sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!
The Great and Powerful Trixie is a pony who can take the licks. A pony who can stick it out, through thick and thin. It's true - Trixie need not be lectured about patience or karma, she is indeed above it all! Trixie can wait it all out, she says. But deep down inside? Perhaps it's true...
The Great and Powerful Trixie has feelings, too.
Written for Bean’s Writing Group.
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This was a nice story, but painful to read. Poor Trixie.
Oof
I wonder what's gonna happen in the future, if Starlight tells the truth or not, if Sunburst has any opinion on this.
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I wonder that, too!
You’ll notice this with some of my other stories - this is just kind of my style of short story, leaving it intentionally open-ended. I like providing the reader with a really interesting situation or problem, giving them all the dramatic details, and letting them come up with their own situations from that. However, if people like this story enough, I would absolutely write a sequel, because the feelings written about in this story - from both perspectives - are spoken from experience, and its not like I don’t have more to say.
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My favorite kind!
Even with E rated stuff, I love delivering the gut punches. If you do like my prose but want something more light hearted (read: MUCH more light hearted) you can check out my G3 fics; a comedy one about trucking and a more straightforward and cute slice of life one that’s possibly the most fluffy thing I’ve ever written in my life.
You went for the figurative route with the prompts... that's pretty incredible. This is a lovely piece
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i took it as a challenge!
i mean, HOW else would you even use the phrase, “have fencing”???
This was missing quotation marks, some italics that would be key, especially with Starlight’s twist, and generally could use a few proof-reading touch-ups. However, it’s not a twist that I’ve seen done before and you gave us a very good rendering of Trixie’s internal state.
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