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I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S8

Despite everything in Equestria being great at the moment, Springer and his charges must still face the harrowing fact that they are the last of their kind. Or are they?

Just when all hope seemed lost, they find themselves being called to a place that may hold the key to their species' revival. But as they arrive, they will find certain obstacles stand in their way, and if they're not careful, war could break out. As such, Springer must use everything he's learned in his time with the ponies to make things right. But can he?

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Arron_Starchanger
Arron_Starchanger #1 · Dec 20th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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Great first chapter love the cliffhanger ending can’t wait till the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #2 · Dec 20th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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After all these years, Jakhowls weren't extinct as they thought of.

I know not many people may notice this but this story got a romance tag and going by this chapter, look like Springer may finally get his love interest.

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In a dark cave, five bipedal figures could be seen sitting in a circle around a fire. They were all wearing black hooded cloaks that had different colored versions of the same pattern, all sitting like a monk and staring into the fire, saying nothing. But as their heads kept moving, it was clear some kind of conversation was occurring. But then, a sixth figure arrived through the entrance of the chamber. This figure wasn't wearing a cloak, but the darkness of the room hid their features as they walked in and got down onto one knee with their head down. "Father," they spoke in a feminine voice, "I have returned from the seal. It's just as you sensed. The seal has been broken."

The one in the silver trimmed cloak nodded, "I see. I had hoped I would live to see this day. The day our imprisonment would end, and we could finally return to the world."

It can't be! :pinkiegasp:

Silver remained still, only to turn to the figure still kneeling in the shadows. "Mirage. What do you think we should do?"

"Me?" The figure looked up.

"I know you care for the safety of our tribe, but also have the courage not to fear the unknown. So I ask you, what would you do if you were in my position?" They gestured for the figure to move closer, the one getting up and walking into the light. In doing so, they revealed what they were. A jakhowl.

WHAT?!?!?! :pinkiegasp:

"Flash?" He called out, stepping into his and Twilight's room. He glanced around, but found nothing, only to hear the sound of the shower running in the next room. Moving over to it, he knocked. "Flash?"


"Yeah?" Flash's voice replied, Springer stepping inside and seeing the shower stall curtain was drawn. Flash heard the door open and yelped, "Dude!"

"What?" Springer asked, "It's nothing I haven't seen. Besides, you said you'd take over my patrol today. Remember?"

"Okay?" He sounded exasperated, "I'll get to it when I'm done. Can you go now?"

"Why?" Springer raised an eyebrow, "What are you doing in there?"

"Nothing."

"Right..." he replied slowly. "Then you won't mind me opening the curtain? You in the shower isn't any different from when you're swimming."

"Don't!" It wasn't Flash's voice that cried that, making Springer flinch.

"Twilight? What are you doing in there?"

"Um...taking a shower?"

"With Flash?"

"Why not?" Twilight muttered out, "We all have to do our part to conserve water. Now can you go?! Flash will get to the patrol when we're done in here,"

Springer crossed his arms, not believing that one bit, and despite being shielded by the curtain, a flash of purple made him realize Twilight was likely about to blast him with magic. "Okay," he turned to leave, "I'm going. Geez." He reached the door and was about to head out, but in that moment a wicked idea entered his head. And before his better judgement could stop him, he reached over and hit the flush on the toilet. He then ran out of the room as the sound of two ponies screaming filled the entire castle.

I know they are showing but I have an idea they were doing risqué with each other in the shower. :ajsmug:

When he had first met all of his friends, they were all single and seemed perfectly happy. Springer had also felt happy on his own, thinking his friends would be all he ever needed. But as time passed and each found a pony to call their special somepony, Springer felt something hollow in his heart. As each of his friends found happiness, that feeling grew and grew. Springer knew that he was never going to get to share the kind of happiness they all had, since he was one of the only jakhowls left alive.

With just him and two others, both too young for him, he knew he was doomed to a life of feeling that hollowness. Forever.

You jinx yourself, Springer and that was a good jinx. :raritywink:

"No, but if I didn't, then nopony would be around to look after you when you inevitably overdo it and hurt yourself...again." Heart didn't say anything back and simply kept punching the tree, Soul sighing as she got back to reading her book. Though she was worried about her brother, she had unfortunately grown use to his moodiness. Ever since the unfortunate incident with Cozy Glow, Heart's happy and upbeat personality had all but vanished. The pain of her betrayal had shook him to his very core, causing him to lose all the joy that had once been his defining personality trait. Now he was overly serious and constantly annoyed, something that had caused a lot of his fellow students to start giving him a wide berth before the end of school.

Wow! They can't make fun of him without getting on his bad side, especially he still haven't recovered from Cozy's betrayal.

Now, Springer find hope of bringing Jakhowl back but will be succeed?

SpikeSmolder fan
SpikeSmolder fan #3 · Dec 20th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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Ohhh so that's what was behind magic seal door #2, jackhowls!!! Still not sure if friendly or not though, guess we'll see! :applejackconfused:
Also seems the consequences of Cozy's betrayal are felt within Heart by now, so that's a whole other can of worms to deal with, thanks demon spawn! :twilightangry2:

Highlights galore include :

"That prophecy is the reason we were trapped in here," Green continued, "I say to heck with the prophecy. We must decide for ourselves what our future holds." He turned to the one in silver, "You are our leader. It is you who decides what we do."

Silver remained still, only to turn to the figure still kneeling in the shadows. "Mirage. What do you think we should do?"

"Me?" The figure looked up.

"I know you care for the safety of our tribe, but also have the courage not to fear the unknown. So I ask you, what would you do if you were in my position?" They gestured for the figure to move closer, the one getting up and walking into the light. In doing so, they revealed what they were. A jakhowl.

*gasp* EGADS!!! :pinkiegasp:

"Don't!" It wasn't Flash's voice that cried that, making Springer flinch.

"Twilight? What are you doing in there?"

"Um...taking a shower?"

"With Flash?"

"Why not?" Twilight muttered out, "We all have to do our part to conserve water. Now can you go?! Flash will get to the patrol when we're done in here,"

Springer crossed his arms, not believing that one bit, and despite being shielded by the curtain, a flash of purple made him realize Twilight was likely about to blast him with magic. "Okay," he turned to leave, "I'm going. Geez." He reached the door and was about to head out, but in that moment a wicked idea entered his head. And before his better judgement could stop him, he reached over and hit the flush on the toilet. He then ran out of the room as the sound of two ponies screaming filled the entire castle.

lol gotta conserve hot water! :rainbowlaugh:

Ever since the unfortunate incident with Cozy Glow, Heart's happy and upbeat personality had all but vanished. The pain of her betrayal had shook him to his very core, causing him to lose all the joy that had once been his defining personality trait. Now he was overly serious and constantly annoyed, something that had caused a lot of his fellow students to start giving him a wide berth before the end of school.

Oh boy, thanks again demon spawn! :flutterrage:

Several ponies seemed to hear their screams and rushed to their side, but the trio all seemed to lose consciousness as they did this. Seemed was the optimal word, since the three were still conscious, just slumping over as their consciousnesses seemed to leave their bodies.

As their bodies fell to the dirt, the three felt themselves phase out of their bodies and remain as they were. The pain they felt was gone, but fear had replaced it as they began to float upward.

"What's happening?" Mira cried, Springer wanting to know the same thing as they were lifted higher.

"Are we dead?" Ace asked, clearly terrified Springer would say yes.

"I...I don't think so." Springer moaned out, only for the trio to be pulled in a different direction. Instead of going up, they began to fly forward and pick up speed with each passing second. They all cried out as they left the town and flew through the air almost too fast for them to pick up any detail.

*You have now entered.....The Twilight Zone!* :derpytongue2:

It was indeed a jakhowl, but it was not like any Springer had seen before. It had a different color of fur, for the parts that were blue on Springer were a mixture of cream and many strands of gray. The black parts of Springer were the same for him, though parts of that were also gray, but the most noticeable thing about him was the fact that his skin looked wrinkly. It was an old jakhowl, older than any other jakhowl he had ever seen. And he wasn't the only old jakhowl. The other figures removed their hoods to reveal themselves as jakhowls as well, all being different colors and all looking very old. Not as elderly as the first one, but still well past their prime.

The first jakhowl looked them over, then looked around as if expecting something else to appear. But he seemed rather disappointed. "Is...is this all?"

"What?" Springer asked, but suddenly found himself being pulled back. "Wait! What's happening?!" He cried as the old jakhowls looked the three over.

"Find us," the first one replied, "Find us and we will explain all."

..........okay! :pinkiegasp:

"Twilight," Springer pointed to a mountain on the map, "I need you to make me a Rune Gate to this mountain! Now!"

The ponies in the room all flinched at his outburst as Ace and Mira jumped up onto the table and stared at the sight of the mountain. "Um...why?" Twilight asked, "Springer, is something wrong?"

Springer took a deep breath, unable to believe he was actually going to be saying these worlds. "Jakhowls," he replied, his heart beating a hundred miles an hour as the ponies all went wide-eyed at the news, "There are more jakhowls out there and I've got to find them."

Heck yeah, roadtrip!!! :raritystarry:

Liking where this story's going so far Banshee, can't wait for the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #4 · Dec 20th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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Well, this is the start of another epic original story!

We're starting off strong, with the return of the Jakhowls. After all this time, Springer and the cubs aren't alone anymore! It looks like a tribe of Jakhowl were sealed away at some point, which must have protected them from Dark Mist's ritual, and the events of "School Raze" freed them. This is going to change everything going forward.

"There are too many possibilities. To many images to get a good enough vision. But there is one image that seems clearer then the rest. It is...Razor Fang." The rest of them growled at hearing this. "There is no doubt. He is the only one with that form, and he will play a big part in what is to come."

"You truly expect that arrogant fool to be the one to lead us into the future?!" One in a snow blue cloak sneered, "Ever since he achieved that form, he has grown worse and worse. If he were to lead us, no doubt disaster would follow."

Whoever this Razor Fang is, it sounds like he could potentially be the Big Bad of the story. It almost sounds like he has a Mega Mode of his own. I guess we'll have to wait and see, though I wonder how bad he could be compared to Strong Strike.

"Twilight? What are you doing in there?"

"Um...taking a shower?"

"With Flash?"

"Why not?" Twilight muttered out, "We all have to do our part to conserve water. Now can you go?! Flash will get to the patrol when we're done in here,"

Springer crossed his arms, not believing that one bit, and despite being shielded by the curtain, a flash of purple made him realize Twilight was likely about to blast him with magic. "Okay," he turned to leave, "I'm going. Geez." He reached the door and was about to head out, but in that moment a wicked idea entered his head. And before his better judgement could stop him, he reached over and hit the flush on the toilet. He then ran out of the room as the sound of two ponies screaming filled the entire castle.

Springer is still pretty mischievous. I think it is cute how Flash and Twilight are having their own "Showers of Love" now.

When he had first met all of his friends, they were all single and seemed perfectly happy. Springer had also felt happy on his own, thinking his friends would be all he ever needed. But as time passed and each found a pony to call their special somepony, Springer felt something hollow in his heart. As each of his friends found happiness, that feeling grew and grew. Springer knew that he was never going to get to share the kind of happiness they all had, since he was one of the only jakhowls left alive.

With just him and two others, both too young for him, he knew he was doomed to a life of feeling that hollowness. Forever.

Aww, Springer... I guess that with all of the other Mane characters growing up and in official relationships now, Springer is the one true outlier. Even though Spike technically isn't in a relationship either he has his fair share of potential love interests, unlike Springer who has been "the last of his kind" for years. I guess it is a little sadder since most people consider Applejack the one who was "alone among the couples" before she finally got with Rogue, us Springer was staring us in the face the whole time. Though, hopefully now he can find someone he likes, maybe even that one named Mirage. But will he need to leave Flash and the others behind for it?

Heart didn't say anything back and simply kept punching the tree, Soul sighing as she got back to reading her book. Though she was worried about her brother, she had unfortunately grown use to his moodiness. Ever since the unfortunate incident with Cozy Glow, Heart's happy and upbeat personality had all but vanished. The pain of her betrayal had shook him to his very core, causing him to lose all the joy that had once been his defining personality trait. Now he was overly serious and constantly annoyed, something that had caused a lot of his fellow students to start giving him a wide berth before the end of school.

Flash and the rest of Heart's friends had all tried cheering him up and occasionally, it seemed to work and he almost started smiling. But the universe seemed to want Heart to stay upset since every time he looked ready to become happy again, something or someone would do something that reminded him of Cozy and they would be back to square one.

Looks like Springer isn't the only one with love problems. Poor Heart... I can understand him being heartbroken over Cozy's betrayal, but hopefully he can eventually get back to his old self and find someone new.

Mira sighed before turning to Ace, seeing him dance around with the aura weapon. "But you two can easily do it. What's so different about me?" She glanced down at her fur, seeing the different color, "Maybe...maybe I can't use this move."

"What?!" Springer yelped, "Why would you say that?! Of course you can use it!"

