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This story is a sequel to Scootaloo's Dreams
Follow Scootaloo as she advances her studies with new and old friends during her days in FillyDelphia. What happens when she falls in love, when she is faced with death, or what about bullies? A long awaited sequel to Scootaloo's dreams
Edited by: Red Tear (Subtle R)
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yay!
yay moar
Glad to see the happy ending sequel come out before the sad retelling of "Scootaloo's Dreams"
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There was never a sad redo of Dreams, this is what is connected thrugh
Add to Read Later...
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What about the chapter "Apart from Reality" what's that?
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The intro to this story
Interesting start...
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Your profile picture makes me smile
Excellent.
OK when it said the boy I thought back to the flashback chapter when they escaped and her friend died. Now the next question which will probably be explained is what boy? Star?
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I can't tell you that, read some of the adoption chapters
And yay, it's here! Moar to read
Can't really discuss the flow now since it's only the beginning of the story, however there were a few very minor typos (by minor I mean capitalisation). Though that didn't make the story any less yaysome.
Now to wait for more
OMG!
Sequel!? 
SEEEEEEEEEEEQUEEEEEEEEEEL!
1:37pm... 13:37... I see what you did there (if it was unintentional then you are even more awesome).
Well let's see how this all will shape up.
dude. this story is taking a very interesting turn. i approve of this. waiting for more
I think I got two followers from you saying I edited, and to be frank, I love it.
YOU
YOU
YOU EVEN USED
/THAT/ SONG
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You my broman, you my bro...I always keep my bros good.
2044860 and you my bitch
I kid.
Thanks a ton, man
You really need to get me in on this.
SephirthStrife@yahoo.com
Gdocs it, I need to fix a few things
OH FUCK, YOU KILLED OFF MY OTHER OC.
PLOT TWIST
OH GOD
I REALLY DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING
AT.
ALL.
I WANNA KNOW HOW RAMPAGE WAS INVOLVED WITH HER ROOM-MATES
SINCE RED ISN'T HER ROOM MATE.
YOU'VE GOT ME HOOKED
FUCK YOU
Like always, you and I have very different tastes in music.
Liking this, though. Keep it up!
Nuuuuuuuuuuuu! Not the sads!
I SENSE A CLOPFICCCCC~
Nah bro, I'd /definitely/ camp out in a girl's room.
God dammit, you literary genius.
CLIFFHANGER OH GOD YES
MESSAGE ME FOR THE SONG PLS I WANNA KNOW
METALMETALMETALMETAL HAS TO BE METAL
2161646 you know I don't write clop.
I bet you would camp in a girls room
METALMETALMETALMETALISGONNABEMETAL.
Why would you capitalize it like that?
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i guess it seems to be better for me.
2165201 So is PhilaDelphia the capital of PennSylvania?
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NO CLOP 4 U
hm, what does FAA stands for?
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Fillydelphian Arts Academy.
Is red somepony we should know from the first fic or a new character?
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SYou should know him from the first fic....he was a minor character back then.
I'm noticing a lot of typing mistakes with this story. To name a few examples:
Between there and Red should be before.
No space after the comma.
Period should be a comma.
And you repeatedly fail to capitalize the word I.
I recommend leaving a chapter for a day of two after you finish writing it; Read through it after some time has passed and you'll see many mistakes you didn't catch while writing. Alternatively, you could immediately send it to someone else to look over and correct mistakes. I would be willing to do this if you want me to, though be aware that my English isn't perfect either, as it isn't my native language.
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thanks for the help, I'll work on that.
SNUFF OHMYGOD I FLUTTERED MYSELF I LOVE THAT SONG UUUUGGGHHH
2168310 I'm /supposed/ to be his editor.
Still, he hasn't facking sent me the Gdocs. I am a typical Grammar Nazi, and can correct 99% of the common mistakes.
Thanks for the input!
You couldn't just...wait? Stop pushing yourself so hard.
I'm editing now
lol. Pitch Perfect quote made the chapter 20% cooler.
2180116 glad you caught that.
The story is progressing nicely.
I didn't get to the end of the chapter, but hey. I got most of it edited
While your story is amazing, there are a few things you could do to make it even better. One, you could get someone, or yourself, to look over your chapters and fix grammar errors. I am seeing many instances where there is no space after the period or a lower-case "I" where there shouldn't be. Two, you could work on some transitions. There are sections of chapters with mediocre or no transitions at all. It makes it seem rushed.
2205469 Ugh, I apologize. Again, I'm the assigned editor --though for mostly grammar--, and I've been on vacation for the past week and a half