A family rivalry, a young filly taken from her home, a war going on behind the scenes of canterlot's nobility. All of these are tied into the recent attempted kidnapping of Scootaloo. Who would kidnap the young pegasus? Where are her real parents? Who killed the kidnapper? Why? All these questions Private Eye will have to answer. But in a world where lies and death are as common as air can Private survive?
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was the opining referencing the fact that people hated Indiana Jones and the crystal skull because of the refrigerator?
1250075I'm the only person on the planet willing to overlook that scene to just enjoy the whole package. But yeah, a fan like dash would've freaked out at lot of the changes.
1250081
you are not the only one i overlook that scene
i heard that the main reason that scene is hated because its unrealistic
i have one question if that's the case
if they hate that scene because it was unrealistic, then why are they okay with the fact that in part 2 some one can get their heart ripped out without a cut being left and still live?
1250095I know!!
It's so annoying!
1250135
but there is one thing i found out about in the 4th movie a few years after watching that ticks me
why is India's father dead he drank from the Holy Grail
1250135
wait shouldn't this Indiana Jones discussion be through pm's and not a comment section for an L.A. Noir mlp crossover?
1250150Very true...
1250150either way what do you think of the actual story so far?
1250180
read this expresion
... wow .... dont know what to say
1250699Is that a good thing or bag thing?
The science behind the refrigerator is that refrigerator stunt is that refrigerators have a layer or lining (or something like that) of lead. Lead can protect you from radiation. Of course, hollywood has it's flaws: a fridge wouldnt protect you from the actual explosion and even I'd you weren't in the explosion, how do you survive the radiation once outside the fridge?
But I also overlook that scene because its fiction so it doesn't need to be realistic.
1250702
at this point neither. I am likeing what you are doing with the we-have-no-idea-about-scoots-family situation and its a take ive never heard or thought of before
1250734Well, I hope you enjoy the rest of the series as well
1250731Let's not get into another Indiana Jones discussion I just finished up with Rainbow
Damn, we're late to the party. Oh well.
Another great case starting! Tailspin is like Spike to Rarity. Scoots seems really uncomfortable with it.
GOOD. SHE DESERVED TO GET DRUGGED.
...I really hate you, you know that Phsyco Me?
"Am I the only pony in the world that thought that “Daring Do and the Sanctuary of Doom” was the worst of the lot?"
Wow, you nailed me and my mother's opinion with that line.
Cough...anyway...
This story seems pretty interesting. I'm hoping we get some more personal info on our lead soon.
1252228
I guess even dragon shouts aren't enough to stop pyscho you...
1252394All in the next chapter my friend
I'm going to be honest. I think about the story a for a fair bit after reading one. Only my favorite media has done that to me before *wink wink.* Well... those and... Slenderman blogs...
*crash*
And that was my fourth wall. I need to go see what did that. For some reason I have a bad feeling about this.
1253112
Damn it Pinkie! How many times do we have to tell you to stop touching that forth wall!!
oopsie
1253119 It's okay! I can fix it! I've done it before.
1253175thank goodness
Funny images that popped into my head while reading this.
Bloods and Cripz war in Manehatten (Pegasi v Earth/Unicorn)
Scootaloo being like Michael Corleone at the end of The Godfather I as the head of the family.
Is that a song Raiden is singing, or did you make it up?
Also, Twilightfangasm!
aand cum
1253808The whole Pegasi vs. Unicorns is acutally based on the situation in West Side Story, as for the song well...here's a video
One major thing I would like to point out. Pegasi is the plural form of pegasus, so you shouldn't use it when you're referring to just one pegasus pony.
1254394could you point out a specific part so I can fix it?
1254427
"...it was in the papers that one of the family members went against tradition and married a Pegasi..."
"I wasn’t going to tell him that the guards were a socially awkward unicorn and a doormat Pegasi."
In both these cases, you're using Pegasi when it should be Pegasus because in both cases, you're referring to a singular.
1254564Thanks for the edit I'm on it
That is totally how RD would react lol
1255894You would to if you saw a pegasus flying around while playing the electric guitar
1257951
lol a definite possibility
Ah, fourth wall jokes.
Breaking the boundaries and
/shades
laws of reality.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
1259135Damn it!
Just when I thought I could be free of that joke!
1259138
i'm sorry (puts on shades) but that joke will follow you to your grave
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Curse you Jacoboby! Now I have to fix the fourth wall again...
Lol the ending made me think "OMG THEY'RE IN THE MATRIX!!!!"
1260205Blame Rainbow Dash I had nothing to do with it this time!
1261072
But you're the auth... actually, you're making perfect sense.
Anyways, I think I'll put in the extra effort and reinforce it this time. Pinkie's hijinks are bad enough, and I want to minimize future frustration.
1261137Thank Celestia Deadpool didn't show up...
Oh I should invite him to!
Get back here Pinkie!
1261437
If that happens I'll go crazy...
Wait... Idea! I will tear down the fourth wall, and build it again from the ground up, and this time I'm using top-quality materials!
1261483 tried that.
Season two: Pinkie still broke the fourth wall.
1267291
To be perfectly honest, I just tried Dash-proofed it (I finished a while ago). I've accepted that, with the tools I have available it is impossible to Pinkie-proof the thing. To be honest, I don't mind Pinkie doing it, since the results are usually entertaining.
1267367 well... I suppose Dash-proofing it is sufficient enough...
You know, this just occurred to me but...what kind of self-respecting unicorn family (especially if one of their defining traits is deep-seated anti-pegasus sentiment) would call themselves the Loftwing family?
1267920No honest clue...then again the name is older then the conflict itself. Maybe it's just that way as an ironic statement
First rule of assassination...kill the assassin...
I like this!
1269030Why thank you
1269030
unless the assassin is best known for killing over 30 other assassins
You...didnt message me...
Ah well, thats what I get for forgetting to favourite the story. Now tracking.
Also, I wonder will Private and his da have an awkward reunion.
And Scootaloo see her family. That would be double awkward.