"But what if I can't?" Mira instantly countered, "What if my species of jakhowl can't use that move?" Ace and Springer tilted their heads at that, "I mean, you two are both blue and Springer's entire tribe was blue. So maybe only blue jakhowls can use the Bone Breaker technique. And since I'm not blue, I can't use it."

Ace and Springer opened their mouths at that, about to tell her that was ridiculous, only for nothing to come out. Springer had to admit that that theory could be true. Springer had only seen non-blue jakhowls in the memories he watched from their time in the lost city, and none of them had used any special attacks. If ponies were divided into several subspecies, each with their own specific abilities, who says the jakhowls didn't fall into the same split.

I never thought of that before. That actually makes sense if it turns out to be true. I wonder if different colored Jakhowls are called different things as well to differentiate each other?

RomanLSantos
RomanLSantos #5 · Dec 21st, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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I hope Fire Heart recovers from Cozy's betrayal. I feel really bad for him. Hopefully his sister and maybe his friends will help him feel better.

TharsianBoreas
TharsianBoreas #6 · Dec 26th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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Does this mean that Twilight will finally have her own Jakhowl partner ?

MechaTomX
MechaTomX #7 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · 2 · Chapter 1 ·
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What an exciting start for Springer's new adventure, now that I think about it, I never put myself in his place when thinking about being the only Jakhowl in Equestria, that could be harsh.

When he had first met all of his friends, they were all single and seemed perfectly happy. Springer had also felt happy on his own, thinking his friends would be all he ever needed. But as time passed and each found a pony to call their special somepony, Springer felt something hollow in his heart. As each of his friends found happiness, that feeling grew and grew. Springer knew that he was never going to get to share the kind of happiness they all had, since he was one of the only jakhowls left alive.

Wow, I felt bad when Spike's heart broke, (Seeing your crush with someone else every day), I felt bad again when Heart's heart broke, (And this one is worse since she turned out to be a controller that almost caused the end of magic and endangered lives) but I never thought that Springer would also feel without love, I mean, not finding his special someone because he was the only one of his kind, although I always thought that a relationship between different species was possible, but I think Springer doesn't think that, he must also feel lonely.

Just hope him, Spike and Heart find love before the end of this series.

Kayceejr91
Kayceejr91 #8 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2 ·
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Well this was a good start so fare wondering how many chapters in this one and where this going. Springer big story is about to come full circle.

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #9 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · 2 · Chapter 2 ·
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I do find it weird that Mirage and other Jakhowls didn't use their aura to see if Ponies and a Dragon are trustworthy but going by Sirius' words, Mirage and maybe some a focus too much on training their body than their aura sense. (I think)

Razor seems to get annoyed when Sirius keep referring him as "Mirage and her friends." and not his name, of course this man is full of himself.

I am curiously how Springer would win Mirage's heart since she is rather racist toward all non-Jakhowl species. (After all, there is a Romance tag if anyone miss or overlook it)

Here's highlights

"Well..." Flash turned to Springer, "At least now we know the jakhowls actually have returned."

"Why do I get the feeling that this is gonna be a really complicated problem?" Springer responded.

Oh! This is only the beginning, Springer!

"You side with the ponies," Mirage hissed, "That makes us your enemy." She pushed Springer back and started slashing at him rapidly, the male jakhowl swinging his staff around and barely managing to block them all. This seemed to make Mirage raise an eyebrow. "Who trained you? Your stance is all wrong and you're barely holding the staff correctly."

I love how she's angry that he sides with Ponies and yet, she is giving her tips to him while fighting him! :rainbowlaugh:

And as this exchange happened, another jakhowl was watching the events. This one was black in color, with blood red bands and dark gray chest fur. He watched with a snarl as he grumbled, "Mirage should have let me handle this. I could have destroyed these vermin in ten seconds."

"You sure could." He turned to another jakhowl, this one being in his child form, his fur being snot green with a brown mask and feet. "You could have taken them down no issue. Yup, yup. That's why you're the best and when this is over, you'll be leading us into the future."

"That's right," he nodded. "And don't you forget it." He stared back down at the fight, grinning at the sight, "I'll give you five minutes Mirage...then I'll kill 'em."

Oh no… here comes Strong Strike 2.0 :twilightangry2:

SpikeSmolder fan
SpikeSmolder fan #10 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · 3 · Chapter 2 ·
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Well that was quite the shaky first meeting with these jackhowls, including a new pompous jackass for this story! :ajbemused: Just goes to show you that no matter the species a jackass will always be......A JACKASS!!! :twilightangry2:

On the plus side I'm curious about Mirage after her bout with our fave jackhowl, romantic partner mayhaps? :heart: That combined with the found Jackhowl city promise to be quite the ride! :raritystarry:

So while I pass out these rotten tomatoes to chuck at the latest evil Jackass & his flunky enjoy some Highlights :

"All the more reason to take us with you!" Mira yelled back, "Going alone is dumb. Going with us, not so dumb."

Springer's eyes narrowed at this, "No." They opened their mouths, only for Springer to lean down, making them stumble as he added, "Listen, I know I showed you why I fought him last time and the times before, but you two should know that if it is Shade, you're not ready."

Ace and Mira shared a glance before glaring back at their mentor, "We're ready!" Ace exclaimed, Springer about to reply before the young jakhowl added, "We're not little pups anymore! We've trained hard, and we can hold our own just as much as you can." Springer frowned at this, "Don't forget, we helped save Equestria. I'm pretty sure that qualifies us for going on epic adventures."

"And it wasn't just you who got called," Mira continued, "We were summoned to, and we want to meet the other jakhowls!" She and Ace then gave Springer their best puppy dog eyes, Springer flinching before letting out a groan.

Sorry Springer, no one can resist the puppy dog eyes move....NO ONE!!! :rainbowkiss:

"Good luck!" Starlight told them as they nodded back, Springer going first as he walked up to the light, only to feel a pair of paws grabbing his. He looked down and saw Ace and Mira holding his paws, the pair smiling up at him as he nodded back. They then stepped through the portal together, Spike following behind, the twins going in next. Fash and Twilight stepped up and turned to Starlight, who nodded at them. They smiled back before stepping through the portal together, only for the portal to close.

"I hope everything goes well." Starlight sighs. "Please be safe."

Damn it Glimmy, don't jink them already! :facehoof:

Springer and Mirage pushed against one another, their eyes glaring into each other. "Please," Springer groaned, "I don't wanna do this. We're not your enemies."

"You side with the ponies," Mirage hissed, "That makes us your enemy." She pushed Springer back and started slashing at him rapidly, the male jakhowl swinging his staff around and barely managing to block them all. This seemed to make Mirage raise an eyebrow. "Who trained you? Your stance is all wrong and you're barely holding the staff correctly."

Well he's doing pretty well so far lady, unlike you in a couple of moments! :rainbowkiss:

And as this exchange happened, another jakhowl was watching the events. This one was black in color, with blood red bands and dark gray chest fur. He watched with a snarl as he grumbled, "Mirage should have let me handle this. I could have destroyed these vermin in ten seconds."

"You sure could." He turned to another jakhowl, this one being in his child form, his fur being snot green with a brown mask and feet. "You could have taken them down no issue. Yup, yup. That's why you're the best and when this is over, you'll be leading us into the future."

"That's right," he nodded. "And don't you forget it." He stared back down at the fight, grinning at the sight, "I'll give you five minutes Mirage...then I'll kill 'em."

Alright audience, Jackass/Flunky sighted........fire at will!!! *tomatoes soar toward the screen* :ajsmug:

"And even if it means I have to take you all down...I'LL PROTECT THEM!"

With that, the light exploded off of him, the jakhowls all staggering back at feeling the sudden burst of power that flew off him. And up on the mountain, the other jakhowl saw this and his eyes went wide. "No," he whispered, "That's impossible!"

Mirage's whole body shook as she saw Springer grow taller, his whole form changing as the light exploded off of him to reveal his Mega Mode. "You...you..."

"Yeah," Springer smirked, "I thought this would surprise you." He suddenly vanished with a burst of wind, only for Mirage to feel something fast and strong slam into her. She cried out as she was knocked flying back, the rest of her group all getting struck seconds apart.

One by one, they all crashed into the rocks surrounding the mountain as Springer reappeared. He didn't even look winded at the incredible speed he had just used, as Mirage and her friends moaned. Each of them slid down the rocks and hit the dirt, only for Mirage to glance back up at Springer and whispered, "Incredible...could he be the one?"

He gave you plenty of warning lady, never piss off Springer! :rainbowdetermined2:

"Now do you see, you fake?!" Razor hissed, "Anything your fake power can do, I can do better!" He raised his foot at this, "Die outsiders!"

He then thrust his foot down at the ponies, "NO!" Springer roaring as his avatar grew and completely formed. Within seconds, the two jakhowl-shaped aura masses were the same height as Springer's blocked Razor's avatar's foot before the two stared one another down. "I won't let you hurt my friends."

"And how is a fake like you gonna stop me?" Razor spat as the pair pulled a fist back. "You will not take what is mine,

Yeah yeah yeah, bring it on Jackass!!! :flutterrage:

"Father," Mirage spoke up, "Showing them the way in could be dangerous!"

Sirius shook his head, "I told you, they have no malice within them. You need to spend less time training your body and more time training your heart." Mirage glared at him at this as Sirius led them up to the rocks. Springer glanced back at his friends, the poines all shrugging before beginning to follow the group, the ponies and dragons flying while carrying Ace and Mira.

Ohhh burn!!!!! I like this guy!!!! :rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

Stepping through the arch, they were greeted to one of the most amazing sights they had ever seen. Despite being underground, it almost felt like they were back outside. They were in a large round biome that was so large, the whole of Canterlot could probably fit within it. The edges of the area had giant stone walls that went up so high that they couldn't even guess their height. Several holes were in the wall and many of them were spitting out streams of water that filled large lakes and rivers scattered about the biome.

Looking at the ceiling, they saw a giant crystal sticking out of the roof that was giving off a bright light and in the very center was a massive tree, which they could see had a large number of wooden houses circling around it. And a fair distance away from this tree, out of the shade it produced that blocked the crystal's light, they spotted a flat area that was some kind of farm.

However, the truly amazing sight was the hundreds of jakhowls that they saw scattered around the place. There were many different colored jakhowls, some running around having fun while others were working on the farm, fixing and building houses, cleaning and swimming in the water or simply hanging around doing nothing. Multiple groups were also a good distance away, appearing to be training and sparring against one another.

Springer tried to count them, but kept losing count whenever he got close to triple digits. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. He had come looking for what he had hoped would be the last small group of jakhowls and instead had found an entire kingdom of them. He clutched his heart and fell to his knees as Sirius stepped up and placed a hand on his shoulder.

"Welcome, my friend, to Aurarora."

Whoa.......!!!! :pinkiegasp:

Already hooked on this story & can't wait what the next chapter will bring, till next week Banshee! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #11 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2 ·
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Wow, that sure is a lot to take in. So for some reason, Midage and her friends think that ponies and dragons are enemies. That's odd considering the only other group of Jakhowls in the past were allies for the ponies. Though given how Sirius seems a lot more reasonable than Mirage and Razor, maybe it is just something that small group believes instead of the entire kingdom?

I can tell that Razor is going to be a problem already. He's completely delusional thinking only he can have a Mega Mode, and it is clear he is going to feel threatened by Springer and his friends. It's going to be satisfying to see him get knocked down a peg, or maybe even exiled like Strong Strike was in the past.

Not really the best first interaction between Springer and Mirage, especially if she is meant to be his love interest. But I wonder if that could count as "love at first punch" between them? Especially since she seemed much more interested when he displayed his Mega Mode.

He watched with a snarl as he grumbled, "Mirage should have let me handle this. I could have destroyed these vermin in ten seconds."

"You sure could." He turned to another jakhowl, this one being in his child form, his fur being snot green with a brown mask and feet. "You could have taken them down no issue. Yup, yup. That's why you're the best and when this is over, you'll be leading us into the future."

Oh great, Razor's got one of those bumbelling yes-man sidekicks that praises the ground he walks on.

Mirage huffed, "You might have turned your back on our kind, but I won't!" She pushed him away, only for her body to glow. The next thing Springer knew, Mirage leapt up and four more of her suddenly appeared.

"What the heck?!" Springer yelped as he saw five jakhowls all doing something different. One had her Steel Paw out, another was making an Aura Blast, one was ready to punch him and the last two looked like they were about do a Kamen Pony kick.

Was that Double Team?! Does it work similar to how Springer's did in your Pokémon story where they spread the aura out between copies to make their attacks solid?

Springer tried to count them, but kept losing count whenever he got close to triple digits. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. He had come looking for what he had hoped would be the last small group of jakhowls and instead had found an entire kingdom of them. He clutched his heart and fell to his knees as Sirius stepped up and placed a hand on his shoulder.

"Welcome, my friend, to Aurarora."

Great name, and it seems pretty beautiful. Hopefully this is good for the future of the Jakhowls going forward.

