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Is spike big as celestia or what
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Hes as tall as she is standing on hind legs
The writing is mah, but the idea is good!
6/10
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Hey glad you liked it and sorry if it felt rush I'll rectify it next chapter
I need more
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Please do. I like reading Spike X Celestia stories in most settings, but there's really, a lot , of info missing from this chapter, as well as some grammar issues.
The unnecessary loss of power from Celestia, no explanation or questioning about the bidding spell on the game, and no questions about Celestia's motivation for even making the bet in the first place are at the top of my list. Of course, I can guess her reason is, Twilight, related, but to go from - serious bet, to you lose, a kiss, then suck me dick - was one hell of a jump!
At least feel her up first!
Again, like the idea! Can't say that enough!
Just take some more time on the execution.
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Lol in do time heh though for the answer of the question of what the hell the loss kiss bj, honestly just felt like it, thr bet motivation yeah twilight of course. But thats the fun bit of motivation to continue on lol
Hmm good chapter. Can't wait for the rest... If I had to guess about what Twilight might have did... It'd be... That she slept with or stared to go out with Rarity... I love Spike x Celestia fics so I really can't wait to see where this all leads. I'm hoping for a King/Prince Spike ending where he marries her... Hopefully this doesn't go down one of the darker paths... Anyway all hail King Spike the Dominator of The Sun!
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Heh well i got some ideas of what's goj g on
Almost seems like the chapter was translated.
Commissioned
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hmm?
So Twilight either sleep with Rarity (his girlfriend finally) or as his girlfriend was with another stallion
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Clever girl
Oh I love dominating celestia!!! Hope she hates it for a while but she’ll probably like it eventually. Imagine all the humiliation opportunities. She may end up cleaning bathrooms for him. Princess celestia cleaning bathroom! Lol
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She can't honestly expect him to open up that easily, especially when its so easy for her not to believe him when he tells her how he was treated... And thats why, when she gains his trust and he's grown to accept her, I'd have her cast a memory viewing spell to see what he went through, because, again, if he simply said it, it'd be dismissed as lies and exaggerations, not to mention the things he might not remember to say at that exact moment... And it'd be even better if the spell makes her live the entierty of those memories, all in the blink in an eye... But I'm just babbeling at this point
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Well, that's definitely an interesting idea i'll have to remember that.
Good Chapter I can't wait for more. And here's to hoping He knocks her up!
While the glove was cool, it really only worked with racing games an, funnily enough, that one aircraft game that was impossible to land on with the normal control.
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lol why I used it and thought it was pretty funny XD Plus was listening to the Avgn while writing the first chapter while he talked about the power glove and it just kind of wrote it in, before deciding I need to use this later XD
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Also the game was top gun
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Was pretty sure it was that, though Hot Shots was also going through my head.
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It also for some reason seems to be useful against dark link at the end of Zelda 2 for since AVNG was able to beat said boss by waving his hand around with his back turned to the tv.
This has been a very interesting read. I love the writing, which makes me all the more torn about how silly the premise was. But we're here now, at the heart of the matter, as it were. Let's see where it goes.
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Heh well I'm glad you like it even if the concept seems Silly X3, i try and do a good job, and there will be more to come with this. The story going to be around 30,000 words
I may not be a Mario fan, but I respect it/him, unlike a sorten block game. And Luna had chose poorly.
I will say that this is an interesting story. But it needs some work. The grammar and spelling could use improvement.
Take this paragraph for example.
Here’s a few corrections I’ve made.
See where you can improve?
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Not the concept, but the way it started. Why the heck did Celestia make such a bet when she seems otherwise against the whole situation? That's what I mean by 'Well, here we are. Let's enjoy the ride', lol. That said, Luna's chapter was adorable, I hope to see more gaming with her.
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Heh yeah, though I was when writing imagining that she was doing this cause she figured she would win, and she wanted to do what she thought was right, heh, and I'll try and have some gamer luna XD It was a fun chapter to write that's for sure Sometimes people do things without thinking heh.
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Yeah, it definitely does seem better heh. I should've given it more of a look over than what i did. I do apologize and will try and do a lot better on the next chapters. and please have an amazing day
What kind of things do you plan to do to them?
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You'll see, hehe it's definetly going to be fun
Kinda clichè the path you've chosen to go down, not to say I'm uninterested by this chain of events. Can't wait to see the next few chapters.
Reference detected.
Error luna that did not know that Spike is a Speedrun
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Thanks for letting me know ill fix those
Really? Spike actually feels a bit guilty AFTER Celestia told him she was going use the game to FORCE Spike to go back and make good with Twilight regardless of how he said he was treated?
Not what I was expecting... I was kinda hoping after winning he'd make her blow him. Since I kinda saw it as his initiation ritual, but that can happen next chapter.
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trust me I have a good plan for luna XD it won't be disapointing
Maybe he could order Celestia to heat the water for him.
I mean, for someone who controlls the very sun that wouldn't he that hard.
How would he react?
Would he be disgusted? Or rather something like this:
"Good job, Spike! If you want to, I can give you hints on how to play with an princess. I have experience with that, you know."
What could he be thinking? Hmmm...
Careful, she can give you nightmares. Literally.
Isn't Celestia's spell limited to one year? Then Luna is making an big risk, considering how long dragons can live.
I like this story, and this chapter was fun to read.
Well, that would certainly keep them from arguing. Whether it will calm them down remains to be seen.
(Also, it's make out, not make up.)
Because if not there may be packback in the far future.
Maybe it's just me but now he really went a bit too far. Remember Spike, the collars won't bind them forever.
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.
Found an small error:
I believe that should be sun butt, since Celestia is addressed, not Luna.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Yeah, I don't think all the ponies would take it so well. And Spike should maybe worry a bit about what Twilight will end up doing to him after all this. She's not mind-controlled and she's too smart to be caught in that trap.
Niceee
oh boy this is so exciting
What did twilight do to betray him
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You'll find out heh