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This story is a sequel to Yugioh EQG
They thought getting to the finals was the hard part, but Flash and his friends will soon learn the the true competition will soon begin. Meanwhile, dark and mysterious forces are working to destroy everything they love. Can Flash fulfil his destiny or does our world's fate belong to the darkness?
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Did you forget a question mark at the end of the main description?
Foreign leader... I will buy that... although I have some concerns about what Chrysalis' and Thorax' relationship will be. But the second round has began.
Alright the sequel is out! This is going to be fun!
Wow, Thorax and Chrysalis already, and Throax is a prince here. I know Thorax is a sweet kid but what about his mother? Chrysalis is normally the bad guy but I've seen a few stories where she's good. Hope to see more of Thorax soon, and Chrysalis too.
Underestimate is one word actually.
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Feel free to use this to help, yes they are the gala dresses, but they are the superior dresses.
Oh boy the tournament finals have begun! I'm surprised Flash and Shining Spoon are dueling so early, I thought they would both advance a round or two before facing each other. There are so many people I don't know who will duel whom, but I can guess Rarity and Sure will duel in B block, and I hope Flash faces Timber next round, just because I want to see Flash beat him again. I don't know if you'll show ALL the duels, but I hope we at least get a glimpse of each one to see what kind of decks everyone has and see they match ups.
Change is to "was" and he's to "his"
You can keep the exclamation mark since someone appears to be shouting it, but add a question mark to both of them since they are questions.
Is it me or is the cover art that of Chronojet Dragon.
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Yes it is, except in the story it is Flash Heart Dragon, Flash's ace, except with slightly different colors and his cutie mark on the scarf. Lots of monsters in this story apparently take inspiration from Vanguard cards.
Alright! The sequel is up and the opponents are set for the finals! I loved this chapter and the last one, too. I really want to see how everything is going to play out.
You know, I honestly thought Thorax would have had a deck that focuses on Insect-types or a transformation theme.
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Me too honestly. But maybe Chrysalis will have a deck that is like that.
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That could work. And maybe Thorax will get a new deck based on the new Changeling designs from the Season 6 finale. It would be awesome for Thorax's best card to be his Equestrian counterpart.
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Okay I look forward to see how this turns out.
I can't wait for the duel between those two. 😊
This is awesome! I can't wait to see how Flash will deal with Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon? I can't wait to see more.
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"Pendulum Summoned" actually, past tense.
Change he to his and delete by.
Put "it" after "destroying."
There's something about Chrysalis. I don't trust her, she's up to something.
This is getting good! Let's see how the battle will be finished!
I can't wait to see how this Duel turns out 😃. And also, the attack, Lightning Disobey's real name is "Mauling Mandible Charge."
That was an Amazing duel
That duel was the best 😃
That was an amazing duel. Glad to see Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon and Dark Requiem XYZ Dragon provide so much of a challenge. Now Flash has another way to fusion summon. I can't wait for him to XYZ too, it'll be great. Now to see who duel next.
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That second before should be "and". The sentence will flow better.
Missing the beginning quotation marks.
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That duel was crazy awesome! Now we just wait for the next fighters. I wonder which ones are going to fight to be Flash's next opponent?
That was a great sibling duel. Maud has a good deck, and it was surprising to see her actually being serious for so long instead of her usual deadpan behavior. Vinyl made it through too huh? I wonder who she beat in her duel?
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Add "had" after "now."
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Delete the ending quotation marks.
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Put a question mark instead of a period at the end of a question.
Delete the ending quotation marks.
XD HAHAHAHAHAHA
Pinkie summoned herself!!!!
I understand not showing every battle, so let's just enjoy reading what does show up. The battle between Pinkie and Maud was pretty awesome.
You know, I have to ask something after reading the latest chapter. When are you planning on adding Starlight Glimmer into the story? I bet you could come up with a few interesting things with her character, Banshee.
8301801 I plan to had her in a later story. Maybe as a villain turned ally like in the show. I've already made a deck for her, bet you can't guess what it is.
