9595169 Please do. I like reading Spike X Celestia stories in most settings, but there's really, a lot , of info missing from this chapter, as well as some grammar issues.
The unnecessary loss of power from Celestia, no explanation or questioning about the bidding spell on the game, and no questions about Celestia's motivation for even making the bet in the first place are at the top of my list. Of course, I can guess her reason is, Twilight, related, but to go from - serious bet, to you lose, a kiss, then suck me dick - was one hell of a jump! At least feel her up first!
Again, like the idea! Can't say that enough! Just take some more time on the execution.
9595264 Lol in do time heh though for the answer of the question of what the hell the loss kiss bj, honestly just felt like it, thr bet motivation yeah twilight of course. But thats the fun bit of motivation to continue on lol
Hmm good chapter. Can't wait for the rest... If I had to guess about what Twilight might have did... It'd be... That she slept with or stared to go out with Rarity... I love Spike x Celestia fics so I really can't wait to see where this all leads. I'm hoping for a King/Prince Spike ending where he marries her... Hopefully this doesn't go down one of the darker paths... Anyway all hail King Spike the Dominator of The Sun!
Is spike big as celestia or what
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Hes as tall as she is standing on hind legs
The writing is mah, but the idea is good!
6/10
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Hey glad you liked it and sorry if it felt rush I'll rectify it next chapter
I need more
9595169
Please do. I like reading Spike X Celestia stories in most settings, but there's really, a lot , of info missing from this chapter, as well as some grammar issues.
The unnecessary loss of power from Celestia, no explanation or questioning about the bidding spell on the game, and no questions about Celestia's motivation for even making the bet in the first place are at the top of my list. Of course, I can guess her reason is, Twilight, related, but to go from - serious bet, to you lose, a kiss, then suck me dick - was one hell of a jump! At least feel her up first!
Again, like the idea! Can't say that enough!
Just take some more time on the execution.
9595264
Lol in do time heh though for the answer of the question of what the hell the loss kiss bj, honestly just felt like it, thr bet motivation yeah twilight of course. But thats the fun bit of motivation to continue on lol
Hmm good chapter. Can't wait for the rest... If I had to guess about what Twilight might have did... It'd be... That she slept with or stared to go out with Rarity... I love Spike x Celestia fics so I really can't wait to see where this all leads. I'm hoping for a King/Prince Spike ending where he marries her... Hopefully this doesn't go down one of the darker paths... Anyway all hail King Spike the Dominator of The Sun!
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Heh well i got some ideas of what's goj g on
Almost seems like the chapter was translated.
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What I'm trying to say is... I think it escalated too quickly. Where is this coming from? What is this coming from?