Just a brony looking for a way to create work for others to see. here you will find stories that are mostly similar to each other, as most of them will be alternate timelines.
friends torn apart, families broken, all because of the decision made by a group of six.
My life has ended, but at least someone should know what had happened to me... I was somehow pulled into equestria and... Well, needless to say spite my best effort they didn't accept me. My soul never passed on. Now i’m forced to watch the ponies who had wronged me, try to make amends. Maybe i’ll be able make contact them but only time will tell.
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I hope he at least gets a badass coffin.
Eh.
9281142
So true. I will not deny the fact that I'm not a good writer. but at least I try
Well, read through this and I have to say, there are plenty of typos and grammar issues, almost none punctuation and also rather artificial dialogues. However, while it’s not all good right now, this all can be fixed
If you want to improve, I can offer a helping hand.
9549910
If you want to I'd appreciate it very much. But if it's a charged service I will not be able.
9550178
If I offer help just because I want to help, I won’t even think of charging you. People having learnt something new is the best reward I can get
9550206
Thanks
9550772
You’re welcome. Shall we discuss the details via PMs?
9550786
Yeah I think that will be for the best.
Update?
9553354
next update may come out in a few days if at best.
The block text is still there but at least its more descriptive than the last.
Why doesn't the story title start with a capital letter?
9554972
Thanks for catching that little error I’ll fix right away
9554850
my Second edit draft was complected the block text is no more!
Will you continue this?
9873917
Maybe sometime in the future. When I am a better writter. Updates may still happen, but not very often until then.
9874195
Well.... I'll look forward to when the hopefully, next chapter is released.
Till then, good luck on your further writing.
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Very much deserves to be continued.
Monk
"I understand killin’ but I sure as hell don't understand you sheltered bastards.” -ThePhoton
Damn. I wish we got to see their reactions.
10811609
What is that supposed to mean?
You ever plan on giving this story another go I've always liked the mistreated human concept
update it