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Not bad, I liked it
Good show! xD =3
Not bad good sir not bad at all
Finally a GOOD gryphon clop story.
i think it could use a more detailed cover pic
1835493 Yeah, well. Griffon's aren't exactly common and I can't draw worth a shit.
1835528 i might be able to make something, but the idea already sucks in my head. my other idea would work if i didnt suck at drawing most anything living.
1835549 I feel you, man. Anything organic and alive just doesn't work for me. If only there were more robots in Equestria!
Not that I can draw them either, but hey.
Reading description I had mixed feelings but this was surprisingly good story. Thumb up and fav.
Interesting.
Fucking a lion must be really weird...
Oh well, just one ting, you said she moved her ear at some point.
She has a bird's head, no ears.
So this happens during the smexings:
"as she gave a cry like an eagle,"
Just wanted to point out that when eagles cry, it isn't the awesome SKREE you are thinking it is. They kinda make a warbling squeaks. So yeah...
Anyways, AWESOME story.
hahaha this was just brilliant...i never tought of a relationship between a Griffon and a Human but this was just great...actually a sequel would be awsome
Good job
THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!
I mean this was a really good "expansion" upon the ingress world, but the sweet fucking clop man!
Good job,more like this one.
Really showed why I decided to watch and follow what you do
Ohh and more Griffons, BECAUSE I FREAKING LOVE THEM
Well I can't call it "horse fucking," so were does that leave me huh? "Lion fucking"? You're ruining my gags AP!
Ah those mythical creatures. So Curious. To hump humans :D Besides, penis is always the traitor.
So who is next? Minotaur girl/man(insta death for poor human) or maybe Diamond Dog girl? Yeah..Diamond Dog...interesting idea. Since one picture of atryl with female Diamond Dogs I can easly imagine such stuff.
1835902
It mentioned him breathing into an ear, but not moving one.
I'm assuming it just means an ear-hole, but I would still call that an ear. :P
1836341
>Zephyr gave him a pointed stare, one of her ears perking upwards as her tail gave an impatient flick. “That is the point!”
Haven't even read it yet and I already lol'd.
I don't care what anypony says and i know this might be contradicting but that ending was perfect... Now if only there was another chapter to dip into what happened as he "taught" her more.
Oh that ending
Stopped reading here. Bye.
Cotton-picking black man sounds like a terrible insult
just to be clear I get it, this is just suppose to be a clop fic, but the science fiction nerd in me wants to get all logical.
"his had seemed silly, at the time, seeing as Celestia had very little need for human services or products" While this is a nice plot tool for why Celestia needed humans and not there tools, I still think that humans would have things she and her kingdom not only could use but would be in vary high demand. Computers for one. Even Celestia could use one of those.
Finally found a story that involves this kind of couple.
Black man here, I approve of this clop. (Shady Negro said it was okay, don't bother him about it.)
1837122
It does give Celestia a position that's precariously close to stupidity, doesn't it? On one hand, the story gives the impression that she's smart enough not to be taken advantage by every Tom, Dick, and Joe. On the other hand, it heavily implies some pretty fundamental ignorance on her part.
On the topic of the smut.. It's ok. A little on the rapey side of things for my liking.
1837319 Glad to see someone who thinks the same.
About the sex, I did not really enjoy the read. While it's not over done or anything, it did feel rushed. Mostly I suppose I wanted to read it because I was curious how the writer would take such a odd ship. Not many griffon x human ships out there lol.
1836352 Heh, sorry. I stand corrected then.
1835480
Ever read Anywhere but Here? It's not the focus but it's there.
1837440
Just sayan, he'll want to fix that
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its funny and yet steamy at the same time.....nice work
8/10 would read again...
1835902
So, if its a horse its alright, but with a loin (which its actually a griffin) it would be weird?
good read.
on a side note:
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1838569
Not alright, but we know the ponies are not actually pony shaped, even if they are, i don't know man, it's a huge predator feline's vagina!
1837051 Well you missed out on completely consensual griffon x human unfing in which the human ends up dominating the griffon, all because you inferred from a single line that it was a rape fic. Or that background on the sexual habits of a female-dominated society (as I envision the griffon kingdom to be) is just TMI in a clopfic.
So... umh... don't let the door hit you on the way out, I guess?
1838601
Again we don't know, but if pony's structure is to be different then an actual pony, then the same can be apply with griffons.
But if it helps, griffons share the same height as ponies (which makes them midget griffons, HAHA!)
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1838613
Would be a funny tidbit since it is, by the eye of the beholder anyways, a female-dominated world where you can do add all sorts of silly things
14/88
You are going to hell for this idea, and I am joining you for laughing at it!
Bravo good sir, bravo...
1839150 Oh no, going to hell was this scene that I omitted because it was hilariously racist.
*shot*
1839153 Yep, we're going to hell! I almost fell out of my chair at that!
1838613 It was not exactly a single line. Everything up to that point, from the description of the griffon, to the way she uses David's bodily response against him in an argument, to the line in question, was leading up to that conclusion. It was what I had to work with.
Now I ask you: Would you continue to read a work that escalates rather fast to something you despise, whether it's a subversion or not? In fact, I would definitely not be coming back if you hadn't stated the subversion of the signs your story was letting off.
But even then, you wouldn't have to count on a slammed door. It's just a matter of taste, after all, and I can respect that.
1839275 I actually rather despise rape. I've written erotic stuff for years, and not once have I written rape. It's just fucking terrible to me. But I love dominant females. In a female-dominated hierarchy, mating can sometimes be seen pretty much as rape. They pick and choose what they want, regardless of what their partner thinks. It was really just background information to make David's choice to go through with the whole thing a more reasonable conclusion, so the reader wasn't left sitting there like 'wtf. that aint right.'
A little rocky for me at first but stuck to it because you wrote it
2nd half I greatly enjoyed
FINALLY! A break to this "human fucking a pony" stereotype. About damn time we got griffons on the scene for once!
David may be black, but he's got the atitude of a white man.
Also, ever since I saw that episode with Gilda in it I thought all griffons could shove their heads up their ugly ass, that's right SHOVE IT UP THEIR UGLY ASS!!!!!, but then I read this fic and now I shall turn the other cheek on griffons, maybe even write a fic or two with them in it.
I would like for this to continue........but one can only dream