• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2012
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The Grey Pegasus


Pony stuff author since 2012. Writes supposedly good stuff. Still haven't made a break. Still persistent. Probably highly unlucky. Or hated by the universe. Either determined or insane. Or both.

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When Twilight's home is destroyed, she must find somewhere else to stay until her new residence is put in order.

She didn't know just how hard something that simple could be.
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Alternate Description:
When our hero's house is destroyed, they must find a way to cope with the loss, leading them to try and stay with their zany pink friend and slightly uptight companion in an effort to stay as close to home.

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Comments ( 8 )

I got it at the mention of spiders. That was a good episode when the show was good. A fun story to read. Kudos.

He's twenty ponies tall and the color of the fire department, Twi. Did you really need to look a him through a telescope?

Okay that was just bad.


Just a plain 100% bad.

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... Are you on the right story? Because I'm not sure that you're making sense right now.

Funny :) :rainbowlaugh:
And heartwarming as well :heart:

Sry I'm not sure which refences you were referring to. Great story though. I am gonna miss that tree. RIP Golden Oaks Library -October 10, 2010 - May 10, 2014

Much of the word choice in this fic annoys the shit outta me, and it's not the mechanics of your admittedly inane plot. It's all about Twilight's loss, what Twilight will do, how Twilight feels, how much it sucks that Twilight is leaving for Canterlot. Pinkie doesn't bother to think about Spike's sleeping arrangements until he asks; he's taken to the Boutique and disappears from the narrative right at Rarity's front door; none of the ponies appear to give a shit about how he's handling everything, etc. What makes Twilight's closest friend so forgettable that he barely fucking exists half the time in a story where he's lost his home...or was it just Twilight's home?...you've got me confused. The answer: he's a worthless piece of crap who doesn't matter. 90% of the fanbase can't be wrong, can it? If you can't free up your tunnel vision, just write an AU fic in which he really doesn't exist.

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