Banshee531
Banshee531 #12 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2 ·
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11461079 I think you're a little confused. Miracle is the name of the small yellow jakhowl who's best friends with Soul. Mirage is the name of this Jakhowl.

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #13 · Dec 27th, 2022 · · · Chapter 2 ·
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11461280
Yes thank you for pointing out that typo error on my part. Fixed now.

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #14 · Jan 3rd, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·
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Alright, it seems every Jakhowls (except Razor) are getting along with Springer and the others through if Umbrum are the villains of this story, they could messed up the potential alliance between Jakhowls and Equestrians.

I had a feeling there's something off about Razor since he's the only black Jakhowl and I do have a theory about him but for now, I hold off on it.

Here's highlights

"So...we would have to help you whenever you get in trouble?" said a voice that was not an elder. It was Razor, who growled as he pushed his way up to the group, "You think you can use us as your own personal shields, all because you're too weak to protect yourself?!"

I'm not sure if he got a point since Royal Guards suck at their jobs in defending their home and Mane Seven did got kidnapped by Chrysalis along with rest of Royal Knights and Canterlot did got invasion a lot… maybe?

"No!" Razor pointed at him, "You forget the prophecy. My destiny. I'm supposed to protect us from our greatest threat and bring us into a new age. That's what I'm doing." He and Sirius glared at one another as Mirage moved in front of her father as if to say 'you want to get to him, you go through me.' Razor hissed at her for a moment, then turned to leave. "Don't come crying to me when these things try and turn you into mindless zombies."

Despite her initially disagreement with her dad, It's nice she willing to defend him from Razor… at the end of the days, she's a daddy girl.

The group all went wide-eyed at this, only for Clair to add, "My great grandmother was the most powerful future seer of all time. And one day, she foretold the eventual arrival of a jakhowl like no other. One that would awaken a form greater than any other jakhowl, and would use it to defeat the greatest threat the jakhowls had ever faced and lead us into a golden age."

Okay, I do have a theory about this prophecy.

Mega Mode is not a form that everyone believes to be and Springer unlock one more form (a god form) that is actual greater than Mega Mode. But hey, I could be wrong.

"Maybe we don't have to worry," Soul added, the other turning to her, only to see her shrug, "Maybe the threat's already passed. Springer's fought a bunch of bad guys. Heck, it sounds like Shade would be the big bad."

"I...guess that could be true." Springer sighs, "I mean, we all saw what he did, along with his master."

You just jinx yourselves! :facehoof:

"It is amazing." Twilight added as they passed a trio of jakhowls playing hopscotch. "And now Springer doesn't have to worry about being the last of his kind. He, Ace and Mira all have a place they can feel at home in."

"I thought they did feel at home in Ponyville?" Heart asked, the group turning to him and saw a low serious glare on his face.

"Of course they feel at home there," Flash added, "But you felt at home in the Lost City until you came to Ponyville. That's probably how Springer and the others are feeling right now. They might have been happy where they were, but now they have a place they can truly be themselves."

Heart frowned, Flash's statement making him look worried. "Does that mean Ace and the others are gonna stay here?"

That question made them all come to a stop, their smiles vanishing at the thought of Springer, Ace and Mira not returning to Ponyville with them. But they knew if they did choose to do that, they had no right to get in their friends' way. "Maybe," Twilight told them, "But that'll be their decision to make. If they want to stay here, we'd have no right to stop them."

Heart just glanced away at this before spreading his wings and flying off. "Heart!" Flash yelled, but didn't go after him. He knew it wouldn't matter. As for Soul, Twilight wrapped a wing around her as they continued to explore the place, eventually arriving at the edge of the giant biome. Here they found several jakhowls hanging around this area, one being the blue elder that was standing next the large wall that covered the village.

To be fair, Heart's still haven't recovered from Cozy Glow's betrayal and he's not in good place right now, so the idea of Springer, Mira and especially Ace staying in Aurarora doesn't sit well with him at all.

They grimaced at that before continuning to inspect the painting, only for Flash to come across one that made him stop and do a double-take. On the wall was an image of the mountain outside with a bunch of tiny jakhowls inside of it. And surrounding the mountain were a bunch of creatures Flash didn't expect to see on a jakhowl mural. "Umbrum." Twilight heard this and sprinted over, seeing the images of creatures she had only seen from Sombra back when he was in his evil days.

"No way," she whispered as Chrome stepped over to them. "What does this picture depict?"

Chrome stared at it and sighed. "That image is of our sealing. It's not a pleasant memory we like to remember, but those that fail to learn from the past are doomed to repeat it."

"You said ponies were the ones that sealed you, right?" Flash asked as Chrome nodded, only for the defender to point at the painting, "But these creatures aren't ponies." That made Chrome tilt his head, Flash then repeating what Razor Fang had said before. "Attacking in the dead of night. Turning into clouds of smoke and using their red horns to put jakhowls into trances. Sucking out their spirits and sealing their enemies away for hundreds of years. I can't believe I didn't see it before."

"See what?" Soul asked, Twilight also making the connection.

"The enemy of the jakhowls from all those years ago. They weren't ponies. They were umbrum."

So the threat that prophecy talks about is Umbrum?! That's means they could pop up anytime soon!

But I don't get it, I thought they are locked away in Crystal Empire, no? Unless this is different tribe of Umbrum?

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SpikeSmolder fan #15 · Jan 3rd, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·
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Sweet exploration of Aurarora & it's lore, interesting bit about the time difference when the seal was put in place by the Umbrum. Also it was great seeing Ace/Mira enjoying themselves here, course I can see the Jackass & his flunky trying to stir up trouble, nothing good will come of these 2 jerks! :ajbemused:

Highlights include :

As they got closer to the village, they passed the farms, the training grounds, and the occasional random jakhowl who spotted them. Whenever the jakhowls saw the ponies, dragon and new jakhowls, they were in absolute surprise. "Why are they staring at us?" Spike asked when one jakhowl dropped a water jug at the sight of them.

"Wouldn't you?" Twilight asked, "We're the first ponies they've seen in...who knows how long."

"Ever," Mirage chimed in, "You are the first ponies we've ever seen. We were all born here. Even my father and the rest of the elders have known no other life except the one we lived in this place.

Yep Spiky, you guys are the center of attention right now! :moustache:

Twilight nodded and showed the elders the rock. "This rock was part of the wall that held the seal, right?" They nodded. "Well, the erosion on one side isn't equal to the erosion on the other."

"What's that supposed to mean?" The brown jakhowl next to Mirage asked.

"It means that one side of the rock aged more than the other side," Mirage replied, "That can only mean that time was moving differently on each side of the rock."

"Exactly," Twilight nodded, "I'll need to do some tests, but I'm willing to bet the magic used to seal you away also changed the flow of time for you. One day in here during the sealing could have been decades out there. So while only a hundred and fifty years have passed in here...thousands of years could have passed. That's why you don't know about Equestria. It was founded after you were sealed up."

"Seriously?!" Flash asked, "What is it with jakhowls and getting locked out of time?!"

Think that's a staple at this point Flash! :twilightsheepish:

"They're not my kids, per say..." Springer slowly replied, his eyes darting back to Ace and Mira for a second. And as he looked back at the elders, he added, "I don't mean to sound negative, but what you'll see won't be exactly pleasant."

"What do you mean?" Sirius responded.

"I...let's just say, my memories will show you a lot." Springer looked back at Ace and Mira again, only for a certain fox to appear in his head. And then it switched to when he had shown them his history in the crystal room, the shock and sadness on their faces as they saw the truth. The duo stared back at him, knowing what he was thinking as he muttered out, "Some things you jakhowls might be better off not seeing."

Sirius shook his head at this, "That does not matter. You hold what we need to see."

Springer glanced back at the elder, now seeing a firm look in the jakhowl's eyes. It was one he had never seen in a jakhowl before. Springer bit his lip at this, still feeling the hesitation as he closed his eyes, "Alright. I'm warning you though...its not pleasant."

And as he reopened his eyes, the elders stared at Springer, only to see something they all recognized. It was the look of age, one that had gone through tons of trials and tribulations. Something the others around them didn't see, even Mirage as she stared at him with eyes of curiosity.

Don't say he didn't warn you! :fluttercry:

"Razor!" Sirius roared, "Enough!" Razor turned to glare at him. "You forget yourself."

"No!" Razor pointed at him, "You forget the prophecy. My destiny. I'm supposed to protect us from our greatest threat and bring us into a new age. That's what I'm doing."

Jackass sure is full of himself isn't he? :twilightangry2:

Then there was a group practicing with Bone Breakers, which Ace and Mira noticed.

"Awesome," Ace smirked as he formed a Bone Breaker and ran up, the group surprised by his sudden arrival, but seeing him getting into his normal stance made the teacher flinch and rush over to correct him.

"Maybe you should take some lessons," Mirage told Springer. The older jakhowl frowned at her and simply walked over to watch the martial arts training while Mirage turned to see Mira staring at the Bone Breaker class longingly. "You can join if you want."

Mira shook her head at this, "I can't." She formed an Aura Blast and tried to reshape it, only for it to puff out of existence. "For some reason, I can't do it. Springer's tried to teach me, but it just doesn't work."

"Ah," Mirage replied, "So you can't use it either. That's alright." Mira glanced back up at her, "Don't worry, I can't use that move either. A lot of Jakhowls can't." Mira's eyes fully went wide at this, "The only move all jakhowls can use is the Aura Blast. For every other move, it depends on the jakhowl's family line."

That never occur to me about been different tribes of jackhowls, having some of them not able to learn some moves! :rainbowhuh:

Heart frowned, Flash's statement making him look worried. "Does that mean Ace and the others are gonna stay here?"

That question made them all come to a stop, their smiles vanishing at the thought of Springer, Ace and Mira not returning to Ponyville with them. But they knew if they did choose to do that, they had no right to get in their friends' way. "Maybe," Twilight told them, "But that'll be their decision to make. If they want to stay here, we'd have no right to stop them."

Heart just glanced away at this before spreading his wings and flying off. "Heart!" Flash yelled, but didn't go after him. He knew it wouldn't matter. As for Soul, Twilight wrapped a wing around her as they continued to explore the place

Damn Heart can't seem to catch a break right now, doesn't he? :fluttercry:

Quite a lot of info to process in this chapter & I love it, keep up the great work Banshee! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #16 · Jan 3rd, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·
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Well this seems to be going well. The other Jakhowl elders and Mirage seem to be much more accepting of Springer and the others now, and this is a great opportunity for them to get in some training and learn more about their species. It felt really good to see Mira and Mirage bonding with each other, including Mirage teaching her the Aura Mirage she showed earlier. Though the thought of the Jakhowls leaving certaintly didn't do anything to help poor Heart feel any better.

It was a bit surprising to find out that apparently these Jakhowls were not only sealed away, but also suffered from a different flow of time too. That certainly explains a few things, but still surprising. Though the reveal that it was apparently umbrum that sealed them, instead of ponies like they claimed, was even more surprising. Since this happened over a thousand years ago that makes me wonder if those umbrum are still around or not. If they are then they could be the main villains of the story, but if not then it will probably be Razor. Razor seems to be in such denial over Springer and determined to prove he is a threat, that he might become "the greatest threat the jakhowls had ever faced" like the prophecy says himself.

"My father has a very rare ability," Mirage chimed in, "Aura-scaping."

"Aura-scaping?" Mira asked as Sirius held out his paws.

"Through connecting our auras, I can see into your mind and view your memories. What's more, I can show those memories to others jakhowls I am connected to, or show you my own memories." Springer's eyes widened at this, unable to believe such a power existed, only to remember the time loop using the memories of everypony in town. "With this ability, I will be able to learn about you and your children and see how the world has changed."

"They're not my kids, per say..." Springer slowly replied, his eyes darting back to Ace and Mira for a second.

Mind reading huh? That's a pretty awesome ability, and helps save on repeating exposition a bit. I still find it funny that everyone considers Ace and Mira to be Springer's kids. Let's face it, at this point they basically are, since he doesn't need to worry about them breeding with each other anymore.

"His Mega Mode?" Springer asked.

"If that's what you call it," Mirage replied, "He calls it his King Form, since he thinks it means he'll one day be the king of the jakhowls due to the prophecy."

The ego on that guy. Mega Mode sounds way better anyway.

"Right," Snivel nodded, "Sure, that Aura-Scape showed a lot of good things, but you're the jakhowl of prophecy. They should listen to you."

Razor slowly nodded back, only to feel himself more stuck than ever. He glared at the training ground, watching Springer spar while Ace continued to practice his Bone Breaker training and Mirage started teaching Mira something. Then he watched the ponies and their dragon friend as they continued to explore the area. "I've got to prove they're dangerous...but how?"

Somehow I dislike this guy more every chapter. I bet he's going to do something to make himself the villain and without even realizing it, provide the threat that Springer defeats so Springer becomes the next leader.

Great White Prime
Great White Prime #17 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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"It's over," Razor hissed, "War is coming, and I'm gonna be the one to lead us to victory."

