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After being ridiculed, humiliated and bullied for the Gabby Gums incident, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo run away from the town called Ponyville. They run as far away as they possibly can before ending up in the Badlands. While there, the three plan their revenge while the ponies of Ponyville want to apologise after finding out the truth.
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This already exists on the site. I know it does. Or used to anyway 🤔.
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I think the one you're thinking of is supposed to be a remake of this story. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/511043/dictators-of-ponyville-a-ponyville-confidential-story. Looks like the remake was made with the permission of this author.
Is it with Chrysalis and her Changelings again? Or do we see the CMC joining Tempest Shadow and the Storm King as a alternative?
11471784
I have no plans for Chrysalis to be in this story but we’ll see.
11471794
Well, the rewrite for that other author did the Chrysalis/Changelings route. And it already ended on a surprisely good ending.
So, maybe seeing you do a new interpretation with Tempest Shadow/Storm King having three additional recruits will be interesting.
Very nice story.
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Thank you!
Scootaloo, I highly doubt that you can deal with the Storm King himself, even if he is just a big buffoon.
I do hope the R.S'S will set this town straight one way or another.
Even though it's early, do you think Luna will visit the CMC's in the dream world?
I wonder how hot it was going through that desert & who do you folks think is watching the CMC's?
Do you think Scootaloo will snap out of her revenge? For I believe the folks in Ponyville are probably suffering enough from their mistakes knowing they'd probably had to report to the R.S'S about what happened.
11473122
Well, “Dictators Of Ponyville” is supposed to be the Crusaders taking over the area. Again, Scootaloo won’t be unredeemable, though. Thanks for the questions!
11473567
No problem. You think D.T. herself will be revealed as the REAL mastermind behind G.G.'S & will the townsfolk ever read the apology letter?
11473656
The towns folk will read the apology letter by the end of the story. As of right now, it hasn't been written.
11474064
Thanks again. What are you're plans for D.T.?
11474309
She will be forgiven when the time is right.
11474445
Knowing you, you'll think of something. For now, I anticipate the next chapter.
11474445
Why is is she being "forgiven" too? She did create this stupid mess in the first place.
You ain't "worthy" of ruling a kingdom either. While I only agree that the Storm King is definitely a idiot. But you Scootaloo, is still a frickin child.
Actually no better than somebody like Cozy Glow of all ponies that thought the same stupid thing of what your doing.
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Well, blackmailing is certainly inexcusable; creating a dictatorship is not an answer to a problem that you can solve with the right help. The reason I will be forgiving her is that her crime would be nothing compared to the crusaders. (Future chapter)
11487026
Touche.
Although, the CMC are rightfully pissed. Despite that, I do disagree with Scootaloo wanting to face a evil ruler like the Storm King, and take his army for herself against Ponyville?
Seriously, she is NO Arkham Knight/Red Hood from the Batman Arkham Series, or Atriox from Halo Wars 2 with the military/war tactics and all. You get what I'm saying?
Do you think the folks of Ponyville(I.E: Mane 6, Spike, & MAC) will be forgiven for half the reason this happened in the first place? Personally in my opinion not likely, I'll speculate not even the R.S'S will want anything to do with or continue to have them as heroes anymore.
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They will be forgiven one day, however, right now it will be difficult.
11487076
Yes, I get what your saying.
Managed to read this so far.
What will happen next?
Its been a while since I last read anything from you.
11492183
You’ll have to wait and see.
11492197
I wonder how Spike felt too?
Well, that was surprising? Normally in other similar stories. She rightfully punished them.
Anyway, I'm glad that Celestia has got some outside connections and already found the right town where the CMC's are.
Well done here once again. I was expecting to have the R.S'S scolding their heroes harsher than that & wasn't expecting them to have a good laugh in situations like this. Can you by chance give out a clue to what's set to happen in the next chapter & what do you mean by you're UNCERTAIN to how long next Monday's chapter will be?
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What kind of punishment do you think the R.S'S have in store for them?
11493279
I remember in another Gabby Gums bashing story similar to this, where Luna gives them recurring nightmares about their guilt. I don't remember what Celestia did in that other story?
But, it's either she "temporary" fires Twilight as her student for this heinous act. Or something to do with the Mane Six not deserving the Elements of Harmony?
But, IF I was Celestia/Luna in this particular remake of this.
I will inform the parents/family of the remaining Mane Five ( Granny Smith already knows and scolded Applejack and Big Mac. ) of what they did. ( IF they don't know what happened already? )
Celestia did say that it is "not her place" to rightfully punished them ( Which is a stupid reason, and that she, and Luna should also punish them too in my personal opinion. ).
Well, their own parents/Granny Smith are the "right people" to punished them, am I right?
11493348
I agree, the R.S.'S should dish out some punishments. In my personal opinion, I believe either a THREE-YEAR SUSPENSION from celebrating holiday's/parties or THREE MONTHS of Canterlot COMMUNITY SERVICE is punishment enough. Even THREE MONTHS of DREAM NIGHTMARES courtesy of Luna works just as well.
11493348
I believe the story you're looking for is CMC GOING AWAY.
11496800
Yes, that's it. Thank you.
11496863
You're very welcome.
Pfft! Yeah, rrriiiggghhhttt.
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You know that counts as killing/murder/assassination, right!?
You are so WRONG and so naive! I understand your anger, but this is ludicrous thinking, you're still a child. You ain't NO Madara, Nagato/Pain, or Obito from Naruto that has similar tragic pasts, and wants to completely change, rule, or burn/destroy the world with them.
You're just a normal pegasus filly that sadly can't fly well. What are you gonna do against a warmongering tyrant, and his army?
It's strange. At first I thought after hearing their whereabouts from Celestia, the mane six would've rush right over to the badlands in a heartbeat. Nonetheless Luna visiting them in the dream world, guess they've got too busy with other matters.
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Yes I know it counts as that. You don't have to believe me, but she won't go that far. You'll see why.
The remake has begun❤ I'm super excited to see what your remake has in store man👍
Also if you want to borrow any elements from my remake for yours, you have my blessing😉
11502198
I'd say that's a SUPERB idea, having two author's who the best alternate endings to this episode working side-by-side could bring in new ideas & possibilities. I even anticipate what kind of role he has for Luna in this as well & it could be a dream sequence similar to what readers read in yours.
11502198
Thanks man! I'm looking forward to writing this. Buckle up, it's going to be a long ride!
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Think you can give your readers a clue to what's set to happen in next Monday's chapter?
I'd like to point out certain aspects in this chapter:
1. Luna realizing she has more in common with the CMC'S than the others realize.
2. Unlike the folks of Ponyville, Spike is beginning to redeem himself by searching for the CMC'S being Luna's contact with the royal guards.
3. Luna finally realizing how much of a failure ruler her older sister is & probably beginning to realize she should be the new ruler when the time is right.
4. Luna realizing she should've started looking for the CMC'S upon their departure from Ponyville & is now working towards redeeming herself by searching for them. Even being prepared for the long journey ahead of her.
5. Capper Cat is making a early appearance ahead of the MLP Movie & is providing excellent info on the CMC'S doings during they're stay. Hopefully he'll redeem himself for purchasing weapons by helping the CMC'S see the light of reason.
P.S. One spelling error: ONCE should've been ONES. Which is correct REALISE or REALIZE?
Luna's going to fail, isn't she?
11505781
Realise is the correct one for me because my English is closest to England. Thanks for pointing out the error, I didn't notice.
11506177
Not a problem.
11506129
Your guess is mine.
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️