This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S7
Twilight and her friends are preparing for a Friendship Festival, a day when ponies from many places and backgrounds can come together, meet, learn and grow thanks to the Magic of Friendship.
But friendship is the last thing on the minds of those looking to take what they believe is Equestria's greatest magic for themselves. Defeated and on the run while constantly being hunted by an evil force, Twilight, Flash and their friends must work together to find a way to save their home. Along the way, they'll meet new friends, new enemies and have their friendships put to the test. And if they want to save their home, it's a test they'll have to pass.
Edited by KingJoltik
not a bad start, I can not wait for the next one action starting
Finally! The movie have arrived! This is going to be Flash and others' craziest adventure so far!
I can't wait for the next chapter as they are dealing with Tempest Shadow and The Storm King's army!
Here's highlights
BURN!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
DOUBLE BURN!!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Oh, you better need them cause there's a storm coming 🌩🌩🌩
Oh… you guys will be singing a lot since this is a musical movie.
Oh! You could've pick better words when to describe him and Flash, now he's going to be angst about it.
Way to go, Grand.
The storm is coming! 🌩🌩🌩
Will our heroes able to to defend Canterlot from invading forces?
Will Heart go through his angstness situation regarding Flash?
And why I am doing Dragonball Z narrates?!
Find out in Flash Sentry Chronicles!
Oh boy, we have finally arrived at the movie! Too bad we missed out on such a fun musical number, but there will be plenty of other opportunities for fun songs later and I was still interested in Script's crystals that let the Royal Knights combine their magic. Maybe that will come in handy, unless they get taken out in the initial attack and turned to stone, then they might be a bitter harder to use.
I am looking forward to seeing how this goes. I'm excited to see Tempest in action next time!
OH MY GOD, yes finally it is here, I can't wait to see the next chapter !!!!!!
And here we go, too bad we missed out on the fun opening song though! Other than that it was a good first entry, not to mention those gems that store powers between the Royal Knights, that was a cool addition & pretty sure it will come in handy for whatever Faker has in store after his windup toys got smashed! Looking forward to see Edgy Fizz showing up next chapter & to see what else they have in store for our heroes cause, let's face it Fizzy would get curbstomped if she tried taking on both the Alicorns & the Royal Knights at once by herself, no matter how tough she is!
Hey Spike, you dropped this scroll that has today's Highlights! :
Good to see Spike getting really *handy* with his powers!
Ooohhhh Freeze Burn by the ice knight!
Song Snatcher *Curses, foiled again! I'll get you yet before this fic's over Flashy boy....and your Not-So little Jackhowl too!*
lol per the norm I see!
Cue bad guys arriving, gonna be quite the rumble next time around!
Good first entry for the movie Banshee, till the next one!
With the dark tag, I wonder how dark will this story actually get. Like 'is Flash gonna lose a limb, get his back broken, etc' dark, or 'is the colt wonder finally met his Nemesis (as in the one force he cannot overcome that he is creator off/demon coming home to roost) and finally pay his due' dark, or 'things just go wrong until the villain makes an otherwise inconsequential mistake and then everything is Sunshines and rainbows' dark?
BTW Flash, you really should get some aloe vera for that burn Cold gave you, the longer it goes on treated the worst it will get.
Also, I get skipping the first musical number, did it myself in my My Little Mages AU equivalent, it was nothing more than padding.
Can't wait to see their reation when they see what's in stro for them!
Will Flash ask Twilight to marry him?
It was a good start, i bet Flash can defeat Tempest so easily, unless, she was more poserful than the knights, in that case, we are doomed.
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We all know Tempest is going to win the first battle, because there would be no plot otherwise.
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One of those orbs she threw around would suffice.
This is an incredible second chapter you wrote. I am really starting to like where your version of the movie is going so far.
The stakes are set high! The princesses, Mira, and Ace turned to stone, the knights vanished to who knows where, the other ponies captured. You even seemingly nerfed Flash with Corrupted Shadow! I am really going to enjoy how Flash will have to struggle with this injury and how this affects Twilight and the others.
