“I said enough, you two. I want you both to kiss and make up now!”
Well, that would certainly keep them from arguing. Whether it will calm them down remains to be seen. (Also, it's make out, not make up.)
“Now then, I’m sure you’re both feeling much better after that?” He hoped that he was correct.
Because if not there may be packback in the far future.
No one could tell what Spike was saying to their former princess. When Celestia began to have a look of horror on her face but slowly she felt the collar glowing forcing her on as she bent over and began mooning the audience her pussy exposed out for the world to see.
Maybe it's just me but now he really went a bit too far. Remember Spike, the collars won't bind them forever.
Good chapter! I enjoyed reading it.
Found an small error:
“Well, it looks like you lost the bet sister.” Celestia snickered as she watched Luna growl. “Shut it moon butt. I’ll rechallenge him and win.”
I believe that should be sun butt, since Celestia is addressed, not Luna.
Yeah, I don't think all the ponies would take it so well. And Spike should maybe worry a bit about what Twilight will end up doing to him after all this. She's not mind-controlled and she's too smart to be caught in that trap.
So I'm guessing what happen was that Spike caught twilight fooling around with someone he liked and that's why their not on speaking terms. But if they weren't dating and he just had an attraction he's not really justified if the woman liked someone else what can u do but move on.
“Thank you, Officer Lee. Keep up the good work.” She said as The alicorn and Dragon walked into the Princess of the sun’s room. She’d kicked the door in, with a case of pure annoyance as the two swung open. Spike followed behind.
Sooo, not only is there a Stonewall Jackson and Ulysses S. Grant in the Royal Guard, but now a Robert E. Lee.
How much you wanna bet that they butt heads each chance they get
Well, that would certainly keep them from arguing. Whether it will calm them down remains to be seen.
(Also, it's make out, not make up.)
Because if not there may be packback in the far future.
Maybe it's just me but now he really went a bit too far. Remember Spike, the collars won't bind them forever.
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.
Found an small error:
I believe that should be sun butt, since Celestia is addressed, not Luna.
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Yeah, I don't think all the ponies would take it so well. And Spike should maybe worry a bit about what Twilight will end up doing to him after all this. She's not mind-controlled and she's too smart to be caught in that trap.
Niceee
oh boy this is so exciting
What did twilight do to betray him
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You'll find out heh
So I'm guessing what happen was that Spike caught twilight fooling around with someone he liked and that's why their not on speaking terms. But if they weren't dating and he just had an attraction he's not really justified if the woman liked someone else what can u do but move on.
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Maybe though there is a lot more to it than would be expected and sometimes a betrayal can hurt just as much as a heart break
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So..........when IS the next chapter.
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I'm writing the new chapter right now
Rereading the tags makes me feel like the main 6 trying to challenge spike even tho that's sounds strange
This is so rushed, and so many. Grammer issues. sentance fragments. it's almost impossible to read.
If this was my commission I'd want my money back! Get at least 2 proofreaders!
Sooo, not only is there a Stonewall Jackson and Ulysses S. Grant in the Royal Guard, but now a Robert E. Lee.
How much you wanna bet that they butt heads each chance they get
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