Twilight Sparkle wakes to a wasteland. Equestria as she knows it has been destroyed. Twilight must find out how this happened, and she must fight through a toxic gas that changes ponies into something unrecognizable to do it. Are her friends alive?
In an awkward double date Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy accidentally set on us a terrifying demon. They're going to need all power of friendship and lack of sanity to stop it.
Author, I am guessing English is not your first language. I can sort of follow the plot, but it is difficult. Did you translate this from an existing Friendship is Magic fanfiction that was written in another language? The 'flow' or 'style' of the writing here reads like it was. The sentence structure is weird. It would make sense if it was directly translated from a language with a different sentence order of noun, verb, and adjective.
Author, I am guessing English is not your first language. I can sort of follow the plot, but it is difficult. Did you translate this from an existing Friendship is Magic fanfiction that was written in another language? The 'flow' or 'style' of the writing here reads like it was. The sentence structure is weird. It would make sense if it was directly translated from a language with a different sentence order of noun, verb, and adjective.
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Yes, I tried to translate my own fanfiction to English. And No, English is not my first language.
Me and my lector did our best to translate it, but it was the best we could do.