And I love how you addressed Discord's absence in this story. That was Hilarious 😆.
Seeing Armalum return and introducing Void by helping kick the heroes' asses without overshadowing Tempest was great. Kind of hope it will be the same for the Storm King.
I wonder if you will expand on the characters from the movie in this story. Maybe have it influenced by the prequel comic. I liked them in the movie but I feel the weren't fleshed out enough.
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work 👍.
The more daring thing you could have done was literally petrify Flash... I like Flash as much as the next guy, but he really needs to go back to doing his own things separate from the Mane 6.
I ain't letting the fact that Flash is a '7th Element' throws all the dramatics of the main group off go. It's what tripped up the first entry into this series right at the finish line, and still fucks things up.
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Read this while you wait.
(My Little Mages: Amicitiae Tempestate)
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If they do, it won't be a long marriage if the Future Heart Two Parter is anything to go off of.
It was rather more intense compare to the canon and it even more intense when Armalum is part of the Storm King's army.
This won't be easy fight for our heroes.
I knew you would take them out but I wonder where did he sent Royal Knights and Lightning to?
I glad you give every characters including your OCs to do things in the movie including the one who didn't appear in the film like Starlight and Trixie… I was worried characters like Rogue would be a voiceless cameo role but I glad he got to do things.
Oh crap! That would explains Teen rated and dark element in this story.
OH NO!!!! Flash!!!!!
OH NO!!!! They got Mira and Ace!!!!!!
This is why Twilight is best girlfriend for Flash and she's not letting her man to die, not on her watch!
Thank you for that hilarious explanation of why Discord is not in the movie.
Oh….
And thank you for the explanation of why Shining Armor and Flurry Heart didn't appear in the film.
Wow, this was intense! I can see the ponies put up much more of a fight here compared to how they did in canon, where it seemed all they did was run away once the action started. But that was mostly thanks to the Royal Knights and now they're gone. I hope they're okay. They vanished due to that machine, but the question is where did they go? At least a few other characters got to help too before being captured, like Starlight, Trixie, Soarin, Rogue, Wild, and Script. Not to mention Ace and Mira were turned to stone. It was also nice that you included an explanation for Flurry Heart, Shining Armor, and Discord being absent unlike in canon. Most people say Discord could have handled the whole thing if he was there, but I personally think he would have just been dealt turned to stone again via an Obsidian Orb like the princesses.
I have to admit, Void was a badass in the fight. He could absorb each of the Royal Knights attacks and send them back. It's clear he's going to be tough to beat. Plus Flash is in very bad shape because of that Corrupted Shadow infected cross-bolt.
I personally thought Grubber looked more like a hedgehog than a rat.
YES! I called it! I knew that armored figure was Armalum! Since none of the cultists have been seen since the end of the war, it is pretty cool to see one of them again. It might be interesting if we see flashbacks of how Armalum joined the Storm King.
I know you already confirmed that Shadow Corrupter was dead some time ago, but it is cool to now have official confirmation of his death in-universe.
I know most of the quest in the film is to find the hippogriffs and get their help, but it would be so awesome if they also got backup from the dragons and changelings. How hard could it be to find something to write on?
Hope Flash will be OK and Twilgith as well
Welp, that went from zero to sixty right away! Was wondering how the Royal Knights were gonna be taken out of the fight cause no matter how badass Tempest was, she was still gonna be curbstomped if she tried taking all of them plus Flash & the Mane Six all on her own! Also seems Junkpile's back & still salty about his master's death, hope he gets his just desserts this time around! As for Faker I hope we get to see who he really is behind that mask before this tale's over (I have a suspicion about who he really is, we'll see if I'm right or not)
Highlights for this chapter include :
Oh great, Junkpile's back!
lol sorry Fizzie, not so easy this time around!
Whoa, that's not good!
