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Looking at the images Tonya looks so like an adult Scootaloo it is very scary. I wonder how everyone on Earth react to the CMC?
Feeling pity for humans because they don’t have access to pony magic. I going to to repeat what I’ve said before here and on the main story, what about the prospect of human magic. At the end of the first story Twilight said that humanity was a millennia away from it’s own magical awakening. I feel however that being around other magic users as well as whatever EST may or may not have done will act as a catalyst for boosting magic development in humans, after all Sunset was herself unaware about humanities own magic potential so how do we know that ETS didn’t give it a boost. How will ponies who feel superior to humans because they can do magic or ponies like Tonya who feel pity because they can’t, react when humans can do their own magic. This is something that will need addressing before long and the outcome is something I’m personally looking forward to.
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Considering there are over 400 million ponies on Earth and 50 million or so on Equestria I am pretty sure that there are very few ponies in Equestria that don't have a close look-alike on Earth.
tanya is the worst possible mind control magic user.
A user who is week willed enough to be manipulated by a psychopath. (Sunset blessing)
First line of the second part, “a bit of drool”.
Also, “all and all” is an original expression to me. I am more familiar with “all in all”.
The second paragraph seems to have a run on in the middle.
When Robbie first speaks, his sentence does not have a “who” in it.
Tonya did not use the word “like” when she spoke about keeping gender disphoria mum.
I really like Number Crunch now, since she can speak German. Just kidding I already started to like her in "Pandemic: What you are meant to be" and this increased when she showed in this store, that she feels guilty for threatening Phobia.
But I really like the fact that she can speak so many languages and also German. I mean there aren't many Fanfictions that speak about anything related to Germany or sometimes speak of something related to Germany in a negative way, since many people hate our country. But I really like it that you gave Number Crunch the knowledge to speak German. That fact shows Germany in at least some kind of positive light. As a native German guy, I thank you for not showing our country in a bad light.
And also keep your work on this Fanfiction up. I really enjoy reading it.