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Elemist

Joined March 2012
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I - am that is, My sword will wield for me.

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  • A Ghost Story
    A human's insubstantial adventures in Equestria.

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Fantastic, I finally get to visit my favorite cast of awesome talking ponies to have one small thing keeping me from enjoying it to its fullest.  I CAN"T FREAKING INTERACT WITH ANYTHING.  I guess being a ghost in Equestria isn't the worst thing that could have happened, at least I can shadow my favorite ponies and see what going on in their lives.  Heh, I guess I've become the ultimate stalker, I do miss having someone to talk to that wasn't me, myself or I though.

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Set before the events of season three.

Rated teen for now for safety, rating may change later on based on where the story goes.  Characters will be added later if they get added to the story.  

First Published
29th Apr 2012
Last Modified
17th Jul 2014

Comments ( 1,708 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

Wow, this is pretty good. Need moar chapters.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

It's a fun narration style, I could see this going places. I'll be watching.

#3 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

Seems good. I'll read this later.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

Please continue good sir/madam.:moustache:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

:moustache:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

i have been waiting for one of these

#7 · Chapter 1 · 121w, 6d ago · · ·

Ah, finally a HiE with a bit more originality crammed into it. :yay:

#8 · Chapter 2 · 121w, 5d ago · 4 · ·

Now you can watch all of the Mane 6 as they sleep.

:trollestia:

#9 · Chapter 2 · 121w, 5d ago · · ·

Me want more!

#10 · Chapter 2 · 121w, 5d ago · · ·

I was so intrigued, that I decided to make an account. I hope to see more out of you, sir.

#11 · Chapter 2 · 121w, 5d ago · · ·

blowing in a none existent wind.

I believe you mean non-existent. But meh, I'm just nazi-ing all over the place today... FORESHADOW PINKIE AND THROW PARTIES!!!:pinkiehappy:

#12 · Chapter 2 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

His hair blows in a non-existent wind. I suggest he goes to meet Celly and/or Lulu, and see if they can at least see him. If not, at least stalking the royal pony sisters would be cool on itself :trollestia:

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

P.S. keep up the good work, this piece of fanfiction is unique and I await more.

#13 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

Hmmm. Will come back later with better comment. Kinda tired and some stupid homework...

#14 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · 4 · ·

What I saw at the end ( http://www.nooooooooooooooo.com/ ),

so so sad :raritydespair:

Truly a frightening and despair filled hell :raritycry:

#15 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! No cupcakes? :pinkiesad2:

Will he ever be able to communicate with them?

#16 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

Haha, great chapter! So Pumpkin Cake and Pound Cake can see him! There's that, at least. :pinkiehappy:

But not being able to taste one of Pinkie's cupcakes... truly a tragedy to befall one of mankind. I shall weep for his soul.

#17 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

What if you give him the ability to temporarily possess the ponies?:rainbowderp:

#18 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

He could talk with Rainbow at least..... By running a finger/hand through the clouds in the form of words, he could 'talk' to her..... how long she'd stick around before running away screaming in terror is another matter :rainbowlaugh:

#19 · Chapter 3 · 121w, 4d ago · · ·

Now go haunt the school. All them fillies will be tripping out.:rainbowlaugh:

#20 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Hmm.... It would appear that the CMC can hear him the best. Makes sense I guess. Children are much more open minded about that kind of stuff than adults.

#21 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

:yay: New Chapter! :yay:

#22 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

Can't wait for next chapter, I wonder how "solid" he be and how long he will stay that way after a direct Twilight zapping to the torso. :twilightblush:

Oh Dashie, always afraid of ghosts in these stories. :rainbowderp:

#23 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · 5 ·

OH NOES! He can move stuff! Does that mean hes a...A

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#24 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

Me intrigued... Me want more! :pinkiehappy:

#25 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

>>537016

Heavy,how do I make sandvich?:pinkiehappy:

#26 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 2d ago · · ·

I just caught this story today, read all four chapters that are out. I am now quite intrigued by this and wish you great strokes of continuous creativity in order to continue this story.

@Lone Wolf http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYAGB11YrSs :moustache:

#28 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

>>539401

:pinkiehappy: <epic face>

#29 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

...pleeeease....I need...moooore.....

#30 · Chapter 4 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

A truley awsome fic so far!! Keep it up!

#31 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

First of all, I wanted to thank everyone for the kind words of encouragement.  I have definitely been trying to write faster then I was planning on since so many people seam to be enjoying the story.

And Heavy Weapons Guy ,everyone in the computer lab thought I was crazy when I started laughing maniacally when I watched that link.

#33 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

i love this story

#34 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

Awesomesauce

#35 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

YOU'RE NOT WRITING FAST ENOUGH!  GO FASTER!

I mean, if that's okay with you that is :fluttershysad:

But yeah, This was a great chapter, they finally have evidence that he's there woohoo

#36 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

I second what gnome said

#37 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

Caught on camera! :ajsmug:

#38 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

This is a lot of fun :pinkiesmile:

#39 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

Great chapter, I shall get ready for the next one. :pinkiesmile:

#40 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

BEHOLD! MISTAKES that I nitpick...

At the beginning of my seventh day wandering the town I found myself over at the quant one room schoolhouse and I hear an old fashioned school bell ringing.

Just ask Pinkie Pie, she said that here Pinkie Sense went off because somepony was nearby but it was obviously whatever that thing was.

Where you the one who spilled the ink all over Diamond Tiara today?”  

1. Is it supposed to be quaint?

2. Her.

3. Were.

lol

#41 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

Any story with poltergeists is good:pinkiehappy:

#42 · Chapter 5 · 121w, 1d ago · · ·

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC STORY BRO :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

keep em coming (at a pace of your choice of course) cus this here is some good shit

#43 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 9h ago · 3 · 1 ·

HOW DARE THEE!!!

#44 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 9h ago · 5 · ·

:fluttercry:

#45 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 9h ago · 1 · ·

LOL. That is all. :moustache:

#46 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 9h ago · · ·

Poor shy, he won't eat you. You know I was skeptical when I saw this story first go up, how can you make a story entertaining, exiting, and funny when the person it follows can't talk or be seen by anyone? Well I was happily wrong, keep it up cause this is good stuff.

#47 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 9h ago · 2 · ·

Damnit man, why you gotta make Fluttershy cry? You know you're going to hell for that, right?

#48 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 8h ago · 1 · ·

I'm torn. I was loving this story, and I was GOING to tell you how magnificent it was.

And then you made Fluttershy cry.

You bastard.

You better keep writing, if only so Pinkie can cheer poor Shy-Shy up.

#49 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 8h ago · · ·

Where's Spike in all this. He's biologically a dragon infant and should, therefore, be able to perceive him right?:moustache:

#50 · Chapter 6 · 121w, 8h ago · 2 · ·

Spike was upstairs asleep through this whole adventure since the sleep over started later in the evening, and even though biologically spike is a baby dragon his maturity level is around the same level as the CMC.  So he can sense something is amiss but not be able to hear or see him.

On another note....I FEEL LIKE A HEEL.  OH GOD WHY DID I HAVE TO MAKE FLUTTERSHY CRY.....I'm going to crawl into bed and weep into my pillow.  

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