Well... Sh*t

AwesomeDale
AwesomeDale #18 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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Will Springer and Mirage get together in this series?

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #19 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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Look like Razor Fang is the Big Bad of the story after what he did to Sirius. :twilightangry2:

It's nice to see Springer and Mirage developed their bond. (Through, that may be threatened by Razor's action)

I am surprised there's a blood in this story since the rating is E and I don't know if I know any story with E that have blood on it.

Here's highlights

"So you think they'll come back?"

"If they feel there's a reason to come back. So don't go getting grumpy around them, or they'll think you don't care."

Heart opened his mouth at that, only to close it. He thought back to everything recently, noticing he probably hadn't been very fun to be around, so Ace and Mira might not want to be there with him. But they might still want to be around Soul and the others, so there was still a chance. "Thanks," Heart flared his wings at this before looking back at the elder, "What's your name again?"

The elder chuckled at this, "Name's Core. It was nice to meet you." Heart nodded and took off, leaving Core to sigh as he leaned back and stared at the light glowing crystal ceiling. For some strange reason, talking to that colt had removed his own fears. He was sure now that the jakhowls would return. They would spread out and enjoy the world, but this would always be where they called home.

Core got a point, if Heart act grumpy all the time, Ace and Mira might wouldn't come back to Ponyville (for him at least)

He got one answer when Heart arrived at the hut, stepping through the door. "Hey everypony," he muttered out.

Flash frowned at him, "You okay?"

"Um...I think so." Heart nodded as Ace and Mira turned to him, "Sorry. Guess I let my emotions get the better of me." He then walked up to Ace and Mira, suddenly hugging both. The sight made them all blink, Soul then slinging her hoof around her brother.

Awww…. After what happened with Cozy, Heart really need a hug.

Flash laid beside Twilight as they all slept away, though he was still awake. Heart had asked Ace and Mira to come visit them if they chose to stay in Aurarora, surprising the pair since they weren't even sure if they were actually staying. Twilight told them they would talk about this in the morning when they could bring Springer into the conversation After that, Spike had finished off the letter telling Celestia everything they had learned. It would likely not be until morning that they got an answer, so the they chose to go to sleep. But Flash couldn't seem to drift off for some reason. He simply laid there, thinking about what Heart had said about them staying there.

He imagined what life in Ponyville would be like if Springer chose to stay in Aurarora and it caused his stomach to churn. Springer had been his partner for so long, he didn't know what life with him gone would be. He couldn't help but feel uncertain.

Look like Flash's not the only one about being conflicted regarding Springer staying in Aurarora.

Those thoughts were put on hold in his head as he continued to follow Mirage, only to see her stop at a glowing tree. She put her paw against it along with her forehead. "This is where we spread my mother's ashes." Springer hadn't been expecting that, but he probably should have expected it given he hadn't seen a female jakhowl like Mirage anywhere.

"I'm sorry," was all Springer could say. "I...uh...well...how did it happen?" He instantly flinched at his words, unable to believe he actually asked that. He hit himself on the forehead as she wasn't looking, but stood normal as Mirage turned to him.

"When I was young, sickness infected the village." Springer had a feeling he didn't need to know anymore, but she continued. "My mother caught it along with a few others. It wasn't widespread, but it was enough to...to take them from us." She looked down. "Our healers did everything they could, but the illness was too much for them. My mother and several others died."

:fluttercry: Poor Mirage.

The pair simply sat there, both beginning to tell the other about their own worlds. And before they knew it, the duo were laughing and joking well into the night, telling crazy stories between the two. But as they did this, a certain jakhowl was standing behind a tree.

Razor Fang glared at the two, having heard everything Mirage had told the outsider about their tribe. "This is going too far. I have to stop this...now."

And with that, he walked away with a snarl on his face.

Oh great, not him! :flutterrage:

But as he said this, he slowly got up as he felt something. He walked over to the exit and glanced outside, only to see nothing. "Hmm?" He stepped back inside, only to sense the presence again. And as he felt this, his mouth was suddenly covered before a surge of pain shot through his back and all the way through his body before splitting out his stomach.

"You old fool." The voice made his eyes go wide, only for the weapon stabbing his stomach was pulled out, making him fall over. The elder slowly turned his head at this, now seeing Razor standing over him. "The jakhowls don't need you ruining their lives." He kneled down in front of him and took something out. A cloth. "Those ponies will destroy us unless we destroy them first. But a weakling like you would rather bow down to them and become their slave. Well, I won't let you bring our noble clan down."

"Razor," he coughed as he felt blood fill his mouth, "Don't do this."

"It's over," Razor hissed, "War is coming, and I'm gonna be the one to lead us to victory."

If that's not enough for Razor to be Big Bad, I don't know cause this guy is definitely Strong Strike 2.0 as he went too far by killing Sirius (Mirage's only living relative and her dad) and about to blame this on Ponies.

Why do every tribes always have that Xenophobic guy? Fangpire, Strong Strike and Razor Fang? :ajbemused:

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SpikeSmolder fan #20 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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What nooooooo I liked Sirius, damn you jackass!!!! :fluttercry:

I knew things were going too well, whatever happens to jackass I hope it hurts, 10 times over! :flutterrage:
On the other stuff I'm glad Heart got some much needed comfort after all the crap from S8 finale, not to mention a glimpse into the possible future Flash needs to deal with & a preview of what I think it's gonna be S9 Legion of Doom! :rainbowhuh:

And now some Highlights before the incoming fight! :

Heart looked away again, letting out another sigh, "It's not fair. I've lost so many ponies already. My parents. My first home." His anger rose at the memory of a certain somepony, "Her. Now I'm gonna lose Ace, who's like a brother to me. Mira can be fun, and Springer's helped me just as much as Flash is. And now they're gonna be gone."

"You must not think your friendship with them is that strong," the elder instantly said, Heart's head whipping back to him, "if it were then you wouldn't be so worried about losing them. Them staying here wouldn't stop you from being friends, would it?"

"Wha-no!" Heart shook his head, "But I might not get to see them again!"

"I doubt that would happen. I saw how close those jakhowls are to those in this kingdom. Even if they chose to stay here, they probably wouldn't want to stay the rest of their lives. We jakhowls have been trapped in this place for a hundred and fifty years. Now that we're free, I suspect some will explore this world the best they can. And one of those places will likely be your home."

"So you think they'll come back?"

"If they feel there's a reason to come back. So don't go getting grumpy around them, or they'll think you don't care."

Heart opened his mouth at that, only to close it. He thought back to everything recently, noticing he probably hadn't been very fun to be around, so Ace and Mira might not want to be there with him. But they might still want to be around Soul and the others, so there was still a chance. "Thanks,"

Young Royal Knight trainee needed this, I approve! :heart:

The one previously known as Shadow Corrupter stood before him, looking just as crazy and enraged as the last time he had seen him. Flash thought he had died when Heart blasted him, but it seemed it was all for naught. "Did you do this?!" The defender yelled, "What did you do to Ponyville?!" Void said nothing, "Answer me!"

In that moment, Void's form began to shift. It began to glitch and morph, only for a black mist to cover it as it took a new shape. And when the fog began to fade again, Flash saw a new pony appear within it. A pony he had never seen, but recognized instantly. Himself.

It was a bleach gray version of him, with short blue hair and eyes of red and green. "You...you're the version of me Twilight and Starlight met. The one from another timeline. What are you doing here?"

But as he asked this, Flash's form changed again. It reshaped itself into another pony, another Flash. This Flash looked more like the real one, only his coat and mane weren't as bright. His cutie mark was different, the shield being yellow with a blue lightning bolt over it. Flash knew he didn't recognize this one, but the cowardly look on his face made the Royal Knight uncomfortable.

That is, till the pony changed into another villain from Flash's past: Shake Shocker. He was then replaced by Big Score, then Rickashay, then Boulder, Electra, Doom Raizer, Banshee and Storm Blade. Almost every serious villain that Flash had ever faced before. And after Storm, they changed back into Void before switching back to dark Flash.

Ladies & Gentlemen.............introducing S9 Legion of Doom! :rainbowdetermined2:

Sirius let out a long sigh. He was glad he had lived to see this time. His daughter would get to enjoy the outside world and peace between his home and the ponies was a certainty. He couldn't wait to see the world himself. "I hope I get the chance to see this Crystal Empire they were talking about."

But as he said this, he slowly got up as he felt something. He walked over to the exit and glanced outside, only to see nothing. "Hmm?" He stepped back inside, only to sense the presence again. And as he felt this, his mouth was suddenly covered before a surge of pain shot through his back and all the way through his body before splitting out his stomach.

"You old fool." The voice made his eyes go wide, only for the weapon stabbing his stomach was pulled out, making him fall over. The elder slowly turned his head at this, now seeing Razor standing over him. "The jakhowls don't need you ruining their lives." He kneled down in front of him and took something out. A cloth. "Those ponies will destroy us unless we destroy them first. But a weakling like you would rather bow down to them and become their slave. Well, I won't let you bring our noble clan down."

"Razor," he coughed as he felt blood fill his mouth, "Don't do this."

"It's over," Razor hissed, "War is coming, and I'm gonna be the one to lead us to victory."

You rotten piece of crap! You're going down Jackass!! :twilightangry2:

Looking forward to Springer taking this false king down next time, till then Banshee!!! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #21 · Jan 10th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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A lot of fun stuff here. I liked how Springer spent more time with Mirage and she was able to show him their version of burial grounds, while explaining more of their culture through cremating their dead. I think it is slowly becoming clear that Mirage is meant to be a love-interest for Springer, and I love their interactions here as they slowly bond.

Then there is Flash visiting Crystal Clair, and her speaking to him about what his future has in store for him. It was certainly a lot to take in, and all the villains Flash saw almost feels like they could be members of the Legion of Doom in the next story and Season 9. Void and the Evil Flash being among them is certainly a red flag, but I'm a bit unsure as to why Mean Flash is there, since he didn't seem that evil on his own and the last we saw of him was him deciding to live his life instead of trying to get revenge. It is also a bit interesting that the canon members of the Legion of Doom (Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow) weren't seen in his vision. I guess we'll just have to wait a little bit longer and see.

But then, we get that bombshell of an ending. Right as it seems everything is going okay and an alliance between the Jakhowls and Ponies is as good as established, that bastard Razor seemingly murdered Sirius! I knew he was going to be the Big Bad of the story! He's been looking for a fight ever since Springer and the others arrived, and now he's deluding himself into thinking he's doing what's right by murdering one of his own. I don't know what he is planning to do next, but he is probably going to frame the ponies and Springer for Sirius' death. Hopefully they can prove they all have alibis though, and their interactions with the other Jakhowls in Aurarora will help convince everyone of their innocence.

Springer nodded at this, "I understand. And I want to help you all with that. Though uh...I need help to." Mirage raised an eyebrow. "I...don't know anything about jakhowl culture other than the Aura Blast is meant to be the first thing we learn." Springer lightly laughed as he showed her a small smile, "If I help you all learn about the outside world, can you teach me everything that makes a jakhowl a...well, a jakhowl?"

Mirage smiled and nodded, only for a bulb to go off in her head. "Come with me for a second." She gestured for him to follow, the jakhowl soon cutting into a sprint, Springer flinching for a second before following.

This is adorable. In a way it is similar to why I love pairing Spike and Ember together, Spike teaches her about friendship and she teaches him about dragon customs. Same basic thing here, Springer can teach Mirage and the others about the outside world and she can teach him more about Jakhowls.

"I...don't know," Flash slowly said, "I've seen where that road takes you. My friend, Twilight, once got a glimpse into her future. And when she saw it, she became so terrified by it that she almost drove herself crazy trying to change it. But that just led her to make that future happen anyway."

"Yes. One often finds their destiny on the road they take to avoid it."

Yeah, Jean de La Fontaine said something similar to that once, though I remember it best from Master Oogway.

The pair simply sat there, both beginning to tell the other about their own worlds. And before they knew it, the duo were laughing and joking well into the night, telling crazy stories between the two.

This totally counts as a date. You can't say it doesn't.

"You old fool." The voice made his eyes go wide, only for the weapon stabbing his stomach was pulled out, making him fall over. The elder slowly turned his head at this, now seeing Razor standing over him. "The jakhowls don't need you ruining their lives." He kneled down in front of him and took something out. A cloth. "Those ponies will destroy us unless we destroy them first. But a weakling like you would rather bow down to them and become their slave. Well, I won't let you bring our noble clan down."

"Razor," he coughed as he felt blood fill his mouth, "Don't do this."

"It's over," Razor hissed, "War is coming, and I'm gonna be the one to lead us to victory."

Like Captain America once said, “Every time someone tries to win a war before it starts, innocent people die. Every time." Razor proves it right here. Though it is pretty clear that Razor is only doing this for himself, because he's deluded to think he is the leader the prophecy foretold. But if anything, he's just making himself into the threat.

