Anon-a-miss has really broke down Sunset. She’s on the verge of suicide, but the only thing keeping her stable is her favorite song, dream your dream. While crying herself to sleep, she puts it on to make it go faster, and someone overhears.
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im sorry but i like your authors note more than your story, it made me laugh
your story is okay but everything felt rushed after sunset wakes up so didnt feel as real as it could be especially with maud cursing
Holly shit! I never expected to see this part of Maud Pie. You tell them girl!
Is this a one shot?
Anyway, a good story, though everything happens a little fast. And, why do Sunset live with Maud?
I liked the story, but you wrote Maud so out of character, it makes me cringe every time she speaks, I mean really, read mauds lines again outloud to yourself in her voice, and tell me it doesn't make you cringe at how shabby she's portrayed in this story
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I think your right and she is out of character but I think it was on purpose because by having her out of character so much it showed how much this situation bothered her. It was something where her acting the way she did is part of what got through to the girls because she never acts like this.
I’ll be honest, everything maud, sunset, and twilight said would’ve went in one ear and out the other.
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Honestly, to me I felt like maud was being a hypocrite.
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But, what’s with the hypocrisy?
Old Gacha logic??
There are slight grammar errors and the ending "Don't fuck it up" part was a little funny, but overall the story is awesome!
Lmfao
I would like to add my own “ Don’t fuck it up. “ to the mix.