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Ouch that sucks having a baby pony. I am surprised that diapers haven't fully been implemented yet but hopefully they will have them soon.
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Since this all seems to be the migration into Riverview and Devon is talking about the busride here it might be safe to assume that this is happening before the conclusion of the last story. That means they aren't even a month past the end of ETS. That might make things like diapers for ponies pretty hard to find yet.
I want to see what goes on with Tattered Wing. She seems to have a lot to make up for. Like the continuity with the Aftermath where the ponies there were talking about problems with the night ponies in the south, guess we know what those were now.
Hey! Congrats on getting featured!
"Find out who our neighbors are"
The "N" in harness seems missing several times, each one past its first mention.
"Her daughter's mess"
I love this mare. Like Fred Turner, Sarah Tanner, and her nephew Robert, and Remedy's father, she's seems to have made it through ETS unscathed more than most ponies have. I mean, her reactions are more natural, like the forced psychological alterations didn't affect her, or she does a good job at resisting them. Like the ones I mentioned, she didn't immediately leap at the chance to throw her name in the trash and fully adapt a new one. "That woman is dead." These kinds of ponies are the minority, but it's good to see they aren't scarce overall. Plus, how often do ETS victims miss their hands?
She also seems content to look at Devon as another person, period, and does not constantly draw attention to the species of every individual. It annoys me in reality when race is always mentioned in nearly every conversation when talking about just about anybody. Unless you are filing a police report, race is not relevant to any conversation, save medical consensuses, as some are at higher risk of this and that.
I also love how this chapter does away with, or downplays the inherent pony superiority that was none too subtly implied in the original, that all beings are effectively ponies in waiting, and the final form. The universe favors ponies more than the heroes want to admit. It's almost like the Consequences tale. I'm glad this averts some of that. Still messed up with the nocturnal/nonnocturnal thing. Real Equestrians have more range to them, and diversity among tribes. The tribal aspect is unfortunately embedded here far too deeply.
I was wondering why you didn't bring it up
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Yes, I showed the art to some friends and they said "so, GTA: Equestria?" And I was like "No...", and then I looked at the boxart for GTA and said to myself "OMG, I need a disclaimer."
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Oh, it was commissioned, Mr Tech was the artist.
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I'm like the art as well. That's definitely Tattered Wing at the top, you can see her scars when you zoom in on the picture. Wild Growth would be the green pony obviously, as well as the human obviously being Devon. Pretty sure the foal on the right is Robby. Top left corner has me a little confused, that is obviously Devon, but the pony is too big to be Robby. Interested in the flag that is flying in the top right; is Sunset Blessing going to stage her own independence movement?
awesome start to the sequel i will defiantly be watching close for updates.
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Fixed.
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I'm liking where this is going so far. Looking forward to more chapters.
Obligatory Upvote.
9087632 Side question, is there a reason this isn't in the canon section yet?
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Don't think ASGeek has gotten around to reading it yet, and I have only released two chapters so far. Two more coming on Friday.
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Noted
All kinds of feelings of sympathy, warmth, and uncertainties. I'm loving this! It gets me wanting to imagine Devon as a human teacher in a pony major majority school. Helping keep the fears of humans out of the minds of foals. Aftermath needs human teachers in those harmonist places. It's a good start here for the southern ponies. A little more preferable than the future condition of pony hope to me.