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  • T An Affliction of the Heart

    Can a creature that feeds on love ever feel it?
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  • T An Affliction of the Heart: Volume Two

    Part two of An Affliction of the Heart.
    36,188 words · 15,692 views  ·  2,752  ·  41
  • T Transcend

    Alone and powerless, Chrysalis must turn to a last resort to regain her power.
    46,244 words · 16,699 views  ·  1,526  ·  26
  • E Family Reunion

    Daring Do returns, triumphant, from her latest treature hunt. Now, to face her family.
    1,282 words · 3,258 views  ·  339  ·  4
  • T An Affliction of the Heart: Volume Four

    A hybrid develops new powers, a dark queen escapes, while a pegasus and a changeling try to normalise their married life.
    50,150 words · 8,837 views  ·  1,693  ·  43
  • E Why Pinkie Pie Smiles

    What does it take to make someone value a smile so much?
    4,649 words · 4,682 views  ·  301  ·  4
  • T Incorrect Assumptions

    Luna catches Celestia and Twilight, red-hooved...
    1,703 words · 19,244 views  ·  1,731  ·  46
  • E What is love?

    What is love? And who better than a changeling to understand it?
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Blog Posts16

  • 1w, 4d
    Planning out new Affliction story(ies)!

    I dunno how to do it all!

    Should I go with concurrent uploads, or staggered/as-I-write-them uploads?

    The reason for this is, the two stories will be having a good deal of their plot-points happening concurrently! For instance, in the spoiler so that people can't complain:

    In Affliction 5, chapter 1, we see Kuno instructing changelings to 'become more independent' and 'find something unique to wear'. They all come back with collars with bells on them. Except Chitin, who comes back with a golden Ankh in her ear.

    In Chitin's story, chapter 1, we see Chitin erm... 'bribing' the jeweler to give her said piece of jewellery. While walking home, she walks past the pet shop, with has an entirely new room built onto it, has been repainted, and completely cleaned top-to-bottom just that morning.

    So if you read any one of them, it could spoil various parts of the partner story.... So staggering them to be released as I finished them like I usually do, might end up spoiling some of the partner plots before that chapter is even released!

    The alternative is to release chapter at a 1-for-1 ratio. One chapter of Affliction, one chapter of Chitin's. Problem with that is that there could then be a longer wait between each pair of chapters being released...

    So I dunno what to do!

    I think I will stagger the release of the stories, submission-wise. They're both Affliction. When I posted volume 4 it was at the top of the box in like an hour. :pinkiecrazy: I don't want to spam the feature box. So I'll likely post Affliction 5, and then Chitin's story a few days after, when the heat on the previous posting has gone down a bit. You guys will have to wait an extra few days or so before getting tasty Chitin story start, but what can I do?

    My patreon people will have access to Chitin's story early, I guess :pinkiecrazy: I can't give links to anyone else because NSFW blog posts aren't allowed and are never coming back. Sigh. And Chitin's story is really, really NSFW. Right out of the gates!

    Though, I will add: You could totally go to my patreon page, hit the 'activity' button and look at the posts there that are for everyone, not just paid patreons. :pinkiecrazy: No sign-up required!

    So... whatcha all think? Concurrent release? Or give-no-fucks-just-post-what-ya-got? I kinda wanna do concurrent releases, but I wonder if the effort would even be worth the meagre payoff of keeping the two stories in line...

    11 comments · 247 views
  • 3w, 1d
    It's over

    Hooray!

    Affliction 4 is over. Done. Finito.

    Time to start on volume 5.

    Which will run concurrently with 'Chitin's Story', so you'll see a fair bit of crossover in the story arcs of those two.

    Sorry if I've been slow to the whole writing thing lately. I've been sick. And it's been really bad the last few weeks. My mother thinks Ross River fever or glandular fever. I think meh. I'll know when the blood results get back. Either way, it makes writing a chore. I can't think of words. Sentences don't work. Plot points stop making sense to me, etc etc etc.

    But I'm gonna keep trying!

    P.S. Chitin is gonna be sexy! I already have her all figured out! Shorter mane than Kuno, more punkish, and a single gold hoop, and a single gold ankh on said hoop. Because it represents 'life'. And she's totes deep like that. :pinkiecrazy:

    Keep an eye out for all new affliction shenanigans.

    And join the Affliction-verse group! You can ask me things in the threads area!

