• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2012
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The Grey Pegasus


Pony stuff author since 2012. Writes supposedly good stuff. Still haven't made a break. Still persistent. Probably highly unlucky. Or hated by the universe. Either determined or insane. Or both.

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The two great alicorn princesses have a small competition,
At the expense of a zebra and a fable's rendition.

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The idea is a by-product of walking under the sun for an hour. I thought the idea was funny enough to make a story out of it, and after some quick thinking and reworking, a little bit of writing, and boredom, became this. I don't really expect anything of the story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

WRITE MORE DAMMIT MORE

908954
Well what do you want me to do?! What does that even mean? It says "Complete".

908960 WELLLLLLL u could say incomplete and change the title to two princesses or something, and then just write a bunch of stories like this where the princesses try to figure out whos better than who and such :pinkiehappy:

908971
Actually, the point of this story was to mess around with/parody Aesop's Fable.

We'll compromise. I'll consider more one-shot sequels.

908993 HUZAH! I WISH WE HAD A LUNA EMOTICON FOR YOUR PRINCESS ENJOYS THIS

Love it. :) I remember that old tale as well. Very funny to see the twist you gave it.

909153
Yeah... Well retelling the same thing would be boring. It's pretty nice that the two alicorns fit the role really well... But what?! There's a third alicorn... Oh yeah. Thus became this.

I knew it.

Cadance is best princess.

909446
Oh hey, you're the one that wrote that random one-shot CANON.

912230 R...recognition?

I... I think I love you.

912937
Yup. I'm one out of the measly 27 people that up-voted that story.

So good, although if I were them I would have just set it on fire (or maybe made it seem like it was on fire)

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