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DeathToPonies


sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!

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Things aren't going well for Twilight. Celestia seems to be upset with her, things are starting to make less sense, and she keeps seeing that face in the mirror.


Written for a Quills and Sofas speedwriting contest, under a one hour time crunch.
Cover Art by NovelAI.

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That Face... will be in my nightmares

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Dude, you do NOT want to see the original generation. I had to blur/censor it for the cover art. It was way, way worse. The entire inside of her mouth was so detailed…it seriously felt like an evil presence.

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Lmao Jesus its that bad, huh?

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Novel AI is fantastic for the coding-illiterate like me, who don’t want to get into the whole stable diffusion noise, because GENERALLY, it does a good job of staying on-topic and not producing horrifying abomination results. However, the furry model has a lot more difficulty than the anime model, and for some reason, using the phrase “screaming” on the furry model usually produces extremely detailed gaping mouths taking up most of the screen. If I had to guess, it’s basing it off detailed vore tags from e621.

Bracketing the screaming tag and adding “horrific, scary, grotesque” to the negative tags helps, but man this freaked me the hell out when I first saw it, compared to everything else its produced.

Unsettling, leaves so many questions asked

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Only got an hour to write? No time to instill all the detail you want into a story? Have no fear! Just leave it suuuper vague and open ended, thus letting the audience draw their own conclusions, basically doing your work for you as they write their own endings and explanations!

other one-off stories of mine like the Cozy one and the Toola Roola one might get sequels, but this one is gonna forever stay this one single story. the votes tell me people enjoyed it at least :)

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No offense, but Twilight's face doesn't scared me. She look ridiculous! :rainbowlaugh:

Sorry, it's just to me. It looks like she is giving a blowjob to a invisible dick. :trollestia:

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Since the training data used in the AI to generate the image that pertains to ponies was e621, you probably aren’t too far off with this theory! If you’d like to see the unblurred, uncensored image I can send it to you, but I wont post it here

*looks at the picture*
I can do that to ya know!

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So what exactly did she do that caused Celestia to be disappointed and caused all this?

aww- lookit that face! She's saying “I'm a piranha! They're in the Amazon!”

Looks like Twilight discovered crack.

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I agree with Adamastos. What caused Celestia to become disappointed in Twilight? Or are we not meant to know?

Can I see the picture? Horror is my fave.

I honestly would love to have an expanded version of this. You show a knack for tapping into the epistolary format here, and it’s a genre on the site that really gets a lot of good exploration, and plenty of titles to learn from.

To be honest, what was the point of mentioning a TV and that twilight is married to pinkie? It just felt kind of random.

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She has gone so batshit crazy that she is hallucinating technology from other realms. And also that she is married to Pinkie Pie.

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now this i gotta see

heres my discord if you find the time to send it over.
kowhaifan#5578

This reminds me a lot of this one animatic from a while back.

It mainly just fits if we go with the theory that the unforgivable thing Twilight did was killing Pinkie. I think there's also a TV in one of the shots so there's that. I know logically that these are two entirely unrelated projects, but I still really like to imagine that they're related somehow.

I am starting to wonder if any of this is real. I hear ponies talking about things on the news. Did we used to have news? Did we used to have…TV? When did I get a TV? Why do I even know what a TV…is?

I don't think this was just random, but how the fuck does she even know what a TV is? if I assume that they don't have television in Equestria which makes this even more surreal which I fucking love, great story, very confusing I really like it...

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this was the first thing I thought of lol

I don't get it.

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hi ice! kinda cool and random you dropped in on a couple of my stories to drop some opinions haha

you are probably the only person on the site i'd consider listening to asking for a sequel to this story...but still nah. this story was highly experimental and written from the heart, and it's been a blast seeing people discuss theories and more. your compliments mean quite a great deal to me still though.

Why am I married to Pinkie Pie?

TWIPIE :twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy:

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So where can we see it? :twilightoops:

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Do you think you can give me an explanation at least from your perception of what the hell's going on I'll give you mine

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That's cheating! let me hear yours first, and then I'll tell you mine.

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Sure I'll give you mine it's fair but you have to respond to me afterwards I would hope cuz I really want to hear your perspective
She's schizophrenic the first time the face appeared was under some form of stress from her job Twilight's under an extreme amount of stress the face that she is seeing is a hallucination of some kind caused by some trigger the different notes that we are seeing are all increasingly becoming either bloody unorganized or questioning what's going on which is a very good common Trope of schizophrenic who sometimes lose track of reality and can't tell what's fiction from reality the blood she might have blacked out and killed Pinkie Pie the reason why she's questioning why she's married to Pinkie Pie is because she can't remember that she was always married to Pinkie Pie Pinkie Pie became worried after noticing her wife acting strange we also get a timeline of about 9 months ago talking about some event that is not spoken about at all I'm going to guess that 9 months ago Pinkie Pie had noticed some strange signs with Twilight Sparkle they got together and started talking about it but then Twilight Sparkle at some point might have snapped maybe under the pressure of the argument or stress and killed Pinkie Pie there that's why we are seeing some bloody letters especially the letters that have become too soaked in blood to read also the notes are all out of order which makes me think that at some point Twilight tried to document what was going on to her and as time went on it became disorganized leading to the mess that is right here also a couple conversation give me information explaining that her friends all left her one by one they got tired of her they can't help her

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