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Streekersheep


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I am Failure. I have no friends. My sister is constantly outdoing me. The only member of my family who actually likes me is my brother. I still don't have my cutie mark and I'm 16. I can't do anything right. And now that my brother won't be able to spend any time with me anymore...... I'm done with life.

This is a story that follows Trixie, Gilda, and Fey during the episodes of mlp and other adventures. The chapters will be mostly canon with some non-canon chapters eventually. I put other in the characters because there will be many characters that will be in the story. Sorry if it doesn't seem funny, this is only my second fic, that being said feedback is always welcome. It will be dark to begin with but will probably become less dark.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

I'd post some Failure sons, but I'm too lazy.

"sister is constantly out doing me"
There is a slight difference between someone who is outdoing you and someone who is out doing you. That she's your sister really doesn't help.

"now that your being token away from me," me thinks there should be an "A" in there somewhere....( not that I can judge )
also i'm having a hard time taking the character named " Failure " seriously. especially when she is basically a failure.
Kinda like if Dashie's name was " Goes Fast " .
Of course i read like 6 lines then made this comment and know I'm being evicted from my laptop and can't even read this or the 6 other fav's i have to read sooooooooooooooooooooo. maybe I'll like this once i get to actually read it xD.
:pinkiecrazy: I'm watching this story :pinkiecrazy:

1736068 I'll fix the concerns immediately and rainbow DASH. If I'm not mistaken dashing is a type of movement involving a large amount of speed. Then again, what you can't take seriously isn't something I can see changing. Thanks for the early feedback

1736231
i guess you're right their names are all like that. its just i've never seen it used in the negative before O.o

Sorry if this seems rushed, this took me two and a half hours of straight typing to make so I got a little fed up.

"A Failure is an event, not a person."
- Some old dude

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