Oh boy, the hits keep on coming!
That's actually not a bad idea, hoping it gets put to use later!
And we're off to the races next time around, till then Banshee!
If you need an OC for this, let me know.
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SORRY (x infinity)
Well, look like the subplots will be about Starlight, Trixie, Script, Wild, Gorgenia, Soarin and maybe Rogue as they are trying to figure out of setting the rest of Royal Knights free as they are trapped in void-like dimension.
I wouldn't be surprised by the time they got to the last musical number, Flash will be sick and tired and be like "NO MORE MUSICAL NUMBERS!!!!"
Not change much in Klugetown beside a Shark guy asking for Lightbringer, Spike writing a message to Ember and Thorax (I hope) and fight between Springer and Armalum.
Here's highlights:
Oh….. 😬😬😬😬😬 they do return but not in a way you expect.
Oh great! More Corrupted Shadow stuff!
Glad that we got to see how the others are doing while Flash & the others are getting help, course I'm not a big fan at what that little troll tried to do to a petrified Ace! On our heroes side it was dicey for Springer against Junkpile, glad that we got a hint at what this arrogant creep weak point is, looking forward to see him be taken down....FOR GOOD!!!
As for Highlights :
I see a snotty troll getting a beat-down before this tale's over!
Hmmm good bit of important info there!
*someone shouts in the distance* JANGO!!!!!
Dragon Paladin's looking out for Rares while Lightning's indisposed, awesome!!!
Oh yeah, so nice to show us your weak point Junkpile!
Sweet, hoping we get some dragon/changeling assistance this time around!
Hey Junkpile, ground taste good?
Things are heating up again, looking forward to the next chapter Banshee!
Wow, this keeps getting more and more interesting and intense!
I like how we saw the perspective of some of the ponies at Canterlot. They might be captured, but maybe they can still do something to help, like destroy the machine and get the Royal Knights back. I think it is also interesting that since Void and Armalum are here now, Grubber has essentially been demoted and is stuck doing grunt work instead of working by Tempest's side as her sidekick. Too bad, since I kind of liked his antics to contrast him from Tempest.
What's also interesting is what Tempest said to Armalum. She said that he needs Flash to save himself. But the question is from what? Armalum already revealed he has the Corrupted Shadow, a gift granted to him by his late master, so how would the Sacred Light help him? Questions I hope we will learn the answers to later.
The adventure with the Mane 7 and the others is good so far. Springer's fight with Armalum was awesome, and hopefully Spike was able to send his messages to Thorax and Ember before they had to run from Tempest. Getting backup from the changelings and dragons would be awesome. Now they can head to Mount Aris, and we'll get to meet more hippogriff!
I like that reference! Though I have to agree with Flash. Sokka drunk on cactus juice was hilarious, but not very helpful. Plus if Heart ended up like that he would be even more dangerous given his fire powers.
This is awesome. We're finally going to get to see more hippogriffs for the first time since Wingill. It is going to be interesting, with everyone knowing about their ability to transform into seaponies beforehand. Though unfortunately for Rarity, Wingill could only control water due to being experimented on by Shadow, and it is not a natural ability his kind possesses.
So no attempt to flush out Capper, just gonna use only the film info, not gonna use anypony other than Rarity as the basis for his Heel to Face turn down the road?
Banshee, you're slipping.
Nice use of Armalum to hold Springer off, but you could have actually done something bold and add Springer to list of the captives.
Also massive missed opportunity with Grubber.
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She's talking to Void not Armalum
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If you're expecting a thanks for pointing that mistake out, don't hold your breath.
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The fact that you're so bent on denying any sign of gratitude, says volumes more about you and your character than me.
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I just don't want to congratulate the "local bully" and encourage your bad behavior. You're the one that can't tell how unpopular he is. One good deed doesn't make up for the dozens, if not hundreds, of rude comments you have left.
