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sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!

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FEATURED! Bonus contest: if anyone can correctly cite me the source for the name of the monster in this story, I’ll give you a prize. No, I didn’t come up with that incredible name.

Written for Bean’s writing group. Prompt: “Discord gets sued”.

Fluttershy has had quite a week. Nothing has really gone right, her anxiety has kept acting up, and Discord’s been gone for days.

When he finally comes back, he looks…different.

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The cover art was ai-generated, wasn't it? :twilightsmile:

When he finally comes back, he looks…different.

I'm a little surprised that the cover art isn't picture of him, then.

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Of course it was!


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Because NovelAI sucks at Discord LOL

:moustache: He's gone neon purple plaid . . .
:raritycry: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
:moustache: Is this an air raid?

:yay: yes, maybe, lets ask Discord

:facehoof: Her whining was better...Just a little

The term "Mary Sue" originates from the Star Trek fandom.

Mind you, Q seems more like the type to cause what I'm going to charitably call "that character".

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That’s a fun piece of trivia! A connection I didn’t even realize.

I was just going off a text prompt of “Discord gets sued”, and wanted to choose the non-obvious route.

A massive hellish creature emerged from the depths of space, its mouth as wide as an entire planet. Its grotesque form was shaped like a human, but with a large bulging forehead, a long neck, short arms, and a thick tail, which served as a third leg. It had a reptilian body, but instead of legs, it had two pairs of spindly, thin tentacles. Its skin was pale green and wrinkled. Its fingers and toes were webbed together.

Ahh, you've seen us native New Jersians before, I take it?

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Wait a minute, the tail serving as a third leg but instead of legs it had four tentacles? Oh, and then its toes are apparently webbed but again it doesn't actually have legs. I haven't seen such a self-contradicting creature description since Dwarf Fortress. :applejackconfused:

11457099 Well, that's New Jersey for ya. :trollestia:

If this writing contest has a category for originality, this should definitely get top marks. Well played.

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Whenever I write for Beans, I at least attempt to take the prompt in an interesting direction. For whatever reason, I didn’t at first with this one - I started with a courtroom drama. But as I got more and more bored of it, I thought of this funny wordplay !

Wow, that was random and interesting!

A question that simple was all Fluttershy could manage, completely awestruck as she she stood in the brilliant glow of every primary color at once, beaming over her and pulsing with varying degrees of strength.

hair had became brighter in color and spun faster when he moved his head. His horn was still gold and sharp, but the tip had become smaller.

Remove the second “her,” and change became to “become.”

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OHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDFF

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Yup, they did a reading

I snorted. Very on-point Discord shenanigans.

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