Jam5022
Jam5022 #22 · Jan 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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Man I can’t wait for the next chapter

Jam5022
Jam5022 #23 · Jan 11th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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"I can sense you're feeling conflicted. And I have a feeling I know why. You are unsure about remaining here or returning to the home you have spent your entire life in." Springer went wide-eyed at this, only for Sirius to add, "I can understand. The ponies have treated you well. I can see why you wouldn't want to stay goodbye to them."

“I can sense you're feeling conflicted. And I have a feeling I know why. You are unsure about remaining here or returning to the home you have spent your entire life in." Springer went wide-eyed at this, only for Sirius to add, "I can understand. The ponies have treated you well. I can see why you wouldn't want to stay goodbye to them."

"Er...yeah," Springer turned to Flash and Twilight, "It's hard to chose."

"Well, it's obvious which one you should choose," Sirius told him. "Both."

"Huh?" The group looked back at him, the elder laughing at their confused expressions.

"You said the ponies have the power to transport themselves great distances in a matter of moments, did you not?" They nodded back, "Well, then you shouldn't have any problems coming back and forth from here and this Ponyville."

"Wait..." Twilight leaned back at this, "You want us to set up a Rune Gate so Springer, Ace and Mira can come and go as they please."

"Why not? Is it difficult to create one of these gates?" Twilight shook her head, "Then I see no reason why Springer can't use one to come and go as he pleases. We won't need him here all the time. He can stay here a few days and help us get acclimated to this world, then return to your home and spend time doing whatever he needs to do there. I think that should be a perfect method for him, wouldn't you?"

Is anyone else getting “Surf and/or Turf” flashbacks? Also the Jakhowl graveyard reminds me of the “Tree of Voices” from Avatar

Blaze-saber
Blaze-saber #24 · Jan 12th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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"You old fool." The voice made his eyes go wide, only for the weapon stabbing his stomach was pulled out, making him fall over. The elder slowly turned his head at this, now seeing Razor standing over him. "The jakhowls don't need you ruining their lives." He kneled down in front of him and took something out. A cloth. "Those ponies will destroy us unless we destroy them first. But a weakling like you would rather bow down to them and become their slave. Well, I won't let you bring our noble clan down."

"Razor," he coughed as he felt blood fill his mouth, "Don't do this."

"It's over," Razor hissed, "War is coming, and I'm gonna be the one to lead us to victory."

Oh it is coming, only because you're being a paranoid psychopath and an egomaniac, Razor.

Great White Prime
Great White Prime #25 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 5 ·
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"Razor Fang, I challenge you to a kyosongsai."

Let the games begin!

MechaTomX
MechaTomX #26 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 5 ·
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I just hope Springer beats Razor, It will be more satisfying to see his face when he loses, losing to the jakhowl he considered inferior.

And if we go by the avatar the last airbender route, maybe take away his powers in the end.

or just kill him but I wouldn't have that option, death is too simple for scum like him.

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #27 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 5 ·
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Oh boy, we are heading toward the climax.

I wonder if Banshee based Razor Fang on Adam Taurus from RWBY due to their hatred toward one species and are Red and Black and both of them killed the leader just to get their way… I am getting that vibe.

I like that this chapter avoids Plot-Mandated Friendship Failure cliches with Mirage and Springer cause I thought Mirage would accuses Springer like other Jakhowls did but surprisingly, she didn't do that since Springer already left before Mirage learns who killed her dad.

I'm glad Elders still believe in them, they're probably my favorite Authority Figures in my opinion.

Here's highlights

"Oh, the restrooms have a large wooden bucket connected to the toilet that we use to store it in. When it's full, we take it out and use it to help fertilize our fields." Twilight, Springer and Spike all felt queasy at hearing this, though they knew that the jakhowls had to do something with it. Waste not, want not. And as Mirage had been explaining that, Springer saw the jakhowl known as Razor Fang walking up to them. The jakhowls around him all stared at him, seeing the glare on his face.

He turned to the game of hopscotch and snarled, "Why are these pups not training? How do you expect them to perfect their fighting abilities if they're wasting their time like this?!"

Oh no, not that asshole. :twilightangry2:

But then Sirius stared up at her again, showing a tiny smile before coughing out more blood. This cleared his airway enough for him to speak. "You...have your mother's eyes." Mirage gasped as she clutched his paw, Sirius holding it tightly as he turned to Springer. "Take care of our tribe. Do what you believe is right and you won't...regret it." He kept both of them in his gaze, the pair staring down at him as he closed his eyes and took one final breath.

"FATHER!" Mirage screamed as Soul stopped her magic and placed her ear to his chest. She waited for a heartbeat, but there was none.

Rest in Peace Sirius. :fluttercry:

Fuck you, Razor! :flutterrage:

But there was no response. He put his paw on his face at this, rubbing it down. "No...no...I can't let it happen again." And as he said this, the noise around him vanished, making him blink before he saw he was now in a white void. In front of him was his father Sharp Paw, a blue flame burning around the jakhowl.

Oh! Springer is having a reunion with his father.

"We figured that," Flash sighed, "I know you all are strong and will probably win a few fights at first, but you're seriously outnumbered." The jakhowls frowned at this, "How many jakhowls in your tribe would you say are actually capable of putting up a fight? Whatever it is, I'm willing to bet Equestria has at least three times that number. And that's before you add in the Crystal Empire, griffons, dragons, changelings, yaks and hippogriffs."

"The jakhowls can't win," Heart finished.

Mirage shook her head at this before growling, "I was worried Razor would only cause you problems. Now I'm worried he might wipe out our tribe. This could lead to the end of the jakhowls! Forever!"

Yup, that basically Razor Fang is the greatest threat that Springer need to take down.

I hope Springer can win Kyosongsai, not only the entire Equestria but the Jakhowls' fate is in his paw.

SpikeSmolder fan
SpikeSmolder fan #28 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 5 ·
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Knew that Jackass would pin his cowardly murder on our Equestria heroes, not to mention that his Toady seems to know what he did with getting rid of the evidence, glad that Mirage kept a cool head & believed our heroes (besides the elders that is) Really want Springer to wipe the floor with this Jackass piece of trash on this Kyosongsai duel, course I wouldn't put it pass him to try some dirty plays, probably by that toady of his! :flutterrage:

So while we wait for that awesome duel to start, here are today's Highlights! :

"Just ignore him." Springer chimed in as his face switched from his smile into one of neither anger or annoyance, but rather pity. "You know, I feel sorry for you." Razor raised an eyebrow at this, his aura sputtering at the words, "You've become so scared of everything that isn't in this place, you can only process them as a threat. But here's the simple facts: The world is a scary place. But it's also a wonderful place with many amazing things worth facing the scary stuff for."

"What's your point?" Razor growled as his aura began to form in his paws again.

"No point," Springer replied, "I just feel sorry for you. Sorry that you can't overcome that fear. But just because you're scared doesn't mean you need to force that fear on others. You can stay here if you want, that's fine. But there are those that want to see what's waiting for them out there, and I'm gonna help show them what they'd miss if they stayed here. And you can't stop that."

Take that Jackass! :ajsmug:

The other jakhowls nodded and then Razor's eyes went wide. "You're right," he nodded. "We don't have any blades like that." He then slowly turned to Flash, "But you do." Flash raised an eyebrow at this as the other jakhowls all stared at him.

"You can't be serious," Flash replied, "You think I did this?"

"You're the only one with a weapon like that," another jakhowl pointed out. "Where is it?"

Flash glanced down at himself, just now remembering he had left it at the hut, the pegasus not seeing a reason to keep it on hoof given how peaceful the place was. "It's at the hut we stayed in. And I can assure you, it's still there."

"Prove it," Razor growled, "Bring this weapon to us and we will determine if it was used to slay our leader."

"Razor!" Clair exclaimed as Mirage continued to hug her father's body, "Show some tact. Besides, how could he have used it?! He was with you the entire time."

"Was he?" Razor asked, "I don't remember seeing him with us right before Sirius called out to us."

They all turned to Flash again, the defender really wishing his bladder hadn't let him down. "Yeah!" another jakhowl yelled, "And he was walking to us when we came here. Maybe he was coming back from here."

"That's insane!" Twilight exclaimed, "That's circumstantial evidence at best!"

"Then prove it!" Razor spat, "Bring this weapon to us."

"Fine!" Flash replied as he spun around and marched out of the tree, Twilight and his friends following him. Springer watched him leave and wanted to join, only to glance back at Mirage.

But then the jakhowl lifted her head and nodded, "Go." Springer nodded back and ran out the tree, catching up with his friends as they made their way through the town.

"Here," Flash pointed at the hut, "My sword's inside." He stepped into the hut and everyone waited for him, but he remained in the hut for a few minutes.

"What's taking him so long?" Core asked, Springer walking into the hut at this. When he looked inside, he was shocked by what he saw. Flash was holding his sword in his hooves and the blade of that sword was covered in blood.

"What?!" Springer yelped, "What's happening?!"

"How?" Flash asked before Razor burst into the room, only to roar as he pointed at the sword.

"MURDERERS!" Before either of them could do anything, he fired a blast of red aura at the pair. The next thing they knew, they were being blasted out of the hut's wall. They crashed into the street and moaned as they skidded on the ground as the hut collapsed, leaving a red glowing aura covered Razor.

What a piece you are Jackass, screw you! :twilightangry2:

"NOOOO!" He roared as he spun around and thrust a fist into a tree, destroying part of the trunk and causing it to fall. He fell to his knees, tears filling his eyes. "Why?! Why is this happening?!" He then glanced up at the sky, "Dad...mom...any jakhowl. If you're really somewhere out there, I need your help. You told me I was the future of the jakhowl race...but what does that mean? Am I destined to be alone because the jakhowls will wipe themselves out again?!"

But there was no response. He put his paw on his face at this, rubbing it down. "No...no...I can't let it happen again." And as he said this, the noise around him vanished, making him blink before he saw he was now in a white void. In front of him was his father Sharp Paw, a blue flame burning around the jakhowl.

"My son...you don't need us to tell you what you need to do. That is something only you can decide."

"But I don't know what to decide," Springer barked back, "This isn't Shade where its obvious what I have to do! I can't mess this up! I-I-I can't make the wrong decision and ruin everything! How am I supposed to undo what's been done?"

"You can't. What has happened is something you can't run away from. You can't ignore. Only by facing what has happened can you hope to overcome it. And even if this results in the jakhowls truly being lost, you cannot let the fear of that possibility stop you."

"But...but that's already happened before! I can't let that happen again! What if I make the wrong decision?!"

"Then you'll make the wrong decision. But even if you do, it won't be your fault." The words made Springer shake, making him glance down at the ground, "My son, never forget you're not alone." He glanced back up at his father. "You have friends that are willing to help you. And not just the ones that are here with you now. All the friends you've made since hatching. They'll be there for you, to help you from making what you believe might be the wrong decision. Do you trust them?"

"Of course."

"Then do so and let them see that they can trust you as well."

And before Springer could reply, the void vanished, Springer now back in the real world. The jakhowl rapidly blinked before slowly saying, "Thank you...dad."

Springer really needed that after all the crap that happened just a few hours ago, well played! :fluttercry:

"Not really," Flash sighed as he looked back down at the blade. "This sword has done so much good. But...knowing it's been used to take an innocent life makes me feel like it's been tainted."

Twilight nodded back as she sat down beside him, "I understand...though I don't get how the killer was able to grab your sword and make their way through the village without anyone seeing. And then come back through the village, carrying a bloodied sword. You'd think someone would have seen them." She commented as she stared at the weapon, "Say...could you put the sword down?"

"Huh?"

"Do it!" Flash didn't argue and did just that, the others turning to her. "Spike, Heart and Soul. Fly up and block the sunlight from touching the sword." The trio tilted her head at this, only to fly above the sword. They blocked out the sun's light as best they could as Twilight's horn began to shine.

"What are you doing?" Ace asked as Twilight's horn glowed a strange purple light that shone down on the sword. This caused the sword to show as a bunch of blots on it.

"What is that?" Mira added.

"Blood," Twilight replied, "Flash might have gotten most of the blood off it, but there's still stains that'll be on the blade for a long time. But its invisible until you shine ultraviolet light on it."

"And what's it showing you?" Flash watched as Twilight kept studying the blade, turning it over several times before a smirk appeared on her lips.

"The blood isn't even." She pointed at the middle of the blade, which seemed darker than the rest. "This is the blood that's been on the blade the longest. If it was used to kill Sirius, the blood should be on the tip. And like I said, the blood isn't even." She showed them one side, the other which seemed to have less blood stains on it. "This blood was wiped onto the blade. They did it on one side, but didn't do such a thorough job on the other."

CSI Equestria's on the case! :twilightsheepish:

Mirage watched as Snivel held up a red cloth, which he then wrapped around a rock and tied up before throwing it into the water.

As the rock sank, Snivel ran off, Mirage staring at him for a second before silently diving in. Swimming all the way to the bottom, she spotted the cloth covered rock and grabbed it. And as she did this, she noticed some of the red was coming off it.

