You've had your eyes on Rarity ever since you came to Equestria. Will you tell her that you love her?
Human X Rarity
Please give thanks to PrinceLightningFlash for proofreading this for me.
5th story.
As of June 2016 this story has reached 500 views.
Tired premise, execution was bland, and...yeah. Gonna have to leave a down-vote.
Awwww that was such a sweet story
Rushed, chapters are too short, and well...I've read worse love stories, but I'll have to downvote.
That guy has to be the luckiest human in Equestria!
A bit rushed but lovely and enjoyable nonetheless.
I like it but there is not reason for this to be split into 3 chapters. This could easily just be one chapter.
Also this comes across like its the plan for a story and not a full story. It really could have done with a lot more fleshing out.