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I embrace that I have a different opinion then others and i am well aware that they are not popular. I am not attacking you or anyone, all I am doing is pointing to what I think is a mistake or misstep that Banshee made in the only way people seem to respond.
Also, people respond to incentives, if you want some to behave a certain way, give them an incentive. So if you want me to not be in your words 'the local bully' give me an incentive not to be.
Again you're refusal of a simple 'thanks' says more about you than me.
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Rant all you want asshole, it won’t change the fact that you are a bully and everyone knows it. Nobody should need to give you any “incentives” to not be a jerk. Don’t blame me that your actions have consequences and nobody wants to thank you when once on a blue moon you decide to not be an asshole.
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Who's ranting? I take it upon my self to do the Christian thing to help you understand something you didn't and you elect to withhold the smallest form of gratitude. I point out that such actions say more about you than me and you call me a 'bully', I point out that I am well aware that I am not in the majority opinion and I point that you can try to encourage behavior you want from me in a different way then you're trying and you leve accusations. I am not the one butthurt that someone took the time to correct an error I made in understanding what is going on. So you might want to pull out of the drive-in theater.
Yet I am not without mercy, I forgive you of your misplaced ire and your lack of demonstrated gratitude. May God Bless you all the days of your life, may they fruitful and your endeavors succeed in all counts. May He count among the Elect and may you be with Him in Heaven in the fullest of time. Amen.
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Really? That's all the highlights you've got for this chapter?
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Well, there are so many of them that I didn't want my comment to be overcrowded and I did give my thought on stuffs.
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I'm curious what he's done to be a bully when you're the only one here cursing and calling people names lol. All he did was point out that they were talking to a different character than the one you said.
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Read enough of his comments from across the series. You'll understand fast. Besides, he just used God's name in vain as a petty insult to act all 'holier than thou' and insult my faith. As far as I'm concerned that's an unforgivable sin.
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I don't really care enough to read all of his comments on other stories, but saying 'God Bless' isn't using his name in vain.
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It is when he's being smug, superior, and sarcastic about it. Now please drop it.
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lol I always love the "please drop it" when you could have just ignored that guy's comment to begin with. Choosing to engage with someone you dislike is funny to me. But sure, you have a great rest of your day :)
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Guys Guys, let's not fight we are all fans of this fic ate we not? We shouldn't act like bullys online, and we shouldn't say mean and hurtful things. We are here to enjoy this fic not picker of who is right or wrong. To quote Transformers "till all are one."
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Asking God to bless someone even if they might be an enemy is following Christ's commands, Luke 6:28 'Bless those that curse you, pray for those who mistreat you'. And if obeying Christ by asking God to bless one who cursed me is taking the Lord's name in vain in your eyes... well... um...
Well I again I choose to bless you and forgive you, and may God be with you.
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May you will help me pray for him, he needs God's blessing more than I.
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Can't say I disagree and I will try to establish that better future of us all as one by praying and asking the Lord to bless SuperSonicHeroes.
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And I forgive you for your wrath towards me and may God be with you, and may you be blessed by Him. Amen.
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Dude! Enough with the fake prayers already! I don't care if you are a troll or whatever your problem is, but you do not bring religion into arguments! Stop acting you are above me because you pray or like your "prayers" make you 'holier than thou'. All you are doing is insulting my own faith, which as far as I am concerned is an unforgivable sin itself and will damn you! I don't need or want your false forgiveness, especially since you are only saying it as a backhanded insult towards me, and I am never forgiving you for insulting my religion and my own faith. Burn in Hell, sinner!
Just shut up, stop spamming in these comments, drop it already, and leave me and my friends alone!
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Again I forgive you of your wrath towards me and all your other trespasses against me.
And again I ask God to bless you.
May His peace be with you. Amen
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I didn't say anything hurtful lol
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I'm not interested in your pissing contest with him. He asked me to drop it and I am because I'm not a dweeb.
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There is no pissing contest, I am just done fighting with him and I choose to start moving on by forgiving him and asking others to pray for him.
things are heating up big time