    Anyhow, be cool! :derpytongue2:

    10 comments · 383 views
  • 3w, 6d
    Upcoming Affliction story!

    I'm planning a new thing! Based in the Affliction-verse. :twilightsmile:

    Now, if you've been following affliction 4, you'll know how this is possible in the universe of it. And I'm intending it to be 'An Affliction of the Heart: Chitin's Tale(/story)'. Chitin being the changeling currently known as 'Speaker'.

    And the reason I say this now instead of just working on it quietly and posting it sometime is a few things:

    First off, no, I'm not stopping work on Kuno/Warden. Not yet. Don't be stupid. They need another entire volume just to disentangle the absolutely nutty web of plot lines holding them all together.

    And the second, main point... I'm kinda leaning heavily towards making Chitin's story adult rated. Clop and whatnot.

    It'll still be mostly story-based, with clop for flavour. But it will also enable a lot more fun changeling things without having to shy away from certain points because of the rating! I have to do that with the current Affliction series. I can't make the descriptions too adult. Because the children might see!

    The main reason that I bring this up now is that I am capable of being reasoned with. If enough people complain about the upcoming story being adult, I could maybe make it cleanish rated like the current Affliction series.

    So, would it be terribly problematic for the majority of you if the new series was rated adult?

    P.S. I am most definitely back, bitches! Four story updates in a week! Aww yeah! :pinkiecrazy:

    18 comments · 304 views
  • 4w, 16h
    Affliction WIP

    Right here! Click it!

    Doubtful I'll get an entire chapter done tonight. So here's a WIP link for you people who are too impatient! It should be done... soonishly. I don't know! Could be tonight! Tomorrow! or the month after next!

    7 comments · 241 views
  • 4w, 4d
    I'm back!

    From the land of the non-writing! Between Destiny, Diablo 3, SWTOR, malaise, coffee milks, and generally being lazy, I haven't written anything workable in like two months!

    But I posted the start of a new romance/clop story! I can't link because mein fuhrer won't allow NSFW links in blog posts. :flutterrage:

    Anyway, my patreons have the link because they're all awesome. Which is one of those perks I didn't think of! They get access to stories early! You know, because the review process takes ages these days.

    Anyway, expect to see the new story on your dashboard and probably in the goddamn feature box in the coming days! Pony writes have been so slow during the off-season, any old schmuck with a keyboard can king-hit the feature box. I'm the schmuck with the keyboard!

    Thanks for you all being patient with me :twilightsmile: I hope there's more writing to come soon!

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This story is a sequel to An Affliction of the Heart: Volume Two

Swarm is the first ever changeling/pony hybrid, child of Warden the pegasus, and Kuno the changeling.

What does life have in store for this unlikely trio?

Twists, for a start!

First Published
21st Apr 2013
Last Modified
9th Sep 2013
Comment posted by Metroid Celebi Prime deleted at 7:41pm on the 21st of April, 2013
#2 · 78w, 6d ago · 34 · · New Beginnings ·

ERMAGURD Pegasus i'ma hug the shit outa you :pinkiehappy:

#4 · 78w, 6d ago · 11 · 3 · New Beginnings ·

After Swarm left they got BUSY!!!

Comment posted by Metroid Celebi Prime deleted at 2:49pm on the 21st of April, 2013
#7 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Well seeing this in my notifications thoroughly made my day! At this rate I'm NEVER going to get any work done - Not that I care now I haz moar poniez & changelings & swarm. :twilightsmile:

#9 · 78w, 6d ago · 4 · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460744 dat last image left a solid scar in my love for changeling fic. :fluttercry:

#10 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460911 I didn't even notice that bit...........oops! :twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush:

The important things is the caption, not the picture.

#11 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460917 oh yes, but as they say, there's a thousand words in a picture :fluttershysad: but glad to see ya didn't mean it :pinkiesmile::heart:

#12 · 78w, 6d ago · 9 · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460921 Kuno is No.1 on my 'Protected Changelings' list. Anypony tries to hurt her and I'll be paying a........'visit,'

#13 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460930 I don't know if she's #1 on my list of favorite oc changelings, but she's definitely on my top 3 that's for sure :pinkiehappy: I know there's Chocolate, Kuno, hmm, may have to review my top 10 but hey she's up there :twilightblush:

#14 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

HNGHHHH

*Contracts diabeetus*

Too much... adorable... avenge mee...

#15 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Damn, I cannot wait to read this. Damn Aussie time zone.

