What if Sunset had enlisted aid from four youth filled to the brim with cruelty and crassness in equal order.
If older they might've been wise, but the folly of youth know no bounds, much less to those whose rage be not bound by common courtesy.
Violence is bread, blood is butter.
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This is basically an idea that has been plaguing me for a while now and though this is essentially an offset of my original story.
Enjoy!
14/10/23: Updates Once a month.
12/3/24: Hiatus ends May 5th, 2024
Chapters (12)
Interesting concept for an Anon-a-Miss fic.
I'll be following this one closely.
So have a Fave, a Track, an Upvote and a Follow.
(If I'm not already, that is.)
What show or series this based off?
I'm not to sure what to say. I find it hard to root for our protagonist; irrespective of motive, he did just assault two people.
Was this to vent some sort of frustration?
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None. It's just an idea I came up with while I was making Orthros.
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Kinda. Had a more normal story planned out but this one came to me in a vision.
And somewhat spoiler but You'll find that in this fic that most characters are at best, gray men with good intentions.
And yes it is assault, blatant assault however they are not blameless either. Remember its Rains who threw the first punch, and to him that's all the challenge he needs to respond with ten more... man that sounds psychotic
Hmm. Any Anon-a-Miss that starts off with the Rainbooms; more specifically Rainbow and Applejack, getting owned is welcomed in my books.
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I'll keep an eye on this nontheless.
Hey there Orrm!
Just cruising through my recommended. Nice work mate!
Keep it up ^_^
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You're welcome. The compliment is appreciated.
I like this fiction
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This fills the dark emptiness for now
I'm sure the police are like:*hears who's "assaulting" girls* Nope not going there.
I like this.....so far.
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Correct Mon amine, let's just say they have a reputation.
The people who need to know about them know, and the people who don't know don't need to know and are not told.
Can Sunset sue anyone legally? Love to see her former employer grovel worried on being sued.
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She has zero papers of identification. That does not bode well for anyone.
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Dammit, well like to see hr former employee getting his rep damaged by all this when the truth is revealed.
Go right ahead.
This ain't gonna end well
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Understatement of the century.
You'll probably hate them for what they will do.
Ragnarok is an even that destroys the world
, all guilty and innocent and all inbetween.
And Ragnarok is the only reason the wolf Fenrir even existed.
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Oh. I was meaning about how they would willing assault underage teenagers and children for their sick pleasure
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Oh come on, those teenagers deserve it. (Maybe?)
Plus there's that one rule they follow that state that they will never throw the first punch.
"Punch" is a multi-meaning word in this case.
Also they are children. 15 14 12 14
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Oh of course. What better way to explain 4 hyper growth tweens that have a fetish for violence and destruction then that if some bullies (who in some cases can be in the same boat as Sunset or victims of the bullies) swing first it's okay to break possibly every bone in their bodies.
Hell he threw Pinkie into a wall that crumbled around her cause she was defending herself, the shoppe, and her friends from a assaulter.
Logic? I see not
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He didn't throw pinkie, he hit her on the head with a ceramic napkin holder....
https://duckduckgo.com/?q=ceramic+napkin+holder&atb=v149-4__&t=cros&iax=images&ia=images
And yes, like I said earlier, the idea of black and white hits the fan here. And there is logic, just not morals. Know the differance.
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fair assessment.
Forgot to say this one earlier but,
If someone calls you a monster for long enough you become one and if someone calls you a fighter for long enough the same occurs. Eventually your original goals become corroded by the tags assigned to you and the actions you perform. Eventually the reason you started becomes blurred as new sensations take root and for a while you can't help but feed them.
But.
Eventually you will look into the mirror and through relaisation for the monster you have become you set your own path straight. Keeping some traits of course but nonetheless you move from Vandal to Vanir.
Orthros, my other story, has them interact in similar situations by which they are more voberse and witty rather than forceful and brash. The differance, age and an alternate universe.
Nine years changes alot about someone. As I work on both stories, this, you shall see.
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bet
Who is he talking about? I guess we'll find out soon.
Like I said. Jacked up supposedly godlike teens assaulting other teens and minorities is not a good idea. You can only resort to violence when necessary pieces fall into place. In this situation the best option would to be to give the Rainbooms a stern verbal talking to, maybe a little physical with Rainbow cause her brashness, and if they don't listen then they have to learn the hard way, but NOT through violence.
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Remember how I said they won't attack without a reason?
With 'her' they'll make an exception.
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As a wise person once said, you get your ass beat, getting hit no longer phases you, at least to a point
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Yep, see, someone gets it!
are these guys werewolves? like world of darkness werewolves cause they kinda act like it.
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Nope, just strength obsessed humans with a shit ton of coping issues.
I think this is a story where the girl changes the guy from their brutish self to a gentler tone. Like beauty and the beast or beasts in this case
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Quick spoiler
Yeah no
This story is about suffering
Everyone's gonna be stupendously fucked by the time I'm done
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Sunset Will live right?
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Can't suffer if you're dead.
Is there gonna be a new chapter soon? I've been waiting forrrrrreeeeeeverrrrrr!!!!
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Sometime next week or so, some drama happened with finals and I had to go on an unexpected hiatus.
Now that's over and I can get to finishing the next chapter and touching up this one.
Sincerest apologies for the prolonged wait.
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And considering he making them behave and mind their manners while they want to do something horrible to sunset because she supposedly released their secrets. The girls should be arrested.
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I'm not sure because the from another world thing plus i do know you need money for a lawsuit paperwork and she doesn't exactly have that.
OOOOOOOOOOOOO. YES
He bit her. He definitely bit her
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Sooooo.......Sunset killed the dude?
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Not Sunny