Just interested in Changelings and making alt universe's with events being similar but changed slightly
My own take on a anon-a-miss au where sunset shimmer returns to equestria to spend time with twilight but when she goes back though,the portal has made her diffrent, will she be able to recover her old life or find build new one
(Warning: Anon-A-Miss may be a Major plot point of this story however at times it will be taking a backseat to other parts of it as I do not want it to be mainly Anon-A-Miss focused)
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A very good beginning despite spelling errors.
#1 *They didn't believe you how could they be so clueless and idiotic* "belive" should be believe and "tehy" should be "they"
Are people still upset about anon-a-miss?
The story starts making more sense once you realise "aging" should be "again" more often than not. I wonder why is this spelling mistake so consistent.
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Yes people are still quite mad about anon-a-miss
About the spelling mistakes i did this chapter late at night so sorry for that,most if not all spelling mistakes in the first chapter should be fixed,feel free to point any out i missed
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Why?
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Ah ok should of probably clarified this,the start of this takes place after sunset confronted her friends and tried to make them believe it wasn't her unlike what happened in Canon,they thought she was lying in my au and unlike canon the CMC didnt feel sorry at all
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I don’t think that really answered my question.
If that works then all logic has been removed from mlp.
Is that how it works? Because, wouldn’t equestria’s main 6 lose their elements after the wedding?
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I think people are upset by anon-a-miss because it touches on a deep fear that most people have of abondonment. Deep down, a lot of people are worried that the are not good enough, and are afraid that their friends will drop them if they are less than perfect.
The anon-a-miss story shows that fear forced right in front of their eyes. And shows that they don't even need to make a mistake. A simple smear campaign can destroy a life.
In short, people are angry about anon-a-miss because they are afraid what happened to Sunset can happen to them.
They have that?
Umm. I don’t agree on that one depending on the lesson.
She will never do that.
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Read the author notes on chapter 3
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Is that why? I honestly never thought about that.
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Oh.
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And to be devils advocate the premise is for a better lack of words "an chicken running around without head" levels of stupid
Where from what ive seen when used in stories generaly 1 of 3 things happen
1 they lean into the stupidity completly
2 they lean into it somewhat (
3 torture, ooc and someone goes evil reincarnated. or a copy of that one where sunny gets betrayed by rainbow and almost killed
I just realized something. This is sunset’s opportunity to see what people actually think of her.
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And maybe she can teach them a lesson on how valuable trust is and how you can't just pick it up and put it down whenever you feel like it. They often forget that in these stories and nobody even tries to figure out why they didn't want to trust her.
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This could also be an opportunity to improve herself. Maybe figure out ways to make amends with some of the students, because let’s be realistic there’s no way she made amends with EVERY student.
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I'm not even sure that possible considering she ruled the school for a few years before twilight and can you remember everything that you said and did back then. It not possible. And if nobody decided to talk about it then she wouldn't be able to even try.
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Depending upon what they did determine it for me.
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She might not remember, but the students might. Also, you have to take into account the reason they didn’t talk about it, because they were scared of her. They’re not scared her anymore.
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Yeah, because the story seems to hype it up as something big and bad. I’m hoping it is, but I won’t get my hopes up.
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Yeah but they supposedly after the sirens weren't scared anymore so they had time to talk they just chose not to.
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That’s also a possibility.
This is starting to make me question some things in mlp.
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What things exactly just curious?
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Like how many villains did they possibly do this to? We are usually so busy focusing on the heroes that we don’t pay much attention to the villains.
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Im not sure how many but thats why i decided to do the Dazzlings cause why we do see them in the EG show it had been quite a while after Rainbow Rocks
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I guess that makes sense.
Ok if the CMC are behind this, they need to be exposed and expelled, not just to be punished but to protect them.
Any student that been reduced to the point of taking their life or lashed out at others will hate them to the point of wanting to send them to the emergency room or kill them even.
What are you talking about? Y’all been needed it.
I’m sorry, but that literally made me LOL.
I mean, it’s not really surprising. I’m more surprised that this isn’t brought up more often. You’ve had some of the students be bullied by sunset which could potentially cause these things itself, but with everything else going on it’s even more possible. I guess they only save it for anon-a-miss stories.
Seems the same to me.
They would?
Why would she need the student files?
This right here. This is what we needed.
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Looks like anyone who might have been holding a grudge after the sirens decided never to try to get resolution with her. They could have talked with her friends about the issues they had with sunset but chose not to. And yes she was a jerk but if you never speak up about your pain how will anything change for the better. And if Luna knew how bad she was why did she let her get away with it.
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Thanks glad it had the intended effect,was worried it wouldn't make sense
I might take a break from writing this story for now,when I mean break I mean maybe a day or two but after I will start writing the next chapter
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Well, it’s not really easy to talk about being bullied. As for luna I feel like celestia probably talked her into not doing anything.
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It did. This is something that is never talked about.
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Yet you can act like a bully to the ex bully who is trying to be better?! If you have the strength to act like a bully for revenge then you have the strength to act like an adult and talk about it.
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Actually, I have to disagree on that one. If I was forced to choose I would have to go with the former. Although, that could just be because I’m a little anti-social.
Im not the best at this my self, but you should check for spelling errors.
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Most errors should now be fixed if you see any please tell me so I can fix it
The only thing I didn’t like was how fast sunset seemed to recover from that. Especially when you consider what she found out and piece together. Everything else was great. I hope we see more of sunset trying to connect with Luna’s regulars. I’m actually curious on if one of the rainbooms are Luna’s regulars? Maybe pinkie pie or fluttershy? But, I wouldn’t mind if it was the others. They all seem like the type of people who would hide behind a mask when around others, but let it crumble when alone. Maybe have sunset question them about herself. Did they really believe she was anon-a-miss or were they just looking for a reason to get rid of her? Did they really forgive her or did they feel pressured to while still feeling the weight of what she did to them and they finally broke?
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Thanks for the feedback
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You’re welcome
I want to like this story, but I don't.
Reason being everything s rushed, and the grammar is bad, but mostly it rushed.
I just can't take the story seriously more so after the current chapter.
Like she said Luna had the ability to speak she just didn't. Same goes for those sunset hurt. Yes she was a jerk but if you can't at least bury the hatchet for yourself then you will never escape the pain. They should have worked on letting it go somewhat. You don't have forgive but holding a grudge only hurts you in the long run.
Wow, this is getting dark, fast. I’m starting to worry about how many students are like luna and celestia.
I always thought that pinkie hid her emotions with a smile.
This just made me realize something. The way sunset confronted celestia was a real gamble. Some people prefer to keep their mask on and could get really defensive when you try to take it off forcefully.
This actually makes me worry about rainbow dash. She is one of luna’s regulars, which means she’s most likely been going there before this anon-a-miss thing even happened, right? Is there more going on?