The mane six have left each other due to a fight, a fight that they blame each other for, a fight they all had a part in, a fight that made them leave without telling many people. Celestia doesn't even know where they are. They refuse to answer Celestia's letters and now Celestia is worried that they may be in danger so she sends someone to find them and bring them back together. It's teen because it has death in it and I don't know if I'll put blood and the comedy tag may or may not apply in the future, and some characters are not marked but may show up in the future. I will be writing this with no prep when I am bored so it won't be too good and there is bound to be spelling and grammar errors.
Chapters (9)
I am absolutely sure I'm writing Applejack's accent wrong
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wash? as in... agent washington? as in redvsblue? i mean really: wash + grey = agent washington
i chould be wrong. but the adds up
And NO PONY in Canterlot noticed that the CAPTAIN OF THE ROYAL GUARD was dead for TWO WEEKS?
1479635 maybe, you do have a point. I never really thought about that.
1479748 the captain was supposed to be on his honeymoon
1479790 so you watch redvsblue as well?
1480086 Of course, love the show, wash IS based if Washington's personality, but for lack of a better name I called him Wash, but at least it gives me something to put in the backstory, when I write it, which will probably be a different story. So if I make a lot of references don't be surprised.
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that has to be the funniest thing I've ever seen!!!
1486405 I laughed at that probably just as much.
I wonder why he didn't like the story though.
Oh well still surprised this story got even 1 like.
1489282 I would love to read your work
but i tend to stay away from dark stories 
.... have you written any others fanfics?
1490487 nope sorry this is my first story, it probably won't be too dark as I think I'm a bad writer, especially when it comes to conveying emotion, plus I am **SPOILER** planning a happy ending
1490545 ok
i think I'll make an exception then 
onto chapter 1!
Surprising Mystery
i would suggest adding more detail, but for your first story it's pretty good 
Hmm.... i think you need to work on displaying scenes more than dialog... plus i don't think Applejack would so openly talk about the problem that involved two dead ponies and the separation of her best friends... that would be pretty life scarring to me
1492272 thanks for the feedback, hope you enjoyed, also the nest chapter will hopefully have less dialogue, and I understand that applejack would have problems telling the story but Wash says the Princess sent him and he's offering to bring the friends back together. Thanks for reading.
kinda short, but i still like it
1517131 Yea, sorry about that, I wrote it in half an hour this morning and I have an attention span of roughly 20 minutes. Glad you like it though.
1517239 20 minutes?!
beats my attaention span 
on a side note:because i got redvsblue in my head, whenever i see the latters from celestia i think "dear director"1517473
1517479 Then we think alike. I came up with the letter idea after listening to the music that goes with "dear director"
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LMAO
man, i must be good at this
Holy shit, not only an update, but it's long? Well longer then usual, I wrote this while I was very tired and very, very bored. Please enjoy.
Looks good
-Shadow
1560288 Thanks man
a lot of R.V.B wash in this, i like it.
redvsblue is over...
oh well, it had a good run...
1598691 Someone told me season 11 was confirmed in a interview. If this is not true I will hunt them down and rip out there spleen.
1598739 and i will help you
i hope there's more redvsblue, it's so awsome!
this is a liked fan fic.
singed, A Dark Reminder with
1632774 thx man, and since you seem to be the only person capable of commenting, I posted a question concerning this story in my latest blog post. Do you mind answering it, no one yes please and thank you.
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hmmmm... intersting...
i read the blog, and i got an idea:keep moveing the story forword, but bring parts of his past into the story, like flash backs and dreams.
and maybe at some point, bring a person/pony from his past into what's going on now.
that is my idea. hope it helps
P.S good luck to you
1633284 I was planning on that but I don't think this story will explain everything and it definetly won't include what happened at the castle before he was sent on his mission. And yes you did help, I now know for sure to go ahead with the dream thing. And thanks for being the only person to actually read one of my blog posts
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the lion king.
no problum man
oh, and for the " I don't think this story will explain everything and it definetly won't include what happened at the castle before he was sent on his mission." you chould have him, wait for it... REMEMBER (DUN, DUN, DUUUUUNNNN) and THAT, will explain everything... right?
damn, i look at "remember" and think: "remember, who you are..."
1633488 ok that's a good idea but be prepared for a pretty shitty twist ending.
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i have no idea what you mean by that... but i must see it!
1633515 in pretty sure it's a love/ hate scenario. Your either gonna love it or absolutely hate it.
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trust me my friend, i am not so simple.
and that piss a lot of peaple off
I don't do clop. So if someone wants to write the rape that was implied, go ahead I don't care. Just send me a message if you do so that I know someone did.
remember so soon?
well, let's see where that gos
WHAT A TWIST
Sorry about it being short but I really wanted to finish this
I know a lot of you are going to be pissed off a this ending but sorry, this is the ending I planned since the beginning.
Now I can start a new story I've been planing for a while. I'm going to put another blog post soon call plans. That post will detail what the next story is going to be.
pissed? no
disapointed? yes
ah well, was fun
1684054 I'm kinda bad at endings... I was dreading having to write the ending.
i am writing i fic with the same title but it's about the mane 6 (minus twilight) get in a fight and then wish they had never met. their wish comes true for a short period of time. i didn't copy the title of this story, i named mine without even ever hearing of this one.
isn't that a coincidence.