Pony stuff author since 2012. Writes supposedly good stuff. Still haven't made a break. Still persistent. Probably highly unlucky. Or hated by the universe. Either determined or insane. Or both.
It's just another day in Eureka, and that means yet another piece of technology to be tested. This particular prototype is being tested to see if it can create any living creature. Guess who the newly arrived in Eureka is.
Despite the slight oddity of a talking pony, it's not much out of the ordinary. Hopefully, it stays that way.
Eureka x MLP crossover
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End chapter. Cue opening sequence.
Because I felt that this crossover was just waiting to be done. Shoutout to Lexicon and his story My Little Warehouse 13 for sparking the idea in my head.
Hope you enjoyed what little I've typed up so far. Chapter 1 is in progress and should be out fairly soon.
This will either be really good... Or really bad...
*Goes to read it*
*returns 5 seconds later* Do they really talk like that in the show? O.o *goes back to the fic*
*returns after finishing it*
It did not feel like an eureka episode, Eureka episodes have a very specific structure. They include the Intro, Introduction to the experiment, the middle, the problem with the experiment, the confrontation with the experiment, and then the conclusion of the episode.
The story does not seem to actually use the Eureka setting at all. Yes, the characters are all there and they talked to each other, but it did not feel like Eureka. I feel like if you really want this to move forward as a good crossover you will have to do some major reworking of your plot, experiment device, and character interaction.
You have MY interest.
Do go on...
Great so far! I thought my writing was pretty good, but you put more feeling into one of my favorite shows than what I thought I could!
MOAR
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I'm not entirely understanding this. Right now in my mind, this part is only the beginning. Essentially, after that end part would start the opening title card.
Come on. This obviously does not consist a Eureka episode. Would it have been better if I added a link to the opening credits at the end? Because unfortunately, the only ones I've found are the 30 sec season 1-3 openings, and the 40's style 10 sec. No standard season 4-5 10 sec opening.
So she's bound by the lay of physics and biology, so no magic. This will lead to one nasty identity crisis.
Unless magic is part of her biology... but then how would you fit her magic into physics. Tricky...
985013
Shhh.... That's for next chapter.
Besides, I did say the AOP was designed to calculate what is supposed to be in the entity for it to work, soo...
Glad you noticed that though!
985010
You say this is only the start... But for this to work as a fiction you need to have aprox 10,000 words in the series before you actually just to get the setting of Eureka down.
Not everyone who reads this will have watched to show.
Basically, Who the fuck is Kevin? Why is he even allowed in the high tech area? How did they even make the bio printer work?
All of that needs to be set in place before you even think about introducing ponies.
If you do not want to do all that sci-fi writing what you do is write the story from twilights perspective and do not spend a lot of time explaining the tech.
In its current form your story is really bad and probably will not be able to succeed.
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I'll admit I did bypass most of the details due to the fact that there is a general assumption that the reader is familiar to the show, but I'm also not entirely going to leave others in the dark. As of now, I believe I've set down most of the important details, which is basically a general outline of what Eureka is (and a small, concise description of GD) for it to be generally understood.
I go by a certain principle- plot holes and details can always be expanded on later. Besides, Twilight's got some learning to do, and the reader's coming on for the ride.
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You failed to even identify Jack as the sheriff, that is not leaving the reader to know the material. That is simply lazy writing.
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I said will be expanded on later. But I do admit that I forgot to mention Jack as the sheriff, while still describing that he solved the town's problems. I'll revise that actually.
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I sparked this? Wow. I'll read it later when I've got a better chance. I actually need to see if I can find anything after season 3, since that's where Netflix stopped it.
985135
Have you seen anything past Season 3?
Yeah, having universes that crossover tend to do that.
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I know Netflix has 3 and 3.5, and 3.5 is disc only. After what season 3 on instant watch is, I've seen none of it.
I think I'm in love with this fic. My fav cartoon + fav show + (in fic form) = EPIC FANFICTION!
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Yeah, it's pretty sad the show's done after 5 seasons.
I hope you bear with me as I blunder through making a story with concepts on a higher intellectual level than I'm on.
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I know. The show totally needs more seasons to it. And the story is perfect so far, other than not, mentioning that jack is the sheriff i see no problems with it. Keep up the great work.
Moar! I'll be waiting. FOREVER!
Hmmmmm. An egg-head in a town full of geniuses. I agree with Jack, "What could possibly go wrong?"
Alright! Chapter 1 is here, and it's actually fairly short, due to it being only one scene. I never thought I'd be able to write chapters this short. Hopefully, following chapters are slightly longer. Still, there's still enough information in this chapter that's important for me to decide that it's good enough for now.
Hope you enjoyed this one scene chapter, and following chapters should have slightly more content! I still have a clear idea on where to go, so Chapter 2 should be out by the end of the week at the very latest.
Also, in case you missed it somehow, here was my latest blog post. There were some important things regarding the story in there. And yeah, I didn't follow through with the minimum 1.5k, but oh well.
Eureka and Ponies
PERFECT....
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I know, right?!
I give you sir my first
ever.
I'm just so sad that Eureka is know ended.
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After only 5 seasons, it truly is a disheartening fact.
And I'm honored to receive your first
ever. By the way, I'm not sure if you missed that star up there. Give it a click if you like the story.
Wait there are stars?!
This just shows how much of a noob I am at this site.
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Noob at the site? Okay, well the stars are for favoriting stories that you liked and also tracks them so you know when they've updated... because this one is obviously not finished. So you may want to go back and find all the stories you liked and tap that star, because chances are, unless they were one shots, they're not finished either. And, uh, check the FAQ for more stuff. Good luck!
OK just take your sweet time to thought it out, no need to rush
Don;t worry...we've all been to writers block country...its a boring place...try watching some MLP or eureka to blow on your 'inspiration' flame...
Sometimes characters don't act as you want them to. That is normal.
The chapter then goes... Not the way it was planned.
It was interesting to read so far.
This is interesting I guess. Seems like they took a very complicated route to create twilight. Personally I'm hoping to survive long enough to digitize my mind and live within a computer. It isn't my main dream, but I wouldn't mind creating a matrix like equestria to visit, populated by artificial intelligences programmed to believe they are the characters of the show. No need to worry about making sure a invented body can keep itself alive let alone use magic this way.
That show was filmed in my city! Woo!
Chilliwack!
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That's awesome.
At least it wasn't Pinkie Eureka would turn into the Party City of the world by the time she's finished.
Please do continue working on it. It's a really interesting concept and I'd like to see more.
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The problem is that even if I try, it doesn't seem like it wants to write. I just can't put together pieces.
1829239 Problem with the biological printer causes not only the Mane Six and the Princesses to appear, but also most of Equestria's Villians.
In between, involve the explination of Pinkie with Cartoon Physics. (Being scientist, they should accept this theory better), and introducing them to cartoons!!
I give you this idea. No need to thank me.
-The Character
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I actually had the storyline planned out. Then I hit massive writer's block and couldn't figure out how to write it.
Two words to jackhammer through that writer's block: Power Surge or Glitching Machine
Take your pick, they're yours.
......
Well.... You need to re-watch Eureka and MLP or something, because you've got a serious case of Ex Moribus (OOC).
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If I ever want to start writing this again, I will definitely need to rewatch Eureka because as of now, my memory of details are soooo hazy.
It's part of the reason I stopped writing it anyway. I think. Hell if I know. It's been forever.
too bad, this is the only crossover EUREKA MLP
Please update soon.
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Unfortunately, not likely. Sorry.
5874667 WHAT!? BUT THIS IS AMAZING!
Shame if dead