#16 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460967 I too come from the land of oztralya

#17 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460967I like your name.

#18 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Right, well that was rather good, but there's still something wrong with it.

It needs to have MOAR! :eeyup:

#19 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Best part about this? I'm new to Affliction, but I could tell what was going on. Sure, it involved less-then-desirable expository dialogue, but hell, AP, you handled it brilliantly.

I really hope that things go down, because as sickeningly sweet as this is, I can already smell the conflict a mile away.

#20 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2460940 I do not know of 'Chocolate', so she isn't on my list. Oh well, got a few hundred on mine anyways.

#21 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

32 and 0 as of this posting.. Loved the story and I am waiting eagerly for the next.

#23 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461045 want the name of the story I read her from? it's pretty good :pinkiehappy: almost as good a Dr. Pepper Float with caramel :pinkiehappy::heart:

#24 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461063 Go on then, at least it will be another named one, instead of hundreds of random ones.

#25 · 78w, 6d ago · 5 · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461050 I have a screenshot of the original Affliction hitting near 200 likes and no dislikes. I think I still have it somewhere.

#26 · 78w, 6d ago · 2 · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461068 here's a link, http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73161/heart-of-fire-you039ll-be-in-my-heart enjoy :pinkiehappy:

#27 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I LOVE IT!

aaaanndd, no dislikes so far

AWESOME!!

#28 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

:moustache: Let us start this epic adventure :rainbowdetermined2:

#29 · 78w, 6d ago · 3 · · New Beginnings ·

Cool story, bro. :)

Can't wait until the Shining Armor/Chrysalis side story, after you get done with this one. :)

#30 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

This story just oozes with adoration.

#31 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Cute chapter. So far, so good.

#32 · 78w, 6d ago · 4 · · New Beginnings ·

Oh no!!!! The feels!!! There already here!!!!

Great chapter :pinkiehappy:

#33 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I'm in love, again!

Awesome job, AP.

#34 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I'm excited that the story goes on! Keep up the good work!

#35 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Mikey lovey! Want moar! NEED MOAR!!!

#36 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

Before I pushed the 'like' button it was 59... after it was 72, ether this story gets likes fast or my opinion matters more...

#37 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461325 feels like the characters casted a 'Want it, Need it' spell on you doesn't it :twistnerd:

#38 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461335

You know it, bro.

#39 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461339 was a good call then :rainbowlaugh: ... besides... the feeling. Is. MUTUAL!?!  :pinkiecrazy::heart:

please make chapter 2 come out soon :fluttershysad::heart::scootangel:

#40 · 78w, 6d ago · 10 · · New Beginnings ·

Kuno is one of the cutest characters I've read.

Ever.

She's playful, nearly a sociopath, and quite lighthearted. She just thinks completely different to everyone, and you've managed to retain that the whole way through the series.

#41 · 78w, 6d ago · 5 · · New Beginnings ·

Something tells me Swarm is gonna get bullied really bad at school, damn racist pony fillies!

#42 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I haven't even read this yet and I am already thinking this is going to fucking rock!

#43 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

>>2461441 I'd actually find it more interesting if she became the bully and learned her lesson.

She does have the need to get good grades and stop others from racist remarks after all

#44 · 78w, 6d ago · 6 · · New Beginnings ·

I've often fantasized about being part Changeling, mostly just to mess with people. Imagine that you're talking to someone, they sneeze, and suddenly their eyes are a different color. Would freak out normal people.

Also, bring out the bullies, it's been a while since I sympathized with a character.

#45 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I love this series so much! Already off to an awesome start!

#46 · 78w, 6d ago · 4 · · New Beginnings ·

YES ANOTHER STORY OF THE KUNO x WARDEN SERIES!!! *grabs container of popcorn and gallon of coke*

#47 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

I haven't even read it yet and I liked it! :pinkiehappy:

#48 · 78w, 6d ago · 2 · · New Beginnings ·

I lolled hard when they was telling her about Algebra. I HATED Algebra in school.

#49 · 78w, 6d ago · · · New Beginnings ·

SYSTEM WARNING. CUTENESS OVERFLOW CONDITION ANTICIPATED. PREPARING DIABEETUS.EXE FOR IMMINENT LAUNCH.

#50 · 78w, 6d ago · 2 · · New Beginnings ·

Yay! Hope to see more soon as always! :pinkiehappy:

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