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The Princesses find an alien creature barely clinging to life at the scene of a terrifying crash. Can the Combined Power of the Elements of Harmony save it, or more importantly, should they save it? Will  the arrival of this strange creature tear Equestria apart?

First Published
28th Dec 2011
Last Modified
2nd Sep 2014

Yay! I love this story and it's finally here! :pinkiehappy:

Cool to see this posted here, can I expect updates at the same time as on EQD?

>>92067

Most likely yes.

Woot! I loved reading this when it came up on EqD... hoping to see Chapter 6 at some point :twilightsmile:

oh cool loved this fic and still do

AWW SHEEIT. IT'S HERE!

As a side note, I've always pictured your character as looking like Guile, at least in his SFIV appearance. Even though I berate myself and remind myself that I should picture him as looking like my cousin.

Finally, you put it on this site. Can't wait for chapter 6, you are brilliant!

chapter six:flutterrage:

>>92154 agreed i feel like i was watching a movie :pinkiegasp:

Hell yeah Love this story! :twilightsmile:

This is pretty good!

Oh good, now I have a way to track this without have to constantly scan EQD for an update . . .

Who am I kidding, I was gonna do that anyway. Still, can't wait for a Chap. 6!

"AND STAFF SERGEANT...IF YOU ARE READING THIS AND HAVE SOMEHOW DISCOVERED MY PONY FOLDERS, PLEASE DO NOT KICK ME OUT, I CAN TOTALLY EXPLAIN"

I havent laughed that hard in a good long while!  :rainbowlaugh:

Oh good.  I enjoyed this on EQD, and will continue to track it here.  :pinkiehappy:

Awesome!!! This is my favorite HIE fic and I'm always happy to see something about it

poor feller...were'd you even get the idea for this 'er story?

>>92419

My brain thought it up one day whilst I was pondering the mysteries of the cosmos.

hey I can finally delete that first bookmark

also very good so far, keep up the good work

You proved....That Celestia is a troll :trollestia:

Tagged characters are mini spoilers? :trollestia:

Thank you foe putting it on here!:pinkiehappy:

dude this is.... amazing, realistic and amazing. when you were describing the l shaped object i knew what it was.  this is good... very good

THE BEST human in equestria story i have read! Tottally awsome, completely grammatically error free, and very in depth. I applaued the efforts of you and you editors and cant wait to read more.

Want more!

"AND STAFF SERGEANT...IF YOU ARE READING THIS AND HAVE SOMEHOW DISCOVERED MY PONY FOLDERS, PLEASE DO NOT KICK ME OUT, I CAN TOTALLY EXPLAIN"  

i have never laughed that much in my life

YES!  This story is almost the sole reason I even scan EqD anymore! :pinkiegasp:

Now I don't have to anymore because I can just wait for them here! :pinkiecrazy:

Seriously though:  GREATEST! STORY! EVER!!! :flutterrage:

Thank you so much for posting this here! :twilightsmile:

May I say sir, EPIC WIN. This is the perfect story! It has science fiction, astounding writing, AND ponies. Is there anything you can't do?

This has got to be the most interesting story I have ever had the pleasure of reading,thank you sooo much! :yay:

Now this is some good read:rainbowlaugh:

At last! Now I will get an email right after you post an update to this gem! Obvious instant track + email + 5 stars. MOAR!!!

Damnit! Why did the story have to end there?!

Should have been a "The Thing" crossover :P

Yay~~ Haven't read this chapter in so long so I figured I'd just reread everything because it's all so good

Great to see this story here. Probably one of the best executed HIE stories (that isn't a crossover) I've ever seen, if not THE best. Can we expect chapter 6 anytime soon?

"Excuse me Princess"

Dang it, I heard that in Link's voice.

Now Shane sounds like Link in my head all the time :twilightangry2:

Very nice to see this story appear here :pinkiesmile:

YOU SHOULD DROP EVERYTHING ELSE AND DIRECT ALL YOUR RESOURCES TO THIS PIECE OF MASTERDOM.

I WANT MORE!

Make MOAR, or I will flay you with a jar of mayonnaise!!!!!

Wow, where did that come from? *nervously chuckles*

Screw life,  write ponies.

You you you know about that !!?!?! I swear man I was praising this doc don't. Ban me on Xbox man !!....anyways AWESOME FIC

ABOUT DAMNED TIME YOU PUT IT ON FIMFICTION! :flutterrage:

Now moar please :rainbowkiss:

Ahh new chapter. Glad to come across this even before EqD updated it. Really enjoyed the interaction. I think my biggest problem is that Celestia seems a little OOC compared to the show. Mainly her lack of maternal aura, her quiet wisdom and she seems to have much less knowledge of the Bearers personalities and abilities than I would think.

“In hopes of furthering mutually beneficial goals, I will hereby temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself, and these United States Marine Corps, with the Sovereign State of….”

I will hereby temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself, and these United States Marine Corps


temporarily cease all unprovoked hostile actions on behalf of myself

all unprovoked hostile actions

Unprovoked is the key word here folks, which is usually a precursor to someone getting their flanks/asses kicked.  :rainbowkiss:

you might get lucky and your staff sergeant could be a bronie

you might get lucky and your staff sergeant could be a bronie

damn double posts

Might as well follow it here as well.

Can't wait for chapter 6 (Actually, I can, as I managed for the last 4 chapters, but whatever.

>>93954

I always forget that second bracket.

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