Yay! I love this story and it's finally here!

Cool to see this posted here, can I expect updates at the same time as on EQD?

>>9206792067

Most likely yes.

Woot! I loved reading this when it came up on EqD... hoping to see Chapter 6 at some point

oh cool loved this fic and still do

AWW SHEEIT. IT'S HERE!

As a side note, I've always pictured your character as looking like Guile, at least in his SFIV appearance. Even though I berate myself and remind myself that I should picture him as looking like my cousin.

Finally, you put it on this site. Can't wait for chapter 6, you are brilliant!

Image: http://img.chan4chan.com/img/2009-03-26/1238048579531.jpg

chapter six

MOARRRR

>>9215492154 agreed i feel like i was watching a movie

Hell yeah Love this story!

This is pretty good!

Oh good, now I have a way to track this without have to constantly scan EQD for an update . . .

Who am I kidding, I was gonna do that anyway. Still, can't wait for a Chap. 6!

"AND STAFF SERGEANT...IF YOU ARE READING THIS AND HAVE SOMEHOW DISCOVERED MY PONY FOLDERS, PLEASE DO NOT KICK ME OUT, I CAN TOTALLY EXPLAIN"

I havent laughed that hard in a good long while!  

Oh good.  I enjoyed this on EQD, and will continue to track it here.  

Awesome!!! This is my favorite HIE fic and I'm always happy to see something about it

poor feller...were'd you even get the idea for this 'er story?

>>9241992419

My brain thought it up one day whilst I was pondering the mysteries of the cosmos.

hey I can finally delete that first bookmark

also very good so far, keep up the good work

You proved....That Celestia is a troll

Tagged characters are mini spoilers?

Thank you foe putting it on here!

dude this is.... amazing, realistic and amazing. when you were describing the l shaped object i knew what it was.  this is good... very good

THE BEST human in equestria story i have read! Tottally awsome, completely grammatically error free, and very in depth. I applaued the efforts of you and you editors and cant wait to read more.

Want more!

"AND STAFF SERGEANT...IF YOU ARE READING THIS AND HAVE SOMEHOW DISCOVERED MY PONY FOLDERS, PLEASE DO NOT KICK ME OUT, I CAN TOTALLY EXPLAIN"  

i have never laughed that much in my life

>>9245992459 "boo"

YES!  This story is almost the sole reason I even scan EqD anymore!

Now I don't have to anymore because I can just wait for them here!

Seriously though:  GREATEST! STORY! EVER!!!

Thank you so much for posting this here!

May I say sir, EPIC WIN. This is the perfect story! It has science fiction, astounding writing, AND ponies. Is there anything you can't do?

This has got to be the most interesting story I have ever had the pleasure of reading,thank you sooo much!

Now this is some good read

At last! Now I will get an email right after you post an update to this gem! Obvious instant track + email + 5 stars. MOAR!!!

Damnit! Why did the story have to end there?!

Should have been a "The Thing" crossover :P

Yay~~ Haven't read this chapter in so long so I figured I'd just reread everything because it's all so good

Great to see this story here. Probably one of the best executed HIE stories (that isn't a crossover) I've ever seen, if not THE best. Can we expect chapter 6 anytime soon?

"Excuse me Princess"

Dang it, I heard that in Link's voice.

Now Shane sounds like Link in my head all the time

Very nice to see this story appear here

YOU SHOULD DROP EVERYTHING ELSE AND DIRECT ALL YOUR RESOURCES TO THIS PIECE OF MASTERDOM.

I WANT MORE!

Make MOAR, or I will flay you with a jar of mayonnaise!!!!!

Wow, where did that come from? *nervously chuckles*

Screw life,  write ponies.

You you you know about that !!?!?! I swear man I was praising this doc don't. Ban me on Xbox man !!....anyways AWESOME FIC

ABOUT DAMNED TIME YOU PUT IT ON FIMFICTION!

Now moar please

Ahh new chapter. Glad to come across this even before EqD updated it. Really enjoyed the interaction. I think my biggest problem is that Celestia seems a little OOC compared to the show. Mainly her lack of maternal aura, her quiet wisdom and she seems to have much less knowledge of the Bearers personalities and abilities than I would think.

“In hopes of furthering mutually beneficial goals, I will hereby temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself, and these United States Marine Corps, with the Sovereign State of….”

I will hereby temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself, and these United States Marine Corps

temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself

all unprovoked hostile actions

Unprovoked is the key word here folks, which is usually a precursor to someone getting their flanks/asses kicked.  

you might get lucky and your staff sergeant could be a bronie

you might get lucky and your staff sergeant could be a bronie

damn double posts

Might as well follow it here as well.

Can't wait for chapter 6 (Actually, I can, as I managed for the last 4 chapters, but whatever.

>>9395493954

I always forget that second bracket.

I was in the first Ponychan thread. This work still has the level of badassery and perfection that it did that day of lurking. You have done something very few have ever managed to do, Muppetz, and that is to make me give a fuck.

Oh lord, that last line...

“I do hope we can put some of these unpleasantries behind us and- WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!!”

All of my stars for BTTF references. Take them.

HEL.YES

I WANT BUCKING MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!

