurtful to this family I'LL TURN THEM INTO ASHES!!!!
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Beautiful conclusion.
779838>>780311>>780843
I'm glad you enjoy my story.
780866WOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Very cute, thanks for the nice read
Awwww.
Dawwwww.
Short
>>darknessdragon i agree
>>darknessdragon i agree wih your first comment
This was so sweet
I really liked it. I liked how you had Rainbow and Soarin adopt Scootaloo.