You little piece of............!!!:twilightangry2:

And as they got there, they made their way down, only to spot the ones that had been wrongfully convicted of her father's murder. Mirage then dropped the mask on her aura, allowing Ace and Mira to sense her. They both spun around and gasped at the sight. "Mirage!" Mira cried as the silver jakhowl leapt from the mountain and onto the rocks.

"Mirage," Twilight walked up next, "You have to believe us, we've been framed. Someone else-" She stopped when Mirage threw something at her, gasping when they saw it was a cloth. She grabbed it in her magic and looked it over, seeing the blood covering it. "Is this..."

"A cloth soaked in my father's blood. Yes. Yes it is. I saw Snivel throwing it into a lake."

"Snivel?" Flash asked.

"He's a jakhowl that is the closest thing to a friend for Razor." Chrome said as the jakhowls all leapt down. "Clearly, there is only one explanation. Razor was the one who killed Sirius. And he tried to pin the blame on you."

"So you believe us now?" Spike asked.

"We always believed you," Clair chimed in, "But right now we have bigger issues. Razor is preparing our tribe for war. No doubt, he intends to leave and attack the closest pony town."

"We figured that," Flash sighed, "I know you all are strong and will probably win a few fights at first, but you're seriously outnumbered." The jakhowls frowned at this, "How many jakhowls in your tribe would you say are actually capable of putting up a fight? Whatever it is, I'm willing to bet Equestria has at least three times that number. And that's before you add in the Crystal Empire, griffons, dragons, changelings, yaks and hippogriffs."

"The jakhowls can't win," Heart finished.

Exactly, it would be a slaughter.....for the Jackhowls that is! :pinkiesad2:

He rushed down the mountain with many other jakhowls following, and when he got at the base, he came to a stop. Before him was Mirage and the elders, along with Springer and the invaders. They were all standing in a line, the group ready to stop them from going any further. Springer stood in the center, stepping forward as he locked gazes with Razor. He then sent out a wave of aura and connected his mind to all those outside the mountain.

"Razor Fang, I challenge you to a kyosongsai."

Heck yeah Springer, put down this false king! :rainbowdetermined2:

Looking forward to the much-deserved beatdown of this Jackass in the next chapter Banshee! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #29 · Jan 17th, 2023 · · · Chapter 5 ·
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I knew it! I knew Razor Fang was going to frame his murder of Sirius on Flash and the others! I'm just glad that Mirage and the other elders never once questioned their innocence and always knew something wasn't right. Heck, Razor Fang was only in charge for a day and by that the the adrenaline had already worn off for the other Jakhowls enough for them to start questioning Razor themselves.

But now we have a big problem. A tyrant is preparing for a war he can't win and his stupidity and stubbornness is going to get himself and his entire tribe killed! I swear, it is feeling more and more like there is going to be a "prophecy twist" and Razor himself will turn out to be the "greatest threat" to the Jakhowls, which Springer needs to defeat and become the new king. This is feeling like a blast from the past, just like how Sharp Paw defeated Strong Strike to become chief. I have a feeling this kyosongsai is going to be the climax of the story, and I can't wait to watch Springer kick Razor's ass!

Speaking of Sharp, his brief appearance here as a vision to help Springer was nicely done. In a way, it seemed like both Springer and Mirage got help from their parents from beyond the grave. Those two basically seem perfect for each other at this rate.

But then Sirius stared up at her again, showing a tiny smile before coughing out more blood. This cleared his airway enough for him to speak. "You...have your mother's eyes." Mirage gasped as she clutched his paw, Sirius holding it tightly as he turned to Springer. "Take care of our tribe. Do what you believe is right and you won't...regret it." He kept both of them in his gaze, the pair staring down at him as he closed his eyes and took one final breath.

At first, I was wondering why Sirius didn't use his last words to tell everyone that Razor was the one who did this to him, but using the moment to comfort his daughter and pass leadership on to Springer was a nice touch instead. It is just too bad almost nobody else honored his last words and instead listened to Razor. I do wonder though, was that "you have your mother's eyes" comment a Harry Potter reference?

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #30 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Finally! After weeks of him constantly belittling them, Springer give him a massive comeuppance as Razor learned that the hard way that you can't defeat the power of FRIENDSHIP!!!!!

I did knew Springer would have a form that is even greater than Mega Mode and oh boy! It was ultra satisfying to see him beat the loving crap of that no good king wannabe asshole!

Here's highlights

Razor's eyes narrowed at this before turning to Springer, hissing at the sight of the jakhowl, "Think carefully about this. If you waste anymore of my time, I will not be lenient on you. I will accept your challenge and when I do, I won't stop until you are ripped to shreds. You sure you want to face the most powerful jakhowl that has ever been born?!"

Oh shut up, you Strong Strike 2.0! :flutterrage:

"Shows what you know," Razor spat, "I'm the strongest jakhowl to have ever lived! I've spent years preparing for this war, and I've honed my body to become the perfect weapon! I can go for hours!"

Oh wow! I am surprised no one call you Deluded One 3.0, Razor. :ajbemused:

With that, he started firing Aura Blast after Aura Blast at the pair. Ace leapt in front of Mira and used his staff to deflect them as Mira took a deep breath. She remembered what Mirage had taught him, the yellow jakhowl digging deep as she started to glow. Taking a few steps back, she then charged as Ace continued to deflect the orbs.

And when she was right behind him, Mira leapt straight up as the light around her flew off and split into two. Snivel saw this and gasped when he spotted a trio of Miras flying at him. He fired another Aura Blast and struck the middle one, but found it just vanished. He then shot the one to the left and it vanished, leaving only one, only for Ace to charge in with an Aura Blast, Mira making one as well.

And with a mighty roar, both slammed their attacks into Snivel in unison, the jakhowl screaming as the attacks exploded and blasted through a rock before slamming into another. He slumped over next, the two panting for a second before walking over to the knocked out jakhowl.

"Come on." Mira grabbed Snivel's right arm, "We gotta show everyone what he was doing."

"Right!" Ace replied as he grabbed the other arm.

Yeah! Teach this goon a lesson for messing with Springer!

Springer felt himself beginning to black out again, and as he stared at the growling jakhowl above him, only one idea came into his head. He then closed his eyes, and with all the focus he could, he connected his aura to all those around him. Razor and the others felt this, Razor raising an eyebrow. "What are you doing?!" Springer didn't answer and instead thrust his paw up and grabbed Razor by the temple. And before Razor could pull away, Springer's eyes shot open and revealed themselves to be glowing. The rest of the jakhowls did the same, all now being brought under the Aura-Scape's power and pulled into Razor's mind.

Busted! :ajsmug:

"Of course I didn't! It was nothing but lies, just like your lies over friendship!" Razor spat, the defender rolling his eyes at that.

"It's no lie. Here, let me show you the power of friendship. ARMORiZE!" Razor was suddenly blinded as Flash morphed into his Shining Guardian form, the pegasi then slammed his hoof into Razor's face before thrusting his sword, Razor quickly blocking it.

Beat him up, Flash for telling you off about friendship! :flutterrage:

Snivel was right behind them, "Razor!" He called out, making the larger jakhow turn to him, "Bring me inside before I get crushed! Please, hurry!"

But the jakhowl inside the avatar just glared at him.

"Useless," he opened his avatar's mouth and charged up another Aura Force. "Not only have you never been able to access your stronger form, but you allowed actual pups to defeat you!" Snivel's eyes went wide as the laser exploded out the avatar's mouth. "BEGONE!"

Snivel screamed as he tried to run, only for the laser to explode around him, sending him flying as a cloud of dust consumed him.

To be fair, Snivel deserves that one for trying to cheat and hurting Springer.

And then he thrust his avatar's paws, "You're mine!" He declared as Ace and Mira saw the giant paws, both firing Aura Blasts to no effect. He then grabbed both in the energy construct.

OH HELL NO YOU DIDN'T! :twilightangry2:

Razor laughed at the pair, "HA! You stupid pups! He will surrender as long as I have you. He is weak, just like you."

Ace and Mira just glared at him. "You don't know anything!" the yellow jakhowl pup growled, her body starting to glow along with Ace. "We're not like you."

"We're a team!" Ace added as the glowing grew brighter. "No...we're more than that! We're a family! Even if we're not connected by blood, we're connected. That's what Springer taught us when he wanted us to be the next generation!"

Mira nodded, "And there's one thing we've learned about family." Then, they both yelled out in unison. "WE ALL FIGHT FOR EACH OTHER!" With that, the light exploded off of them. It started out as blue, coming from their aura, but then it changed to a shining golden light that filled the air.

"AHHHH!" Razor cried, feeling his avatar's paw burn as the light ripped through the construct. The light off the two then flew off them and curved down toward Springer. The twin energies spiraled around before slamming into Springer, making him gasp as he felt it flow through him.

GO MIRA AND ACE!!!!! :rainbowdetermined2:

Everyone gasped as Springer stood up and was completely enveloped by the light. Then, his eyes shot open as he felt new strength flow through him. The golden light began to merge with his body and form armor-like constructs around him, a helmet forming around his head, covering everything but his ears and bands. The same armor then formed around his lower arms and legs, with holes in them to allow his spikes to poke through. Finally, armor appeared around his chest and had an opening for his chest spike to stick through.

From his back had something else begin to form out. A pair of energy wings that looked like they were made of feathers, which began to beat as Springer was lifted into the air. The energy constructs remained on him and shone with an amazing light, while Springer felt more power than he had ever felt in his entire life.

Hell YEAH!!!! Now kick that deluded asshole up! :rainbowdetermined2:

But then Springer let out a mighty roar. "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" The avatar's arms exploded from the wave of energy flowing out of Springer, the defender thrusting his arms and legs out wide. The blow pushed Razor back, only to see Springer begin to fly upward, light now forming around him, "This...end...NOW!" The light then flew into Springer's paw and began to spiral around, forming a golden Aura Blast.

"No," Razor screamed as he began firing Aura Forces at Springer, only for the light surrounding him to act like a barrier, deflecting each attack. "NOOOOO!"

Springer then shot down as Razor fired another laser, only to thrust the orb forward, striking the beam and splitting it in two. "Aura...DESTROYER!" With that, the golden sphere struck the head of the avatar and unleashed a light so bright it blinded all those that saw it.

And as they were forced to close their eyes and look away, Razor's voice filled the air as he screamed in absolute agony, "AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!"

Not so powerful after all, Deluded One 3.0! :ajsmug:

Great White Prime
Great White Prime #31 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Now that was a ride! This chapter had me pumped!

AwesomeDale
AwesomeDale #32 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Springer -Flash
Ace-Heart
Mira-Soul
Mirage-Twilight

SpikeSmolder fan
SpikeSmolder fan #33 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Glad that both Jackass & his toady got what they deserved, talk about deluded! (spies Deluded one off to the destroyed pile:ajbemused:) Also it was a given that Jackass wouldn't play fair inside/outside of that duel! :twilightangry2: I say good riddance to the false king & his toady!!!:ajsmug:

While we wait for the clean-up here are today's Highlights! :

"You dare attempt to claim the right to demand a kysongsai?! You, the outsider who aligns themselves with our mortal enemies!" He turned to Mirage and the elders. "You told him about it, didn't you? You spit in your father's name, Mirage! Trying to get this traitor and his murderous allies to claim the right of leadership!"

Mirage glared right back at him, "You have no right to speak about my father. Not after what you did!" She then threw down a certain blood-soaked cloth on the ground. "Everyone, listen. The ponies aren't your enemies, and they aren't the ones who killed my father." She pointed at Razor, "He is! And he got his lackey, Snivel, to plant the evidence on the ponies!"

Yes, thanks for calling him out Mirage! :flutterrage:

At the same time on the other side of the fight, Ace and Mira were watching their guardian as the shield began to crack. But as they did this, Ace saw Snivel moving away from the group. He had a feeling he wasn't just bored about the fight, so he nudged Mira before talking to her through his aura, "We might have a problem,"

"What is it?"

"I just saw that Snivel jakhowl walk away." Mira glanced out at the crowd, only to see no sign of the green jakhowl.

"Where'd he go? We better keep an eye on him." Ace nodded and when nobody else was looking, they also broke away from the group and moved around the outside of the circle.

I knew this toady would do something like this! :facehoof:

Ace and Mira had detected Snivel as they continued to climb over some rocks. Following his aura to a higher section of boulders, they saw that they were now overlooking the area the kyosonsai was taking place. The duo then spotted Snivel, who was hiding behind one of the larger rocks with a perfect view of the fight. And as they approached, Snivel summoned some aura and condensed it down into a tiny needle, one that was so small that it was almost invisible.

He held the needle between his paws and looked around the rock, then threw it. Moments later, Springer cried out in pain despite not being hurt. The pair gasped at this, "Cheat!" Ace yelled, making Snivel gasp before turning to see a charging Ace. He slashed a Steel Paw at him, the green jakhowl jumping back with a startle.