This is awesome I demand an update

Really? Seriously I was writing something similar to this and it's not even done yet. Well I better not release it since I will be accused of stealing a idea. Well the idea of a human soldier entering the world of Equastria, but that is the only thing my story and this one have in common with a totally different plot. Great Story btw.

More. Please? POWER OF FLUTTERSHY COMPELS YOU!

EXCUUUUUSE ME, PRINCESS!

WHAT IS PINKIE PLANING TO DO? HOW WILL LUNA AND CELESTIA COOPERATE WITH SHAUN? WILL THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY HELP THEM OUT? FIND OUT AT THE NEXT EPISODE OF "ARTICLE 2"!

YES! This pleases AppleJack

GREATNESS!

Ahh....There's nothing more annoying than an end on a story. Please do continue

as someone with friends in the military, i've got to say, i'm getting a kick out of how pronounced your tones are. very action movie. you know what you're doing, and i appreciate that. i am particularly fond of how the human body physically does have something on the ponies, despite you know. magic.

So how are the updates going to work with this, do you have anything pulling you back, or will updates be faster?

Holy shit, that was easily one of the best HiE fics I've read in a while.

Really looking forwards to how this all plays out.

Enjoy my 5 stars my good sir.

I loved the part at the end about your staff sergeant.

Wonderfully well written! Loving the story thus far and always looking forward for more!

you magnificent bastard. I READ YOUR FIC

I power read all 5 chapters today, now im left wanting more!

I love Human In Equestria stories, but this one just seems to shine more than any of the others I've read. You take a very realistic approach, and do a good job at keeping everyone in character.

I eagerly await the next chapter.

And here I was thinking I'd have to keep track of a .chan thread to keep up with newly released chapters... that's a relief

Welcome to FIM Fiction Article 2, it's been a while. Muppetz, stop on by, I run Editing in my spare time, and I'd be happy to help you bounce ideas around for this, I have so many thoughts and not enough brain-space... well, that's if you don't already have plenty of people to do that for you already...

Guards, Y U NO REALIZE HUMAN TERIFIED?!?!

You need to update this fic more it is one of my favorites (Right behind Past Sins and Its A Dangerous Business going out your front door) and I would very much like to see it finished

Sunshine and Rainbows from here on out eh?

your little comment at the end of chapter two was hilarious, imploring the noncomms to seek explanation...

That's what we call the stare

This is a phenomenal story. 10 / 5 stars for you

Celestia damnit, I fucking hate great fanfics. I'm now going to spend the rest of my evening reading this instead of doing something productive like smash old ladies' faces into the cement in Saints Row 3

>>9755797557

LOL as important as smashing an old lady's face in saints row is, You will at least be giving her time to save money to visit image as designed to fix this eventful encounter you will have.

>>9662796627

Actually I suddenly find myself in need of an editor.

My normal guy is out of country and will not be back stateside for some time.

I don't want to bother him on his vacation.

So if you feel like filling in. I'd love to get someone to run over for grammar and spelling and general structure.

If you feel up to it, drop me an email Muppetz540@gmail.com

Great Story, Bro

Dammit son, you wait until you make E-4 to start keeping incriminating files on a computer your superiors can access.

I approve of this, but the one thing that bothers me is that a space voyage seems more like a Chair Force or squid job. Of course, Navy would explain Marines tagging along, but it seems like something like this would go to the boys in Houston first.

>>101952101952

The project was a  Navy gig,

Shane tagged along with a fire team of Marines.

I explain everything later in the story.

Air Force had their fingers in the project, but i'll get to that too.

>>101869101869

Also that comment was posted at a time during which I was undergoing several background checks.

I was slightly paranoid that they might somehow check my history somehow.

>>101978101978 - I just read chapter VI on Equestria Daily. Why don't you post it here as well so more people could enjoy it?

Chapter VI was PHENOMENAL! Absolutely SUPERB! I just cannot wait for more. So far it is one of the best stories I had the pleasure to read.

AWESOME! i can provide feedback without haveing to make an account compatible with EQD!

That's my morning planned out.

Longest chapter by far, but don't forget to compare it to the preceding chapters too, chapter 1 was 13,000 words, but nothing until now has hit more than 8,200. This is a huge chapter by comparison...

Tried to stop in on the Google Docs chat, but the whole thing's flooded out with bronies Impressive work Muppetz.

>>103389103389

I KNOW RIGHT! FiMFiction is best pony.

great chapter as usual

>>103401103401

I couldn't get in either.

It's MY story and I can't get in. Ain't life screwy?

Great! Although i think smaller chapter but shorter intervals of wait would be best.

Thank you for the update.  This was an amazing chapter, and it more than lifted my spirits.  This was just what I needed to get out of my funk.  

Can't remember if I read this somewhere else...ah well if it is the same story I remember it being quite good and I was wondering a while back if I ever even finished it so I'll just read it again... Although I think I might remember it starting differently if this is the same story

Can't remember if I read this somewhere else...ah well if it is the same story I remember it being quite good and I was wondering a while back if I ever even finished it so I'll just read it again... Although I think I might remember it starting differently if this is the same story

Nice job on this chapter keep up the good work

Disregard life plans, become professional author. This is a very enjoyable read.

Unless you intentionally made the majority of the story with a center alignment, or you need to fix that. Paragraphing error aside, good work so far.