• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2012
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The Grey Pegasus


Pony stuff author since 2012. Writes supposedly good stuff. Still haven't made a break. Still persistent. Probably highly unlucky. Or hated by the universe. Either determined or insane. Or both.

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Twilight finds a Kindle. Stuff ensues.

With an e-reader in a certain purple unicorn's telekinetic clutches, do her bookshelves of books become redundant? What would change with Spike?

Guess time would tell.


Note: This may be one of the most seriously done random fics you will ever see.
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Fun fact: I wrote this entire thing on a Kindle Touch. Seriously.

Art by CaineScroll on deviantArt.
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Well, what he got to anyways. I had to finish it. Sort of. Still entirely done on a Kindle Touch though.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

From what I've observed, The Grey Pegasus reserves the first comment for author's notes. So I'll follow the format and reserve this for him, in case he wants to make some author's notes when he comes.
~TS
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What the... Well I guess now I know where my Kindle went...

Anyways, this idea traces all the way back to July. Even funnier is that I found the cover picture in August. Started the story itself in August. And WOW is it hard to type on a Kindle Touch. It tool me a good 4 hours to write 2k. And typos are because... it's that hard to type.

Though I really, really wanna read this now, I must resist. I have school tomorrow and I'm beginning a three hour a day workout regime to get ripped. For the sake of getting ripped. Nevertheless, I'm going to read this tomorrow after school. Best 'o luck to ya' bud. This looks really entertaining. :twilightsmile:

All well and good, until it hit the more... Meta aspect.

Other than that, I'd say that this would hit the featured box (or at least that side bar) later today.

Dohoho... This is certainly a good read :rainbowlaugh:

736 Unread? And I thought my 435 was a lot :twilightoops:

It is pretty rare that I read anything that isn't recommended to me in one way or another, but I really enjoyed this. Also I caught two typos, hope you don't mind :raritywink:.

Geez, that's amazing, Twilivht!

all the way at fhe bottom of the lost

Final thoughts. Very nice :twilightsmile:, your style is a little clunky, but overall enjoyable. Keep up the good work, you get a thumb.

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You can't possibly have 435 unread favs... :pinkiegasp: O DEAR GOD YOU HAVE 68 PAGES OF FAVORITES!!!!! WHEN DO YOU SLEEP!!!!!

P.S. Gunnerkrigg Court is pretty sweet.

This smells 'Feature' so bad that I can taste it!

Well... that was pretty meta right there. BTW, you should really get to reading :P

"It worked! It actually worked! Now… the major points of contact in this area seem to be on the 1, 2, 6, and 0, as well as that thing to the left of the 0 with an 'x' in it that seems to be pointing right, and to the right of the 0, it says 'OK'. Okay then! The narrows it down!"

She returned her eyes to the device. "Hmm… Something about an appplication unexpectedly closing…

"doesn't mean the books are going. Sure, I may not use them as often, but the ones I can get off of fhe library on

Still, pretty damn funny. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, even if there were a few mistakes. Meta story is meta, I believe the term goes.

-DivideByZero

I'm reading this on a Nook. :rainbowlaugh:

The hell is a meta? And am I the only one who sensed a few hints of Spilight in this story? Huh.....Trixie is best villian pony....or creature since the Mane Six have animals that are not ponies as their enemies as well. ANYWAY.....impressive, a few errors here and there but not such a big deal, I shall favorite and like, well done my friend, well done.:pinkiehappy:

Im afraid! Im typijg this on my fire right now and just the thought of several thousand words typed like this gives me chills. Havent even read yet and am stuck between being scared of what it will look like and impressed at your patience.

Twilight put the device down for a moment to give some gratitude to some divine force. "Oh great universe, thank you for bestowing upon me this incredible innovative item. I can already tell that it is made for ones like me. And I apologize for sounding as dramatic as Rarity." Wifh the show of thanks finished, Twilight returned to the alien object.

You misspelled With

"Geez, that's amazing, Twilivht!" Then a realization struck the unicorn's assistant. "Wait, so if that thing's basically a library on it's own, then what'll you do with all the books? What'll you do with me?!"

You spelled Twilight wrong......

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You wrote this on your Kindle?! Are you loco in the coco? But this actually was a very good read, I normally don't read randoms but I will have to try them more often :twilightsmile:

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Meta stories can be self-conscious stories, stories about other stories or something similar.

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With the context of this story, these six words comprise the greatest comment ever to grace my stories! That's just hilarious!

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Yeah... I am never doing this again. It's so hard. Especially when it's in another dimension...

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Typos! Got it. You can probably guess that it's because the keyboard I typed on was so damn inconvenient.

This is me right now.....
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Because I have no idea what the actual fuck I just read.


.... AND I LIKE IT THAT WAY! :pinkiecrazy:

1503980 Ahhh, ok now I get it...thank you.:twilightsmile:

1504618 No problem. This story would be another good example for meta-fanfiction.

1504812
That example is pretty ironic in this case, since the box isn't working right.

1504812 Right, I read it before but I had no love for it, it seemed very...off putting.

1504833 I didn't like it much either. Good stories don't exaggerate the meta aspect, and more importantly, have a real storyline, which that story definitely lacked. All in all, it needs skill to write a good meta story, and that's probably why so many failed and meta fanfictions in general became disliked.

1505128 I can agree with you there, you know of any that may have passed such test?

1505182 You're looking for a good meta story? Try this one. It parodies short comedy stories like "Luna takes a shower", "Luna finds an Oreo" etc., that became hugely popular some time ago to the point where it got annoying. Unlike most, it keeps the meta elements at a reasonable level and doesn't get obtrusive.

1504255 Not only hilarious, but true as well.

First off, sorry for being so late to the party on this one. please don't hate me :fluttershbad: Nevertheless, I really like this bud. Really funny and once again filled with little easter eggs surrounding your stories. Very cool. :twilightsmile:

I'm reading this on a Kindle, Yay!

1502925 I have 14000 unread chapters in favs.

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... Dude, that comment was made 3 years ago...

6490704 I am a thread necromancer... (goes to hide in a cave/dungeon)

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My point is still valid.

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