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[Paused for now, but the Full Prelude is Complete :ajsleepy:]

The skilled. The silent. The cunning.

[Or, the perfect disaster?]

Forgiveness. Integrity. Respect.

[What could that mean?]

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(Takes place from season 6, episode 12 and so on;) The Tree of Harmony's friendship map is a lot larger than the mane six believes it to be. If anything, those ponies aren't experienced enough to handle this new responsibility; leave the awesome, spine-breaking fighting to this unexpected, new team-- and sprinkle a bit of thorned roses on top.

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Progress Log:
Prelude #1: Complete
Prelude #2: Complete
Prelude #3: Complete
Prelude #4 (Final): Complete
Chapter 1: In Progress
Chapter 2+: TBA

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Special thanks;

(For Prelude #I;)

Seventh Heaven :trollestia:
For the inspiration!

Stella Regis :twilightsmile:
For the epic edits!

(For Prelude #II & #III;)

Stella Regis :pinkiehappy:
For the awesome review!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )
Comment posted by FamousLastWords deleted Jul 2nd, 2016

I simply must applaud you here. The reactions and feelings of Starlight (who I'm assuming is the main character) seem pretty realistic compared to the show. I'd say your Maud is better but...anyone can write Maudlin honestly, no offense. Pinkie and Trixie are also more decently done and are close to the show's characteristics too.

The plot is only slightly confusing, but I'm sure I'll catch on eventually. Btw, Trixie seems super seductive here...Me likey. :pinkiehappy:

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I'd say your Maud is better but...anyone can write Maudlin honestly, no offense.

Really? Than I must be missing something because I find her extremely difficult to write. To me, she's as hard as writing Zecora or Pinkie.

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