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The Relaxing Fiend


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Founds out I am sex slave in this game....

Catch Pinkie...? If she doesn't want you to catch her you... Uh we? Are so out of luck. :pinkiehappy:

All I've gotta say is good luck. The majority "choose your path" fanfictions wind up falling flat.

2416607 Because they're not done correctly.:ajsmug: The writers of such stories usually don't know what the hell they're doing. I don't mean to toot my own horn, but I'd like to say, I'm doing good so far, and if you stick around long enough, you'll see what I mean.:pinkiesad2:

2416638 We'll see, I suppose. I'll thumb up, but reserve a fav for later.

2416645 Thanks a bunch!:twilightsmile:

And to all, I'll just say this here, I'm about 65% done with writing the story so far. All I have to do now is write and edit the remaining parts, reread it all and post it by... I'd say tomorrow.:twilightblush:

its a trick :pinkiegasp: that that PINKIE :raritycry:

HEY YOU STOLE MY IDEA WITH THIS ONE DIDN'T YOU!!!!!

:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Lolz I'm just kidding I'm not mad. :twilightsmile:

Nice to see that other people are doing this though. I wonder where you'll take this one. :pinkiehappy:

Edit:
Oh right...
Place a cupcake out as bait. Even if she zips by as fast as the Roadrunner you'll still have some kind of lead you can use to chase her with. Also tracking devices or spells in the cupcake never hurt.

2417761:rainbowderp: Uh, hello?

:twilightsmile:And yeah, I'm curious to see where I'm going with this too.:twilightblush:

2417771
Yeah I have a comment driven story on my page as well. :twilightsmile:
Though you seem to be taking the opposite approach. Whereas mine is about running AWAY from a lusty Twilight yours is about finding a lusty Pinkie Pie.

So yeah same type of story, but we got completely opposite ideas here. :pinkiehappy:
Good luck man.

2417831
No problem. Check out mine if you get the chance. :twilightsmile:
Though if you're wondering how it's so damn long, it's cause I update it every day practically. Don't worry, it goes by fast. :pinkiehappy:

2417841 I did mine in a chunk. :twilightsheepish: I'll see about your story soon, but it might take awhile. I have another story I'm working on as well.:twilightoops:

2417851
Okay cool. I'll be watching this one as well. I'm curious to see where you take this.

Also don't be afraid to go completely crazy with this. Hell your subject is Pinkie Pie so you have even more of an excuse to not make sense sometimes.

Well... I like this story so far :heart:.

If anything, you almost wish you were chasing her instead

Very bad idea, because you can't fly and she is way faster than you.

2417919:rainbowlaugh: I'm gonna put that in the story! Thanks!:rainbowkiss:

Edit: Not word for word, but pretty much a better way of putting things.

*Half-way through reading*
ಠ_ಠ
"Exqueeze me?"
*Reading further on*
"I'm intrigued."
It's not quite right, and there are some mistakes here and there, but otherwise I like it.
Also, what are the guidelines for the choices?

2418355 Guidelines...? It's basically do what you will. Not everyone would want to give Rainbow Dash a belly rub, (God only knows why not,) but then there's some that would die to eat Applejack out. I gave them that choice. Considering this is a second person story, about you, I tried to accommodate for what everyone prefers to the best of my abilities. You don't want to know how hard that really is.:rainbowwild:

Eh, not bad for a second person story, though i rarely read them. I mainly read hoping for comedy but since the tag was mature sex i knew there would be clop in it, kind of disappointing.

2418589 I didn't tag it with comedy, though I understand why people would think it's a funny fiction.:applejackunsure: Anyways, hey, thanks for reading!:ajsmug:

2418600

Np. I always try to comment on stories i read, I know how it feels to look at your view count and go"okay, I KNOW this many people read this...where the buck are the comments?!:flutterrage:"

2418669 Heh, thanks for that. I usually don't worry about that sorta thing... but now I probably will...:rainbowderp:

Anyways, thanks again.:twilightsmile:

How to catch Pinkie in ten simple steps:
Step 1: Get a stick.
Step 2: Get a box.
Step 3: Prop up the box with the stick.
Step 4: Tie a string around the bottom of the stick and lead the other end of the string behind a corner of a building or wall, out of view of the box.
Step 5: Leave Ponyville, and go to, say, Manehattan.
Step 6: Get a pony, befriend them, take them back, and place them under the box.
Step 7: Convince everypony that the box is your new friend's home.
Step 8: Pinkie Pie shows up to throw a "Welcome to Ponyville Party" in the box, going inside with a ridiculous amount of decorations.
Step 9: Pull string.
Step 10: Trap is shut. :coolphoto:

... Now you aren't invited to the box party. Oh cruel fate! :raritycry:

2419009:rainbowlaugh: I should, and COULD write that as a fic!

2419022 Hey, I just proofread clopfics, romance, and the occasional sad story while writing my own adventure-based stories. Comedy isn't my thing, but if someone else can use it, then by all means, go right ahead! :eeyup:

I'll be back to this story once it's done, more than likely, to put my proofread and review skills to use! :twilightsmile:

2419032 Sweetness! I'm going on a full writing torture routine again tomorrow to try and finish the rest of this up.:rainbowdetermined2:

It's how I posted today's entries.:raritywink:

2419042 Nice! Actually, my scenes in my own unpublished stories seem to involve Pinkie in rather dark themes (nothing GRIMdark, just 'dark'), so I think I wanna see how far I can go with that. A comedic take wouldn't be good for me to pursue. Heh...

Best of luck, good sir! :eeyup:

2418740 A chapter taken from the 2nd person view where the main character fingers Aj, after licking her flank to determine if it tasted like apples.

this is an interesting idea, but it's kind of lame that you published it before you had half the stuff written. makes it hard to render a verdict on it in its present state.

2419161:rainbowderp:I'll... try harder next time, Sir. The next chapters will be published tomorrow, if you're interested.

ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh

2419171
i don't understand this reaction :applejackunsure:

that said, i will pop back tomorrow to check 'em out

Well this story is...
Different...

Did... did I just give Rainbow Dash a belly rub? :rainbowderp:

Well this story has got me sucked in. Can't wait to read the rest.

*begins reading*
Ah, this seems like a nice fic, although quite different then what I normally see
*reaches halfway point*
This is a clop? When did that happen?
*finishes*
Dafuq just happened?

2418740
I'm with you...
When exactly did this become clop?
*rereads first two chapters*
Hmm, it hints at it, and gets dangerously close in the first chapter, but here...
If I wanted clop I would have gone in search of it.
*gets up, attempts to open door, finds it locked*
Damn door.
*smashes door with crowbar, leaves in a slow-mo awesomeness scene while the room explodes from the satchel charge left behind*

Lol lets see where this story goes. :pinkiehappy:

2419784 Look, it's clop, yes. There's a sex tag. It's rated mature. Why wouldn't it be clop if it had that?:rainbowhuh:

Anyways, thanks for reading!:yay:

And good morning everyone! To those who are reading this, I'm getting back to work on updates now! Wish me luck!:pinkiehappy:

Cant see me being mad at anypony... especially with all the fun I already had. It would be entirely worth it. lol

..I am surprised to find myself satisfied. In more ways than one. :pinkiecrazy:

Wait, there's Discord? I'm gonna get to fuck DISCORD?! :pinkiehappy:
:yay: YAY

2420835 Uh, I'm just gonna let you know right now, you don't get intimate with Discord.:applejackunsure: Sorry about that.

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