Erm... I'll put something later. It's a wee bit too early for definitive self-describing thoughts right now.
Everypony has secrets and regrets. Some, you can see etched on their faces, others, it's impossible to imagine. So when Rainbow Dash starts acting funny, Twilight and the others are forced to ask, "What could the most spirited pegasus in all of Equestria be hiding?"
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seems cool I will read
OK time to tell the story is a bit dull and slow paced sorry but that is what I think
1062732. Naw. Don't be sorry. The story does start out a little slow but it'll pik up by the end of
The next chapter.
1062793 I will look forward to it you earned a watch :).
Somebody died I bet
I feel for Dash. Too often, horrible thoughts land inside our heads, and it takes forever to get rid of them.
This should prove highly watchable.
MOAR
um... That is if you want
I bet that:
Cloud Chaser is gonna come to ponyville.
RD finds him.
She dont know what to do.
Eventually Chaser finds RD.
Same as RD he has no fucking idea of what to do.
They finally start to talk with eachother.
This flashback is brought to you by: THAT STUDIO THAT NOPONY CARES ABOUT!
RD eventually says that she is NOT a lesbian (thank celestia)
Chaser understand's.
They eventually become a couple and start to date eachother.
SEX! (maybe)
Lovey dovey stuff.
Sad stuff happens.
More lovey dovey stuff.
More sad stuff.
Even more lovey dovey stuff.
OH LOOK! more lovey dovey stuff.
Chaser dies (AKA tragic stuff)
THE END! (NOT!)
But I can be completely wrong... oh well.
Good story!
can't wait for next chapter
I enjoyed.
Well done!
1069407
That... actually would be a legit fanfic.
Another very well written chapter
Nice work!
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This was very interesting. I could relate.
Great job!
Ive made an account just to comment on this;its so AWESOME!
Are you going to write a sequel or chapter 3 ?
I really want to know what's going to happen.
Keep up the good work!
-DarwinAnim8or (gie005)
1096836 Haha, of course I am. I don't know about a sequel yet, but I'm definitely going to continue this story.
1098356
Im really happy to hear that.
I cant wait for the next chapter,i know its going to be awesome.
-Gie005
Also :
Sweet fucking jesus
Nuff said
In awaiting of chapter 3...
Why aren't you updating?
Woooo! new chapter!
2955626 Yeah, again, sorry for the stupid lack in updates
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It's okay, will we get more frequent updates now though ?
2958963 Oh yes. Like I said, shenanigans occured, but they's gone now ^^
Rainbow is dooooooooomed!
Makoooooveeeeer!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
The time has come to reveal the truth... Hidden deep in Rainbow Dashes heart for years...
BRACE YOURSELVES
awesome story so far
NO! WRITE MORE!!!! I JUST GOT HOOKED! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
am I wrong to think that it's too late to be dragging the conclusion to this soap opera out so much?r I don't know how to explain it that well, but it seems to me that there is no point to drawing this out anymore. i can say that i'd feel better about it if that "one week later" time skip wasn't used and we actually saw Dash's emotional state deteriorate and the concern of the other five building up more (i don't know why. maybe i just feel that there wasn't enough build up to justify drawing the close out for one more chapter than really necessary). a thought that comes up as I'm typing this: I think the cuts were made in the wrong places for the climax. if the conclusion was made into two chapters where the break is when Rainbow runs out on Cloud, it'd make me think "oh, this is getting good now. I can't wait until the next installment"; but as it is, it leaves me thinking "oh, come on! could we just hurry up and end this already?". but this is all just the words of someone who has never written a decent story in his life.
PLEASE WRITE MORE. IM ALREAY CRYING MY EYES OUT
