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This is gonna be a bumpy ride :rainbowwild:

lol, this should be entertaining. Though I did notice some typos in it still. Now comes the part where I demand moar of this glorious originalness :trollestia:

Eh. Dialogue is a little trite.

Seems like a nice introduction. Good that you got away from fandom impression of Lyra and made your own personality of her. Admittingly
the dialogue is a little bit stale, but different. It shall be interesting as the story progresses.

I don't like human stories..but I'll give this one a try, you've impressed me before Anony, I have a feeling you're going to do it again.
:coolphoto:

is this going to be a long story?
i like the story so don't stop......if it ok whit you....:fluttershyouch:

this will be awesome!:pinkiehappy:

You're in the sidebar, and I expect you to move into the featured box soon. Excellent start!

I want some MOAR!:raritystarry:

“China is another continent.”

Country. :twilightsmile:

Or on another continent if you prefer. :pinkiesmile:

“It’s my horn, you idiot,” Lyra mumbled.

“If you were hallucinating, you wouldn’t be talking to yourself,” Lyra responded smartly, shuddering and then relaxing, closing her eyes. “Now shush, stop making noises. Head hurts.”

Lyra rolled her eyes slightly. Her horn glowed, and she levitated the human a full foot off the floor.

Tsundere Lyra is best Lyra. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png

and america is a planet the writing seems a little stiff something you'd expect from an intellectual like twilight not from a musician like lyra

I like it! Interested in reading more!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I'm gonna need some more of this, Author-Man. Chop chop.

Riz

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What's the fic about ?

I really should have said aspirin instead of Ibuprofen.

Lyra, why u so adorable

I like your descriptions of the human world through Lyra :twilightsmile:

Please don't make him a utterly weak against ponies. And why the heck is he getting headaches? Either way I want some MOAR!:pinkiehappy:

Are those headaches some kind of magic allergy? :pinkiegasp:

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Oh dear. :twilightoops:
Having an allergy to magic would suck so bad if we could visit Equestria.
A medicine would be made to counter it probably. :pinkiehappy:

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A medicine to counter a form of energy? :rainbowhuh: Good luck with that!
I thought of something like this in my upcoming story as well. Maybe humans react completely different to the equestrian enviroment. Ponies react normal and use magic, earn cutie marks. There are fics out there where even humans earn cutie marks, but maybe even these simple things for ponies might cause violent transformations for humans. Not like *POOF* and the cutie mark is there... What if it will be a painful, gory moment that is traumatizing for the human?

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You've got an excellent point there.
You think it probably would only be fair that the Ponies had some kinda issue with our world too? :derpyderp2:

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Thing is we don't have magic in our world. maybe chronic and sustained exploring in our world might do the same to ponies since we have electric smog, radio signals left and right and bombard the planet with sattelite signals. Come to think of it, this miight affect unicorns the most since their magic might diminish among all this technological filth in the air. Or it might cause their magic to go random. You want to get a spell out to hold a cup of tea and instead you fire lasers or the flower pot explodes as the flower gets huge. You know stuff that could happen. Or just imagine Celestia comes to our world and messing with the Solar system or merely the Earth's rotation to set the sun right. Or Luna pulling the moon into place. Oh, the tidal waves...:raritydespair:

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Oh dear god that would be terrible...but it makes since! :pinkiegasp:

Dear god this is awsome!
More please?

Lyra's Human Obsession: Origins
this is how it began people

Tv is addicting in all cultures

Favorite, liked, can't wait for more :)

Ok, I'm. Hooked. Bring on the story.

... i see what that human did thar!

giggity lyra is so innocent..... welp im gonna take that humans advice and sleep ... its 1 in the morning here
:ajsleepy:

DAW OVERLOAD :rainbowkiss:

I can't tell if I should feel like he kind of took advantage of her, or if should just say 'D'awwwwwwww'. I'll go with the latter. :heart:

The part about there being only a thousand or so ponies seems odd. Considering the number of towns and cities on the official map, including four that appear to have some number of skyscrapers, I'd think hundreds of thousands or even millions would be more accurate.

So I take it that Bon Bon and Lyra aren't a couple in the world this story takes place in?

"china is another continent"i really wanna punch you for that :twilightangry2: but besides that this story is quite interesing

1319147 Well, it's certain that it's not in the billions.

1319599 Certainly, billions does seem rather unlikely. I just find the thousands figure to be pretty unlikely as well.

D'aaawwww.
Who's as silly unicorn? You are! Yes you are!

Reaction One: Wow. Lyra's a bitch.
Reaction Two: I'm pretty sure they have refrigerators in equestria.
Reaction Three: I don't know if I like this story...:unsuresweetie:

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