Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
Rainbow Dash, has been injured and now doesn't remember who her friends are, or anything really about herself. Now, it's up for her friends to pick up those broken pieces and help her get her memory back. A tale of friendship and loyalty, after all friendship is magic.
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Very interesting, but I can see where the beginning could throw somepony off, as I found it a bit hard to understand that I was bouncing back and forth between Dash as a filly and current time. Other than that, I want to read more.
i like the story... is her dreams what giver her apart of her memory back??
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Heh, sorry about that.
This kinda reminds me of my story
(only mines written worse)
Nice, hope you continue this
I liked this. I'd be willing to suggest it to my followers if you'd like. I have a little over 200
I. Like it a lot
Hmm... I'll read this tomorrow.
Not enough time today...
Fuck you school.
Interesting so far, but I don't see a whole lot of development going on. And, it's a little odd that RD remembers half of her friends, and not the other half, but yet doesn't remember them being her friends........
I'm sure everything'll clear up later on!
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Well so far it's looking like she's lost her memories starting at around when Twilight moved into Ponyville. So this means that she still has her memories from before that and could have known about AJ, Pinkie, and Fluttershy before they became friends.
Also, I'm liking the story so far and can't wait to see where it goes! Here, have a fave and a mustache
1961358 Hmmm...... That makes sense... I guess... I'll just wait and see what happens.
Interesting idea. I like it so far. There are a few grammatical errors that can be bothersome, though. Such as you write 'alright' as 'all right.' Nothing too bad, though.
I especially like how her dreams are in this way. They are proof she knows her life and everything even after the memory loss. It's just a bit deeper in her mind, and she just needs a little push. Hopefully, her friends can help her with that. I wonder how everyone will work with this, especially Pinkie. She's so sad, I can't imagine her dealing with this; kind of losing a friend. Hopefully, it doesn't last long... right?
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"All right" is actually correct, though the misspelling "alright" is almost more common.
Also, just a thought: can't Twilight restore Dash's memories just like she did during the Discord fiasco? Unless in that case they were just tainted and here they're wiped out completely...
1969248 Oh. I didn't know that. Heh. Thanks.
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I always thought that Twilight could do that because the memories were tainted by Discord.
Pretty good story so far, just keep on being bamtan, dude.
I love it
When she gets her memory back. Shes gonna scream for those tickets
im surprised dash didnt go LOKo for the tickets
how is he using her as a puppet? theres something i didn't catch
Why would Rainbow be acting like Spike?
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Oh whoops, I'll fix that.
Sorry about that.
I seriously read picnic
How many tickets
Well, I see you have picked this up again after 2 & 1/2 years, so I will take a chance. I'm old, so I'm hoping it won't be that long for the next chapter
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Haha, I won't tale THAT long.
And apparently the Element of Bluntness.
Not trying to be rude, but you need an editor. Interesting concept though.
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It isn't rude, I appreciate your comment and criticism.
6510309 Yea what the hell took so long? 2 and a half years? Seriously?
...This was a very surprising update
Btw, amazing chapter, you've improved in the two year period
Next one?
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Sorry for late reply
Out right now
Damn, two and a half years. I'm afraid to read this.
1959928 yeah i completely agree to you just f@ck school
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Awww
IS THERE NOTHING MORE TO THIS?!?!?! I need more!!!!