By trying an instant language aid learned from a book, Twilight can now read, write, and speak German! However, she didn't realize it made her forget the language she already knows! Can she find a way to speak normal English again, considering she's seemingly the only German-knowing pony in Ponyville?
Well, mostly you can call it German what you have wirite here. Only a few spelling errors^^
Well, I couldn't resist giving this story a look see, since I speak a little rusty German. I'm in love with a concept like this, and I think you pulled it off quite well Story was well written, with nary an error in sight. It was a little short, and I felt like it would have been more humorous if Twilight had had to go about her day not being able to speak English, especially in situations that are awkward enough without the inclusion of not being able to speak the proper language (Doctor's appointments, etc. etc.). Nevertheless, this story was pretty good.
This was funny, but I would have liked it more if it was longer. Like if she had to go from one language to another or something, or had to translate through multiple languages and ended up with a garbled mess. Still, an interesting concept. Huzzah!
First: "She announced in complete, fluent Germanic speech." -> English is a germanic language too, and German and Germanic are not the same.
Second: I can correct the German parts, if you want me to. (I'm a native German, so i have extended interest in this story =D)
Edit: I should stop editing this comment over and over...
A story about a pony speaking german:
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Mir gefällt das. Weitermachen
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=D Tja passiert halt.
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If you hand over English originals for the sentences, you may get better translations, but Antsan is right with his corrections. ^^
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A few?
I cringed reading it as I am native german but it is better then most of the other fics that tend to *write*
googletranslatein german.But hey this idea is extremely original and awesome none the less(just be sure to get someone german to check it over for you and the errors will be gone in no time).
>> Herry the afro Headcrab
ok, a there a many Errors. I only wanted to be nice.^^
I mean, sure, it hurt a bit to read German like this, but hey, the Idea is good i think.
This was funnier than I had thought. And OF COURSE the most random pony in town speaks german.
The only thing I can say is that it would've been interesting if you ponified the names of the languages. But it still works this way anyways.
I also foumd this funny as I'm taking German as a second language. Haven't gotten far enough to be any help though. Have a thumbs up.
Okay, this was hilarious! Thank Celestia I can speak German! Made it even better!
1229948 The hay?
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Meh, I'm in my third year of German. I basically have normal vocab down, but grammar needs work, as I'm sure all you smarter, better-at-German people noticed.
I finished German 02 then went to French
Ich mag.
To Germaney AWWWAAAAYYY!!!!!!!!!
Ich spreche Deutsch auch, und ich komme aus Amerika.
The German in this fic is nothing but shit, the spell Twilight used seems to be broken
Well shit. What idiot thought that that was a brilliant idea? It wouldn't be a problem for me since I know both languages though...
I do not know the language of German. The only words I know are "guten tag" and the lyrics to Schweine. This story still amused me nonetheless. Not bad. /10
I could have added "heil Hitler" to that list, but that joke's just in bad taste.
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Das ist in SCHRECKLICH schmecken.
Nicht sogar Witze darüber.
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Kommst du auch Deutschland?
4177966 Well fuck.
Heh. It's funny that when I first read this story about half a year ago, I had to use Google Translate to understand the German parts.
But now that I'm studying German, I'm quite happy that I understood everything here without a Translator and even managed to notice grammatical errors :D.
Now I know how y'all must feel when you read my english stories
Germans might understand what you want if you talk to them like this, but to claim that this is perfect german would be an overstatement. For a native german like me it is quite funny to read, though.
Names from the show translated to german:
Twilight Sparkle = Dämmerlicht Funken
Fluttershy = Flatterschüchtern
Rarity = Seltenheit
Pinkie Pie = Kleiner Finger Kuchen
Applejack = Apfeljack
Rainbow Dash = Regenbogen Strich/Schuss
Celestia = himmlisch (celestial)
Luna (This is spanish) = Mond
Nightmare Moon = Albtraum Mond or/and Nachtstute Mond
Shining Armor = Glänzende Rüstung
Cadance = No translation available
Chrysalis = Schmetterlingspuppe
Lyra Heartstrings = Lyra Herzsaiten
Changeling = Wandelpony
Mr. and Mrs. Cake = Herr und Frau Kuchen
Discord = Disharmonie (Nailed it)
Blueblood = Blaublut
Spike = Spitze (Dorn)
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let's take her full name
Princess Mi Amore Cadenza
her name is Italian -
Mi Amore Cadenza
english = I love english = Cadence, Rhythm
german = ich liebe german = Kadenz, Rhythmus, Melodie
so you can translate
--> Cadance/Cadence = Kadenz oder Rhythmus
and a little correction
Changeling =
WandelponyWechselpony (Wechselbalg)Rainbow Dash = Regenbogen Strich/Schuss + rasen/zerschmettern/rennen/sausen/düsen/laufen
http://www.dict.cc/?s=dash so many translations for Dash
Oh man...
Die Geschichte ist ja ganz lustig, aber spätestens bei der wörtlichen Übersetzung der Redewendung "Here goes nothing" war für mich schluss. Man kann Redewendungen einfach nicht übersetzen (oder nur in sehr seltenen Fällen).
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I'm German and I agree to this... Deutsch ist schwer.
Wenn man mich versteht, bitte übe weiter. Einige Wörter Klangen nicht schön und es war, für mich, ein bisschen verwirrend
I'm so glad to've found this ; ~ ; I'm trying to learn German and this really helps! I don't suppose you have more or know of people who sprinkle in German to their fics?
i can speak german so nice
ich kann deutsch sprechen so nice
I mit, this story so much me pleases, ad!
Spike, you have everything- Is that really right? Am I speaking German?
Spike! That was a success! I learned another language! It is wonderful!
I want to speak English