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Morningstar1337


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Trust is a very fragile thing. Three small fillies learned that the hard way. Their friends, their families, the town which they live, all shun and avoid like a plague. This is where their priorities shift from getting something they never had to regaining something that once lost will be nigh impossible to reclaim again. This is their path, the Path of Absolution.

Thanks to Sereg for proofreading. and to Swirling Line for the cover art.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

Well, I noticed some minor errors, but other than that it seems like you're doing fine.

2585119 Well I took some pointers from Ezn's guide. But I need some help with the story/plot in general.

My reaction to Diamond Tiara's article.

this is a good one iv allways wandered what wood happen if diamond dint send ther apology

2897680 I have a different story that would answer your question (if you like darkfic).

2897731 sounds good ill prob read it later

2897778 It's called The Path of Absolution - Punishment

I want to see what happens next.

Interesting thought experiment, even if the writing itself is a little rushed, and it was a bit of a relief not to have the rift between the CMC and the Mane 6, at least, drag on too long. I suppose somepony (Trixie?) is suing Cheerilee for her students' actions? Dang.

The episode was stupid, and the ending was equally stupid. The Crusaders were only talking about harmless things until Diamond Tiara forced them to do otherwise. But did that get explained? What should have happened is Diamond Tiara being found out, everybody apologising to the Crusaders and Tiara being banished from Ponyville and made to live under a rock in the Everfree Forrest.

Oh my goodness! Someone actually asking questions, trying to find out what happened? Not just blindly accepting everything at face value? What is thuis madness?

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