Twilight Sparkle shares her feelings about the night in this first person story.
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I enjoyed this story a lot. The only thing i had an issue with was 'its'. A lot of the time you used its when you should have used it's. i think there were a couple other silly mistakes like that, but overall this was a very nice story. Very calming, too. Makes me want to go sit on my porch and stare out at the sky. Maybe I'll do that tonight.
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Thanks, and I will do my best to catch those in my future writings
This is a pretty nice story. Can't really say there was anything that bugged me about it. I have to praise how you described the night sky.
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Well thanks
Personally I thought I was starting to get repetitive, but glad someone else thinks I did a good job.
1206090 That's all we can ask!
Hey, cool! You found the same picture I used for one of my fics!
haha, delete this comment. It isn't overly important, my fic wasn't even all that popular.
I FEEL OKAY ABOUT THIS
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Every comment is important to me unless its a mean comment