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I don't think I can guess it immediately aside from Spellcasters as her best cards, but I'm glad you have something planned out!
That was the best sibling duel ever 😃
Oh, I figured out something for Rarity's deck in a battle for later. I noticed that you never wrote her using Gem-Knight Lady Lapis Lazuli and I think it would be a powerful card for her to use in the Pendulum Duels for the finals.
Big Mac with a machine deck, nice job. The first day will come to a close soon and I can't wait to see who is up next. I thought Timber was going to make it to the next round so he could lose to Flash, but no big deal.
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The deck was a pleasant surprise. And now Cold has figured out two things, Cloak is possibly working for Sombra while Big Mac would be a good ally. I just wonder who's next?
Coolest duel ever 😃
I was kind of hoping that Timber would stay in the game for awhile. It would have been nice for him to get some character development.
This was nice. More scenes with Thorax and a great fight with Spike. I actually looked up that changelings are originally from Celtic folklore, so the Celtic deck is actually pretty fitting.
What kind of cards did that blackout create from power being siphoned? Either way, its going to be a tough deck to beat when its revealed.
Onto Twilight's battle for the finals! It's probably going to be a challenge.
That was a fun chapter. Nice to learn more about Thorax before moving on. It's interesting that this is only the second time we've seen Spike in an on-screen duel in this universe. Now Twilight vs Comet Tail next. I know Twilight and Comet Tail use to be a popular ship in the fandom until Flash came, so this will be fun to see.
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I think you mean Definitely.
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I think you forgot to include "em" between "go" and "Twilight."
chance and live.
It would be nice to see Adagio think about her sisters down the road in this arch, either viewing them as weak or maybe wanting to get them back, but things are getting dark.
BBBFF moment and I love it.
Spike and Owliciuos
0-0 This cannot end well for Rarity and Pinkie Pie Calling it now, Adagio wins against Rainbow Dash and Rarity but goes ... overboard in making them suffer in the duel, motivated by what happened to Aria and Sonata
Nice start to the second block, seven more duels this time around. Let's see how it works out.
Edit* I was half right concerning the members of the mane6 Adagio has bone to pick with.
8324020 But Rainbow didn't Duel her sisters.
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(Reread 'The Irresistible Voices two-parter).... Oh.... My bad, but Pinkie was already eleminated
Magi-Beast Twilight Unicorn...Any other cards similar or related to this other than owl and Dracokid?
8324137 Actually no. I couldn't think up any more Equestria creatures that'd fit Twilight. Any ideas?
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None at the moment, but it might be a good idea to add the one for the rest of the main six in either her or their decks to make it look like a set and something that connects them.
Twilight did awesome. Comet needs to learn to stop being a sexist, and he learned it the hard way. He should count himself lucky that Shining and Flash didn't get their hands on him though, otherwise he'd be in a world of hurt. I wonder who will duel next?
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I think you forgot to include "three" after "cards."
Delete the "I."
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Now'd isn't a word, you want to put "Now do" there instead.
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8324140 A few thoughts...
1) Magi-Beast Fire Unicorn (Magi-Beast Unicorn polymerization with a fire monster)
2) Magi-Beast Pegauses
3) Magi-Beast Hippocampus
4) Magi-Beast Kelpie
5) Magi-Beast Earth (Pony)
6) Magi-Beast Alicorn (Magi-Beast Unicorn, Pegauses and Earth (pony) fusion)
7) Magi-Beast Griffin
8) Magi-Beast Hippogriff (Griffin and any pony fusion)
8324355 Nice ideas, but I wanted the Magi-Beast ideas for Twilight's Pendulum cards. Plus I wanted them to be connected to Twilight in some way.
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Fair enough, although Fire Unicorn, maybe Alicorn might work, maybe something like a 'living book' or shikigami (often depicted as a small paper golem version of their maker) and something star related? Hopes this helps.
XD HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Now we just need the others to summon their pony forms. I honestly love this little gag/idea.
Is the Level 4 thing an error?
I seriously love the references to the actual show in the cards.
Best chapter I've ever read 😃
Holy crap....