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Okay, You have my attention.
Fluttershy being guy crazy and wants to get laid most of the time, that's new because I expect something like that from Rarity or Rainbow Dash.
Also are the other rest of the Main 6 in here and also super- hero's....plus why does this story reminds me of that movie, My Super Ex-Girlfriend
Congratz, you got featured. However, I would highly suggest you try and look at your grammar more closely. Too many of your sentences run on and on with no pause, as well.
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i have the same feeling too
awesome chapter my friend it reminds me of my super ex-girlfriend movie keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Plot twist spike is a retired villain and kills Delt
I can really see Applejack as Power Girl, even though I've seen her as SuperMare with Appl Bloom as Superfilly. Definitely getting to see more of this and I will stay tuned!!
Edit: I have to believe that after describing Fluttershy/Iron Maiden, I'm not the only viewer that wants for Spike to meet her like he met Delta/Applejack, just without trashing his hotel room...
This reminds me of that movie... THE SUPER EX... right away... Oo
uhmm also - is that... uh... wait ... Powergirl???? Am i right? My knowledge is fairly...
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Yes it's powergirl heh I couldn't find a great superman version the site would take
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Heh yeah I figured it would be funny for Fluttershy to be like that and it was so spired by the movie
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This was slightly inspired by the movie yeah lol
im very much liking this
You filthy degenerate
Discord is Spike's pal? OK, I did not see that one coming.
Is it wrong I want to see Spike have powers like him having the ability to turn into a giant dragon. Because I'm usually very tired of fanfics making Spike the powerless one and giving the girls super powers. Help the ability form. Turn into a dragon could start out from him witnessing her getting attacked by someone using Kryptonite but instead of being able to bounce back like most could it's actually stabbed into part of her body maybe an arm and Spike's extremely protective instincts kick in scale start covering his arms, he starts sprouting some horns, grows a tail, and gain increased strength. I'm mostly throwing this ideal out there because I like it.
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Lol yeah they are was originally going to be flash sentry but when I made Fluttershy iron maiden I was like fuck it I want to have discord
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Nothing wrong with that heh I mean I was planning the story be an idea of an ordinary guy finding himself in the wild situation of dating his world's Superman . Though it depends on how long I make the story it was originally ment to be more of a short story 10,000 words maybe 15,000 but this thing is getting very popular
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Good for you. I would personally vote Discord over Flash any day of the week.
Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to see how this story goes. Hope we get to the sex scene soon. But a little of having the characters get used to each other is fine too. 😁👍
Interesting concept, with all due respect. You need an editor.
1. Who is Lee? Replace that with he.
2. You don’t need to say reached over towards her purse, just reached into her purse.
3. Spike can examine the check without looking towards it first. Sometimes being direct is the best route to go. No need to pad anything out.
4. The check was blank. I understand this could be spell check. Still have a second or even third look before you publish the chapter.
Because, I’m the hero. I can’t use my powers for personal gain.
Game = a game.
Gain = getting something out of it.
These are just a few examples that you need to improve on. Look up the group looking for editors and post this story in said group. I would offer to edit myself however I work all day.
It’s good don’t get me wrong and I can understand it. Some other people might struggle with it a bit more and be turned off from reading it in the first place. Basically put, it’s good. But it could be better.
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Yeah I'm going to be nice here thank you for pointing out the Lee part. But as for the editor I'm going to give you the same spew I give every person who says I need an editor donate to my patreon. I do this for fun mostly these projects are me having fun I do not have money what money i do have goes to feeding my family. Editors need money to work. Before you say go to a blog here we have editors. The people who would do it for free. Will ether get tired of my fuck ups and quit or get bored. The people who will stay with this to the end will need money which I don't have so i mainly do this myself and stuff gets by me.
So again this is on my time. But I don't mind the criticism but telling me I need an editor pisses me off cause I know but it's not always simple. I also predict you'll say get Grammarly I have that no worries. Thanks for the flaw pointing out I'll fix that when I get home at 1 am
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You can get a free editor here. I'd offer to do it myself, but I don't proofread porn.
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The rules say "You can offer but they can't demand $". They insist on being paid, report them & they'll get kicked out.
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I don’t care what your personal life is or what you do or don’t do. I don’t care whether it’s for fun or not. I was just trying to offer advice from one writer to another. Your personal hookups are your personal hookups.
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That, and the randomcapitalization?
I think this is an awesome story, otherwise!
Why does this remind me of My Super Ex-Girlfriend?
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As I said I had used a couple and all the results bi got was ether they would stop half way. Stopped speaking or at one point one guy I offered and did pay started to get so busy with other stuff I gave up. I do think there might be some on the links you gave me but, if I'm going to get an editor I want to make sure it works out. Why I'm saving up money in hopes of one of my books to get professionally edited
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Cause it was a inspired a bit by it
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Nice. Hopefully the "Ex" part never shows up.
Also is it bad I want to see her letting him dominate her? It kinda sounds hot.
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As far as I know and nothing wrong with wanting that lol though gotta see what happens plus with patreob you can influence the story a bit
10493797 Indeed.
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Easy, you two. Let's not start a fight that needn't be started. And to be honest, Midnight? I'd be fully willing to edit for you, no charge, no catch, no nothing. I can't promise I'll be 100% ready to edit 100% of the time with my own busy schedule being ever present, but nothing says the idea is impossible. However, if you do not wish to talk about the subject of editors for personal reasons, then I apologize. My offer stand nonetheless, though. Your story has potential, as does the rest of your work.
I'd be honored to help edit your stories, if you'd have me.
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I pmed you my answer
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As I said, by that site's rules, you are allowed to offer $, but they are not allowed to ask.
Also, you can use the third link to comment on those who abandoned you. I would.
This is interesting because there are so few female superhero that hook up with normal men. I will follow this story with great interest.
spike is one of them freaks who likes a well done steak. for shame
Is this story anthro
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Humanoid
I like where this is going and I can't wait to read the rest.
Quite an interesting start.
Most excellent.
Will this story have more super heroines then just Fluttershy and Applejack?
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Maybe
I’m having trouble picturing that.
Amazon woman?
Does that mean the two D’s were red or the suit?
What does that mean?
Payment?
Is Applejack Kay and Applejack Lane the same person?
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To ANswer one thing yes Applejack Lane, and Kay are the same person, it's meant as a bit of a joke on SUperman, and Lois lane relationship along with Superman and Clark kent looking alike
awesome chapter my friend like my super exgirlfriend reference cant wait for the next chapter
you can do a story an alraune trying to find love
Alraune
Whoa baby!
Spike is gonna need a new bed and a pelvis cast
Power Girl AJ. Yeah baby!