Mira then fired an Aura Blast, Snivel yelping as he made his own and threw it, both attacks connecting and cancelling each other out. But as this happened, Ace leapt at him and summoned a Bone Breaker, Snivel jumping back at this before firing a ton of tiny aura needles. And as they struck Ace...he barely felt anything. Just a slight prick. "Well, that was anticlimactic."

Mira glanced back down at Springer's fight, seeing the jakhowl covered in cuts. "They only hurt because they're being driven into open wounds. On their own, they're weak."

"Kind of like him," Ace added.

"You won't stop me!" Snivel growled back at the two, "Razor will be the leader. And when he's in charge, I'll be on easy street."

"What?! That's why you're helping Razor?!" Mira yelped, "He's going to wipe out our entire species!"

"Oh please. I've seen how powerful Razor is. Those ponies won't stand a chance. And when he rules Equestria, I'll be his right paw jakhowl."

Oh so not only is he a slimy piece of crap, he's also weak & stupid! :ajbemused:

"Run!" Ace cried as he and Mira tried to escape the falling rocks, blasting some of them as they ran.

Snivel was right behind them, "Razor!" He called out, making the larger jakhow turn to him, "Bring me inside before I get crushed! Please, hurry!"

But the jakhowl inside the avatar just glared at him.

"Useless," he opened his avatar's mouth and charged up another Aura Force. "Not only have you never been able to access your stronger form, but you allowed actual pups to defeat you!" Snivel's eyes went wide as the laser exploded out the avatar's mouth. "BEGONE!"

Snivel screamed as he tried to run, only for the laser to explode around him, sending him flying as a cloud of dust consumed him.

And the Toady gets toast, good riddance! :rainbowkiss:

"What's he doing?" Heart asked, Mirage not willing to wait and find out. She fired her own Aura Force at this, only for it to simply bounce off the energy body. The other elders also launched their attacks, along with Spike and the ponies shooting at him, but Razor either didn't feel the attacks or tuned them out, too focused on his goal to stop.

And then he thrust his avatar's paws, "You're mine!" He declared as Ace and Mira saw the giant paws, both firing Aura Blasts to no effect. He then grabbed both in the energy construct.

Flash and Springer charged at this, both yelling, "STOP!" only for Razor to spin around and hold up the duo in his avatar's paw. The pair were screaming at this, both in pain as Razor let out another laugh.

"ACE/MIRA!" Heart and Soul cried as Flash and Springer came to a stop. Seeing this, Razor thrust his other paw forward, striking the hybrid avatar back.

Yep, Jackass is a complete piece of sh**!!! :pinkiegasp::flutterrage:

But then Springer let out a mighty roar. "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" The avatar's arms exploded from the wave of energy flowing out of Springer, the defender thrusting his arms and legs out wide. The blow pushed Razor back, only to see Springer begin to fly upward, light now forming around him, "This...end...NOW!" The light then flew into Springer's paw and began to spiral around, forming a golden Aura Blast.

"No," Razor screamed as he began firing Aura Forces at Springer, only for the light surrounding him to act like a barrier, deflecting each attack. "NOOOOO!"

Springer then shot down as Razor fired another laser, only to thrust the orb forward, striking the beam and splitting it in two. "Aura...DESTROYER!" With that, the golden sphere struck the head of the avatar and unleashed a light so bright it blinded all those that saw it.

And as they were forced to close their eyes and look away, Razor's voice filled the air as he screamed in absolute agony, "AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!"

Begone False King!!! :rainbowdetermined2:

Awesome fight for our fave jackhowl Banshee, looking forward to the wrap-up! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #34 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Yeah! Kick his ass Springer! At long last, Razor's delusions of grandeur are not only crushed, he is finally seen for what he really is by the rest of Aurarora. He's a liar, a coward, a cheater, a bully, a villain, and above all else a murderer.

After so much speculation, seeing the prophecy come to pass was amazing! Springer getting a new form beyond even his Mega Mode was awesome! I wonder what this form of his will be called? It sort of reminds me of Flash's Shining Guardian form. Plus, him getting it because he, Ace, and Mira all are equally willing to give their lives for each other was heartwarming, and shows even if they don't share blood they are family. I wonder if that means Springer will accept be called their "dad" now?

Now that Razor, the the greatest threat the Jakhowls have ever faced, has been defeated, I guess that means Springer can officially become their new leader. His parents would be so proud of him. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all wraps up next time. Plus we also have a few loose ends to tie up, like will Springer and the pups live in Auraroa for the time being, and will Springer and Mirage officially hook up together?

Great White Prime
Great White Prime #35 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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Goodbye Jakhowls, it is going to be very different (and quite interesting) now that they decided to live in Aurarora. I'm interested to see how Flash and the others will adjust to life without them. Quite a journey it has been with them.

In the words of Kratos: "Loki will go, Atreus... Atreus remains"

E930
E930 #36 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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Very good story! Inredible!
I can´t wait to see the retold of the season 9.
Just one little question: in the retold, you will rewrite the episode "Sweet and Smokey". Sorry the anticipation, but that was my less favourite episode in the all season. Just a question.
Keep doing this. You are amazing.

Ragnarok17
Ragnarok17 #37 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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What a perfect send off to Springer! :pinkiesad2:

While I glad Ace and Mira still going to School of Friendship, but this ending make it clear this is Springer's final appearance as main cast members.

It's rather interesting that despite Romance tag, Springer didn't kiss Mirage who is his implied love interest.

Farewell, Springer!

Here's highlights

And as he began to walk away, Razor watched him as he clenched up his paws, "You...someone that weak beat me?!" he whispered as Flash and Twilight moved to his sides in order to restrain him. But as they were about to grab him, he unleashed a burst of aura that pushed them away. "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" He threw himself back to his feet and formed an Aura Blast, firing it at Springer.

Everyone spun around and saw this, Springer's instincts kicking in. He created a Bone Breaker and deflected the sphere with a single swipe, knocking it back into the mountain above Razor. The explosion caused the rocks to break apart, the jakhowl glancing up and saw a rock slide begin. Everyone gasped and began to run, the winged ones taking to the air as the jakhowls leapt away. But as this happened, Razor didn't move, his body clenching up due to the move he just did, Springer seeing this and gasping. He began to sprint after him, only for the rocks to slam down into Razor. The rubble made Springer leap back, the edge Razor was on now shattering into pieces.

A second later, the rocks covered the side of the mountain, boulders falling for a whole minute as the group landed on the ground just outside the mountain's base. And as it finished, Springer stared the now pile of rubble...and didn't sense a single life force inside the rock pile.

The jakhowls all frowned at this, none exactly sad that the psycho was gone...but knew that it wasn't right that Razor couldn't let go of his hatred and instead had succumbed to it. Now, all he would be remembered for was being a criminal that almost destroyed them.

And as everyone came down from the mountain, they all turned to Springer, ready to see what he would do now, only for another sound to ring out. They spun around to see the rocks on the mountain to move, only for a small green jakhowl to crawl out of a pile, "Snivel!?" Mirage yelped as the jakhowl coughed and brushed himself off. "How the heck are you still alive?"

Oh no, not that scumbag. :twilightangry2:

And after another minute, Springer spoke up, "Five years." Snivel glanced up at him at this, "You have until nightfall to leave these lands. After that, I don't want to see you here for five years. What you do in that time is up to you. You can live just outside the jakhowl land, or go find a far-off place to live. But if I see you in the lands the ponies have given us until the time of your banishment has passed, I won't be so forgiving."

Snivel went fully wide-eyed at this, only to turn to the rest of the jakhowls. Not a single one seemed to be against this statement, clearly meaning Snivel wasn't going to get off. "F-f-five years?! How will I survive?!"

"I don't know," Springer replied, "That's for you to decide. But if I find out you've been stealing or doing anything else that might hurt others, I'll find you and throw you in the first prison cell I can find."

Snivel gulped at this, the jakhowl slowly picking himself up and turning to leave. Everyone watched him quietly walk away, stopping for just a moment right before entering the trees and looking back at them. Clearly, they weren't going to change their minds. As such, he disappeared into the woods. Hopefully, none would see him for a good five years, and he would return as something better.

Good riddance! Have fun surviving on your own without anyone helping you, scumbag!

And when the symbol was drawn, Chrome and Clair both did a slight bow. They stepped back, allowing Springer to stand up as Core and Cress stepped up to either side of him, all turning to the crowd as Core spoke out to the masses. "The chief...has come home!"

"Long live the chief!" Cress added as the jakhowls all cheered and repeated his words. Many started firing Aura Blasts into the sky, which collided and exploded like a bunch of fireworks.

Springer is now the CHIEF like his father! Oh no! That means he have to say goodbye to Flash and others. :fluttershysad:

Then, she opened her eyes and saw something that made her gasp. The light that was being drawn out of the ashes flowed upward like mist, which slowly began to take shape and form the blue ghostly image of her father. She could barely believe it, Mirage glancing around, but no one else seemed to see this. She looked back at her father and was close to crying again, but stayed strong for Sirius.

Her father smiled and nodded, telling her he knew she would make him proud. This made her feel great joy and pride as another cloud of light came off of the tree and began to form next to her father. This did make Mirage begin to cry as she saw the form of her mother appear. She and Sirius smiled at one another before holding paws and turning to their daughter, Mirage's heart swelling at the sight of her mother after so long. She smiled back at them, wiping her tears as she watched them glance at Springer. Mirage knew what they were trying to say and mentally swore she would help Springer as best she could. She had seen how difficult being leader could be, and knew Springer would need all the help she could offer.

The pair gave her one final smile before their physical forms began to fade away, transforming back into the glowing mist that had formed them and returning to the ash on the ground. The light was then absorbed by the roots of the tree and sucked into the trunk and leaves. Sirius had joined with his beloved in eternal rest, but would always be there for them if they ever needed his guidance.

Rest in Peace, Sirius.

He's now reunited with his beloved.

Springer laughed at this, "It might need a bit of a cleaning though." Twilight laughed as well before wiping her tears away before walking up to the Rune Gate. She stopped and placed a hoof on Flash's shoulder, the defender nodding before Twilight went through the portal.

With her gone, it was now just him and Springer staring one another down. Both weren't sure what to say, the two knowing this would be the most painful parting of them all.

Oh no… I'm not looking forward this scene. :fluttercry:

"So long." The pair stared at each other, tears trying to appear in each others' eyes.
Memories began to go through their heads at this. The day they met and became partners, working together to protect Ponyville. This was followed by them making new friends together, fighting in the Battle of Canterlot, their battle against Discord, their adventure in the mountain that bought them even closer together, their mission in Omniara, getting sucked into a comic book, Springer's time loop, learning about Springer's past, their adventure to the lost city and so many more incredible adventures.

And it wasn't just the big stuff they remembered. It was the little things that they remembered the most. The times they simply hung out as best friends, whether it was reading comics, playing games or just relaxing or playing music together. The years they had spent together all slowly blurring into a group of incredible memories. There were bad memories as well, but those were few and far between the great ones they had made.

And now, it was time to say goodbye. The days of making constant new memories was over. No longer able to take it, Springer and Flash pulled one another into a tight hug. "I'm gonna miss you."

"I'm gonna miss you to," Springer muttered out, "But...it's not like we'll never see each other again." They pulled apart. "Just watch. Our best adventures are probably still ahead of us. And even if we won't see each other that much, we're still partners. And more than that, we're friends."

Flash smiled and held up a hoof, Springer smirking back before their pumped fists. With that, Flash pulled away and began to move toward the Rune Gate. He stopped right in front of it and turned back to Springer, then looked past him at Mirage, Ace and Mira. "Keep an eye on him for me. Don't let him do anything stupid."

They nodded with a smile before Flash and Springer shared one final look, Flash then stepping back into the Rune Gate.

"Be happy old friend," was Flash's last words before he completely vanished. The Rune Gate then disappeared as well, vanishing in the blink of an eye before the paper that held it burnt up.

BANSHEE!!!! WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME, MAN?!?! :raritycry:

Don't cry, don't cry, don't cry, don't cry. :applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

Well, now that that's out of the way. I hope you all enjoyed this story and saw it as a nice farewell to Springer and his journey. This won't be the last you see of him, but I hope it was a good way to let him leave the main cast. Now, it's on to the beginning. The Beginning of the End.

Oh boy! The Beginning of the End! I had a feeling which villain that Flash going to face off against in that retell story.

HarryBuilder
HarryBuilder #38 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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So hopefully by Season 9, Flash will have finally purposed to Twilight?

nathanb
nathanb #39 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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All story as an end, Springer's has gone full cycle to pup, to defender, to warrior and finaly to leader. We will see him again but not as much as we did.
I'm really excited to see what you did with the beginning of the end and season 9 (I think, I know which vilain you will use as the main bad of the season :ajsmug: :moustache: or you will do something totally different and it'll be a total surprise for me :rainbowlaugh:).
I hope when this serie will end, we will have a true conclusion, like a bonus chapter with all the characters as adults in the future, something like that will be pretty cool.
Good work as always, keep it up my guy.

