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Dark Colt Sabata


Common ideas executed weirdly, if inspiration and motivation strikes.

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They thought she was wrong, they thought she was being over protective of her brother.

They were wrong.

The wedding was saved but Twilight Sparkle went missing ever since her friends, bother and mentor abandoned her in that room. 3 years has passed but still no sign of Twilight. Suddently some kind of super advanced robots attack ponyville claming that they work for an evil organization called "Treble" who's only objecttive is to destroy Equestria.

With the new element of magic, Trixie Lulamoon, our heroes will defend their home no matter what. But Princess Cadence is convinced that Treble is connected to Twilight's dissapearence and she will look for answers to her werabouts.

( Contains elements form the Megaman Battle Network series )

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 116 )

No robots yet... :unsuresweetie:

Can't wait to see more~ :D

I've been waiting for a wedding story where twilight leaves. :yay: Can't wait to see where this story goes. :twilightsheepish:

Nice AU.
the grammar degrades as you get close to the end though...

Going to call it right here, Treble is Twilight. :trollestia:

Glad that you posted this, and I hope to see the next chapter soon.
PS: Try posting the updated version, in Google Docs.

I have a thing for villains born out of pain :coolphoto:

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I see that too.

Then again, it's mostly the rest of the group's fault....

Excellent a story where Twilight leaves because of what happen at the wedding. Not only that if Twilight is behind Treble than it's also a evil Twilight story don't see very many of those. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Nice to see that I finally did a good fic :pinkiehappy:, I'll work on the 2nd chapter when school isn't bombing me with a shit ton of homework. :twilightangry2:

1217100 The 1st one will appear in chapter 2 along with the revelation of the organization.

Sounds Reasonable. Followed.

Hmmm... somehow I think Twilight is going to be the evil one in this fic

I've been reading this repeatedly and it never ceases to be cool :ajsmug:
But frankly, if you're only gonna use the Megaman.Exe elements, I can't imagine them holding out too well... unless you use advanced bad guys like the Dream Virus.

1264600 I wanna keep some things as surprise, so you'll have to wait for a long bit like everyone else.

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Me too. Some of the greatest villains of all time were born out of pain, sadness, fear, or hate. Take Darth Vader for example.

this looks like an interasting story so far, i'm curious to see how three years with Twilight missing will affect the remaining mane 5 as well as Celestia and Shining Armor.

1583353 You'll see my friend, you'll see :pinkiecrazy:

Interesting.. Stories with 'Lost all faith in Good and Idealism' ('Despair Event Horizon' for short) characters are always intriguing.

Sweet Jesus, you're back, dood?

Cool

1932397 Blame the writer's block for taking so much and with school starting again, it's possible that I get less time to
write :twilightangry2:

Alright, second chapter. Looks pretty good.

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Believe me dude. I know the feeling.

Still good second chapter.

Nice Chapter. I really hope that the hologram of Twilight in a cell was just a diversion and that Twilight is, in truth, the leader of Treble. That would be interesting to have Twilight believe that things like friendship and harmony are a lie and she turns evil and her former friends and family now have to face her and try to bring her back to the good side.

Welcome Back. I was hoping this story would start up again.

1932481 And I will definietly finish it, I'll see if I can get some short stories out too if my brain can think of any.

Just take your time. No need to rush and ruin a good story.

Alright, a second chapter. nice work it was really interasting to see how everyone changed in those three years

1932608 To be honest, I had a lot of fun making Fluttershy badass :rainbowlaugh:

Great second chapter to an awesome story.

By the way, guess what song I used to write the Airman fight :trollestia:

AWESOME second chapter. Really glad to see your updating again. So Treble members will be characters from the megaman series. What were the names of the monsters that attacked Ponyville with Airman? I'm with Darth Void on hoping Twilight's gone evil.

I hope you're not offended when I say that I literally went "What the fuck?" when I saw that this had updated.

1933065 let me guess, you can't beat airman ( or I can't beat, however it goes))

1933378 The yellow small ones are mettools and the blue dogs are named spikey.

1933984 Pretty much :twilightsheepish:

1933885 It doesn't offend me, I even take that as a compliment. :twilightsmile:

after I watched Part 1 of the season 2 finale, I'm starting to doubt that the "magic of friendship" even exists

They saw what happened and they had to be petty and walk away all in the name of keeping up impressions! they walked away so they could impress a pony they had met only a day ago, a pony that had treated all of them like crap! all of that time of laughter and tears and friendship thrown away so they could wear a frilly dress! Nice to know how much Twilight was worth to them

Real friends stay loyal, even when their friends act stupid. A real friend would have sat with Twilight and told her that it was ok and helped her make up for her mistake. A real friend would have realized that taking one moment to comfort somebody they care about wouldn’t hurt their chances to put on a dream wedding. A real friend would have given her a few minutes and all they did was walk out on her.

also sometimes I wonder if the Elements screwed up, like Rainbow Dash, she's never really been loyal, has she? She insults her friends; mocks them and tease them till they hurt. Remember what she did to Spike?, making fun of him about not being a real dragon till he decided to run away? How LOYAL of her! She knew Fluttershy didn’t want to help with that cyclone and she guilted her into it… not because she knew she needed to face her fear but because she wanted to break a record. she's mocked Twilight so many times, calling her a nerd and an egghead and then come crawling back asking for her help with her problems, expecting Twilight to drop everything and save her flank. Like Twilight said in Faith and Doubt:
"You are very loyal, Rainbow Dash… loyal to yourself"

I declare Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity and Applejack to be a disgrace to their elements

(and yes this is taken from Faith and Doubt)

I'm having a bad day, so I'm gonna wait until I calm myself down before I give this chapter a review. I'd probably tear it to shreds in my bad mood.

1936926 I could not agree more with you, good sir. When I saw the Season 2 finale (part 1 and 2) I thought "WHAT THE FUCK, TWILIGHT?! YOUR FRIENDS TURN THEIR BACK ON YOU, YOUR FAMILY TURNS THEIR BACK ON YOU, EVEN YOUR MENTOR TURNS HER BACK ON YOU, AND AFTER A FEW MINUTES OF FIGHTING, YOU FORGIVE THEM?!" Its one of the reasons i like reading this story. Wondering what would have happened if Twilight just up and left. The pain in this story over what her friends went through makes me wish i was in the story so that when Twilight fucks with them I would ask "HOW DOES FEEL HAVING YOUR FRIEND TURN THEIR BACK ON YOU NOW, HUH?!" But that is something different. My point is i agree with you one hundred and ten percent.

Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa.
Whoa.
Airman? Interesting.....

2289009 This is just the beginning mind you, there's more surprises in future episodes. Too bad that I have this fricken writer's block.

i got an OC robot master if you need one

A Megaman crossover. :ajbemused:

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Eh, why not. *Tracking* :pinkiehappy:

hey... are you going to put any good robots in the story?:rainbowhuh:

2890524 Like Bass, Protoman or Colonel? Sorry, those are too OP for the ponies.

2890543 no nobody like that i mean that the ponies make some with the parts they found

2895239 Oh that....hellz no :rainbowlaugh: The robot masters are Grave exclusive.

2895245 well atlest give them a helmet or a laser gun thingy no megaman story is complete without a helmet or laser gun thingy

2895252 Maybe I'll give Trixie a spell similar to that, how's that? :pinkiehappy:

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