SpikeSmolder fan
SpikeSmolder fan #40 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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*sob* Sweet sendoff for our favorite jackhowl, he has come a long way from the time Flash found him at the Everfree! :fluttercry: Gonna feel weird not having Springer as part of the main cast anymore but I can wait to see him pop up from time to time on S9. As for both Jackass & his Toady they both got what they deserved, good riddance! :twilightangry2:

Here's a final Highlight list for you Springer-boy! :

Twilight smiled at her as Springer turned to Razor.

"Don't try anything stupid. We both know you're in no fit shape to try and fight against what's happening to you. Accept your sentence and try for some remorse. And if you truly do come to regret your actions and ask for forgiveness, I'll give it to you if I feel you're remorseful."

Razor growled at him, "You would forgive me after everything I did?"

"I'm not you," Springer responded, "I've seen how toxic constant hatred can be. I won't let it corrupt me like it's corrupted you. It'll do nothing but destroy me." He and all but Twilight and Flash turned to leave. "I'm gonna live my life surrounded by love and friendship, not fear and hatred."

And as he began to walk away, Razor watched him as he clenched up his paws, "You...someone that weak beat me?!" he whispered as Flash and Twilight moved to his sides in order to restrain him. But as they were about to grab him, he unleashed a burst of aura that pushed them away. "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" He threw himself back to his feet and formed an Aura Blast, firing it at Springer.

Everyone spun around and saw this, Springer's instincts kicking in. He created a Bone Breaker and deflected the sphere with a single swipe, knocking it back into the mountain above Razor. The explosion caused the rocks to break apart, the jakhowl glancing up and saw a rock slide begin. Everyone gasped and began to run, the winged ones taking to the air as the jakhowls leapt away. But as this happened, Razor didn't move, his body clenching up due to the move he just did, Springer seeing this and gasping. He began to sprint after him, only for the rocks to slam down into Razor. The rubble made Springer leap back, the edge Razor was on now shattering into pieces.

A second later, the rocks covered the side of the mountain, boulders falling for a whole minute as the group landed on the ground just outside the mountain's base. And as it finished, Springer stared the now pile of rubble...and didn't sense a single life force inside the rock pile.

Your last lesson Jackass, karma's a cruel unforgiving mistress!!!:ajbemused:

"Snivel!?" Mirage yelped as the jakhowl coughed and brushed himself off. "How the heck are you still alive?"

"No idea," he replied, only to glance around, "But what happened? Where's Razor?"

"Gone," Springer responded, "And he's not coming back. The jakhowl you put all your faith in isn't gonna help you anymore."

Snivel went wide-eyed before gulping as the others jakhowls all walked up and glared at him. The tiny jakhowl's eyes darted around at the sight, his body shivering before he muttered out, "That's...great." He turned to Springer and tried to smile, "I knew Razor was no good. I'm so glad our kind has a real leader to bring them into the future. And, of course, if you need anything, I'll be happy to be of service."

"Guess nobody taught you anything about loyalty," Spike crossed his arms.

Congratulations, your poke de-evolved into a slimy worm! :flutterrage:

Springer glared down at him, disgusted by his spinelessness. The other jakhowls looked up at him, ready to hear Springer's judgment, only to see the jakhowl just stare at Snivel. Silence now embraced the area, Snivel shivering as he put his face in the dirt.

And after another minute, Springer spoke up, "Five years." Snivel glanced up at him at this, "You have until nightfall to leave these lands. After that, I don't want to see you here for five years. What you do in that time is up to you. You can live just outside the jakhowl land, or go find a far-off place to live. But if I see you in the lands the ponies have given us until the time of your banishment has passed, I won't be so forgiving."

Snivel went fully wide-eyed at this, only to turn to the rest of the jakhowls. Not a single one seemed to be against this statement, clearly meaning Snivel wasn't going to get off. "F-f-five years?! How will I survive?!"

"I don't know," Springer replied, "That's for you to decide. But if I find out you've been stealing or doing anything else that might hurt others, I'll find you and throw you in the first prison cell I can find."

Snivel gulped at this, the jakhowl slowly picking himself up and turning to leave. Everyone watched him quietly walk away, stopping for just a moment right before entering the trees and looking back at them. Clearly, they weren't going to change their minds. As such, he disappeared into the woods. Hopefully, none would see him for a good five years, and he would return as something better.

Something tells me he'll come back in the worst way! *looks at S9 offscreen*:applejackunsure:

Eventually, they arrived at the same tree Mirage's mother had been scattered under. Once there, Mirage took the jar and opened it up. Taking out a pawful, she started sprinkling it along the ground, Springer doing the same thing, followed by the elders, Ace, Mira, and every other jakhowl in the tribe.

As the ashes were scattered along the ground, the tree they were spreading it around's light grew brighter as it spread to the ground. The ashes started glowing, the spiritual aura within them being drawn out and into the tree. Spike and the ponies also got to spread some of these ashes, something they all considered a great honor. And after they had done this, Mirage took the remaining ash and scattered it around the tree.

The light spread to this new ash and also drew out the echo of her father, Mirage stepping back and taking a deep breath. "Father, I'll miss you. But I promise I'll keep doing your work for as long as I can. I'll protect our home, and show the world how amazing the jakhowls can be."

Then, she opened her eyes and saw something that made her gasp. The light that was being drawn out of the ashes flowed upward like mist, which slowly began to take shape and form the blue ghostly image of her father. She could barely believe it, Mirage glancing around, but no one else seemed to see this. She looked back at her father and was close to crying again, but stayed strong for Sirius.

So long Sirius, you were awesome! :applecry:

"You're really staying?" Heart asked, looking ready to start crying.

"We have to," Mira replied, "We still have so much to learn about the jakhowls."

"And they've got load for us to teach them about the modern day," Ace added, "Besides, Springer's gonna need all the help he can get now that he's the new leader of the jakhowls." Mira nodded in agreement while the twins frown at them. The pair pulled their pony partners at this, the four hugging it out as Twilight finished setting up the Rune Gate and turned to them.

They then pulled away as Mira said, "Besides, it's not like this'll be the last we see of each other. Summer's not that long."

That made Twilight go wide-eyed, "Wait...are you planning to come back to the School of Friendship?" They both nodded, making Twilight smile and clap her hooves. "That's wonderful."

"Yeah," Ace laughed, "We can't drop out yet. Not after everything we went through to pass our first year." Mira nodded again.

"Besides, your school is the perfect place for other young jakhowls to learn about how amazing the other kingdoms are. I doubt they'll be eager to go if the first two jakhowl students never graduated." Twilight laughed at this and nodded, then turned to activate the Rune Gate.

Seeya after summer break you 2! :pinkiehappy:

Springer nodded as Spike flew up to him. "I'm gonna miss you fuzzball," he pulled Springer into a hug, Springer chuckling as he embraced the drake back.

"Same. I'm gonna miss our crazy shenanigans." Springer laughed, the two biting their lips, trying to hold back the tears. Spike then flew down to the pups, the pair high-fiving him before he flew into the Rune Gate, glancing back for a second before going through.

Same here Spiky, same here! :moustache:

"So...this is it," Springer slowly said.

Flash sighed and shook his head, "Honestly, never thought this day would come." He held out his hoof, "So long partner." Springer looked down at his hoof and took it, the pair shaking.

"So long." The pair stared at each other, tears trying to appear in each others' eyes.

Memories began to go through their heads at this. The day they met and became partners, working together to protect Ponyville. This was followed by them making new friends together, fighting in the Battle of Canterlot, their battle against Discord, their adventure in the mountain that bought them even closer together, their mission in Omniara, getting sucked into a comic book, Springer's time loop, learning about Springer's past, their adventure to the lost city and so many more incredible adventures.

And it wasn't just the big stuff they remembered. It was the little things that they remembered the most. The times they simply hung out as best friends, whether it was reading comics, playing games or just relaxing or playing music together. The years they had spent together all slowly blurring into a group of incredible memories. There were bad memories as well, but those were few and far between the great ones they had made.

And now, it was time to say goodbye. The days of making constant new memories was over. No longer able to take it, Springer and Flash pulled one another into a tight hug. "I'm gonna miss you."

"I'm gonna miss you to," Springer muttered out, "But...it's not like we'll never see each other again." They pulled apart. "Just watch. Our best adventures are probably still ahead of us. And even if we won't see each other that much, we're still partners. And more than that, we're friends."

Flash smiled and held up a hoof, Springer smirking back before their pumped fists. With that, Flash pulled away and began to move toward the Rune Gate. He stopped right in front of it and turned back to Springer, then looked past him at Mirage, Ace and Mira. "Keep an eye on him for me. Don't let him do anything stupid."

They nodded with a smile before Flash and Springer shared one final look, Flash then stepping back into the Rune Gate.

Darn it, such an emotional rollercoaster here Banshee! :fluttercry:

Looking forward to see who's the big bad at S9's premiere, till next week Banshee! :twilightsmile:

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #41 · Jan 31st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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I loved this whole story! It was one last great adventure for Springer as part of the main cast and a great conclusion to his story arc, with the Jakhowls finally returning for good. Even still, that ending where he says goodbye to everyone tugged at my heart.

This feels sad and a bit strange. Springer has been a mainstay of the series for so long, since early Season 1, and is arguably the biggest Breakout Character of it that it feels a bit weird he is not going to be a main character anymore in the final season. But I loved every moment of him throughout this. Plus he isn't written out of the series for good. Just like how Ace and Mira will still be attending school, he will be able to visit them whenever he wants or when they need him, and I know for sure he and the rest of the Jakhowls will come help in the final battle. His parents would be so proud of him, and I am sure they are watching him from beyond.

I noticed that even though Mirage was hinted at being Springer's new love interest throughout the story, their relationship is left open-ended by the end. However, all the blatant hints, like the spirits of Mirage's parents glancing at Springer as she vows to be there for him, make it clear they will eventually make it official between them eventually. They'll probably do what Thorax and Hiveena did and become a couple off-screen. Though she probably won't have kids on the way as fast as Hiveena did.

Now we finally start the Beginning of the End, and see how accurate Flash's vision of the future was in this story and who will be a part of the final challenge against him and his friends; The Legion of Doom.

Twilight giggled at this and hugged him as well, "You're always welcome in Ponyville, Springer. Remember that." She pulled away, tears appearing in her eyes, "I know I didn't say it much, but...you're part of our family. You've always been the moment Flash found you."

"I know. Thank you Twilight."

I am so glad that Twilight said that. Ever since The Forgotten Darkness when we learned about Springer's past and that Flash found him only a few weeks after he was born, and thus essentially raised him and took care of him his whole life, I've seen Springer as more than just Flash's partner, but also as his adopted son. They might not have ever called each other dad or son, but the feelings they had for each other were still there. This ending is essentially like a grownup son moving out, like a bird leaving the nest. Sad and heartwarming at the same time.

Myzor king of war
Myzor king of war #42 · Feb 1st, 2023 · · 1 · Chapter 7 ·
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cant wait for your season 9 story mainly The Beginning of the End.
Hope Flash and Sombra have a rematch.

SuperSonicHeroes
SuperSonicHeroes #43 · Feb 1st, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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11494645
Sombra's redeemed now, remember? The only reason he and Flash would fight now is if they wanted to train or something.

Myzor king of war
Myzor king of war #44 · Feb 4th, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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11494659
I know but had thought Grogar I know who he is really and won't spoil for those who might not know might try something like making him evil again or maybe something

Myzor king of war
Myzor king of war #45 · Feb 4th, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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So will the next one feature A flighxtwilight wedding or is there a special thing planned for it

E930
E930 #46 · Feb 6th, 2023 · · · Chapter 7 ·
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Question: Are you going to publish the sequel this week or next? Just to take away my cravings, it's not to rush or anything. Take your time.

Godslittleprincess
Godslittleprincess #47 · Mar 14th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·
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Dang! I didn't even know this was out. If I had to guess, this story seems to correspond to Rainbow Road Trip, but I could be wrong. Ooh, are the twins going to be joining the jakhowls in this story? :rainbowhuh:

Godslittleprincess
Godslittleprincess #48 · Mar 14th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·
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Okay, I guess this story doesn't correspond to Rainbow Road Trip. This isn't going to be like a Superman vs. Zod situation, is it? :applejackunsure:

Godslittleprincess
Godslittleprincess #49 · Mar 14th, 2023 · · · Chapter 3 ·
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Why does this story kinda remind me of The Mandalorian in a way? Also, I smell shipping. If I can make a wild guess, I feel like Ace and Mira are going to be parent trapping Springer. :ajsmug:

Godslittleprincess
Godslittleprincess #50 · Mar 14th, 2023 · · · Chapter 4 ·
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Oh shoot! Please tell me that Flash had Lightbringer on his person the whole time. A frame-up is the last thing those guys need to be dealing with. :twilightoops:

Also, I knew things were going too smoothly for them not to suddenly go south. :ajbemused:

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